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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | FadrikAlexander's comment | |
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| Oct 6 06:41:53 | The Jolly Journey of J.J.'s Jelly-Jamventure | ♥ 3 | The Game is fun and I was for some reason stuck on the level 6, and I replayed it twice. Things that I've notice if you find a cool way to introduce the enemies rather than reading the story section and it was fun read. the animations are great, but the jump needs some work, when creating platformers that jumping in them you need to make sure that the time to reach the top of the jump should be half the time of it from the top till landing which makes the jump feels smooth and not snappy like in your case, give it a shot. Overall fun game and interesting play on the theme, it reminded me of that game on the old phone the red ball adventures hhhhh | |
| Oct 6 09:15:01 | 2h 33m | Right Side Up | ♥ 4 | The Game idea is solid and nice although the Physics need some work |
| Oct 6 09:33:11 | 18m 10s | Dungeon Loop | ♥ 1 | The game is enjoyable and the boss was nice to kill, and the mushroom I just hate it LOL XD The Graphic is good for a programmer art and the whole feel of the game is nice, I found some minor bugs here and there like bullets and enemies go through walls and some rooms are just empty I don't know if this is a bug or on purpose. having the player shoot in burst is a bit annoying for my taste I would prefer shooting constantly and having a low rate of fire, but it's not a game breaking thing just a small notice, also the controls seem backward in the modern shooting games we move by the left hand and shoot in the right, again just a small notice. and round the Blood don't leave it shown to the player in a float variable if you want to be this specific use a slider bar, it would look cooler. A small advice in the end because you're active in the comments and seems to care, consider working more on the presentation of the game no matter how beginner are you. and I know it's a game jam so it may not apply here, but the game should always have a main menu of some sort to ease the player in, also it should have some feedback to the player like the enemy remaining health or a sound or a reaction when we hit the player or when the player gets hurt, these small things here and there can take you're level to the next level. and the game presentation go even further by working on your game page choose a cool font, add some screenshots, some nice lines to hype the game. you can check my game page here and on itch.io for some reference https://fadrikalexander.itch.io/underloop (I can't post the LD link due to rules) Overall the game experience was great and If you have any questions don't hesitate to ask. PS: Lol I really liked the Google challenge |
| Oct 6 09:50:40 | 17m 29s | The Witch's Tower | ♥ 0 | The Game concept is but I didn't really get the game or how the turrets shoot the art, mood and the music are on point great job there Untitled.jpg and I seem that I broke the game everytime I press Space a turret spawn and I have nearly infinite turrest lol and this happens from the start of the level maybe it's putting turrets down but you forget to make the money go down or something, pls ping me if you fix it I would love to give it another shot |
| Oct 6 12:19:46 | 2h 29m | 15 Seconds time cop | ♥ 2 | Nice graphics, the gameplay Idea was pretty good but didn't work for me that much. |
| Oct 6 12:28:54 | 9m 08s | Stuck on the Train | ♥ 3 | Solid Game, super fun especially the dialogues. I hate the fact that I can't jump out of the window lol, nice game and I find myself just moving around really fast and pressing E to just complete the game. and you have the same problem that I had in my entry, the player getting the items before even needing them I was like why I need the Gameboy now, this small game design issue really got me upset and I couldn't solve it. |
| Oct 6 13:19:14 | 50m 20s | BULLETS FROM THE PAST | ♥ 2 | at first I was like the game is really slow but then that slowness became my ally lol, the game is great can take a bit of making a bit faster but other than that a nice experience, I've made it to round 12. |
| Oct 6 13:29:21 | 10m 07s | ME! vs the unrelenting alien invasion | ♥ 2 | “Bob is very disapointed” That alians destroyed the earth LoL XD it was me all along stupid Bob XD nice game and I got stuck in a dialogue loop in the tutorial I don't know if that was intentional lol |
| Oct 6 13:39:05 | 9m 44s | Stix | ♥ 1 | It was really just a game about collecting sticks. |
| Oct 6 13:50:16 | 11m 11s | Until All Ends | ♥ 1 | The game is fun and chaotic, it would be more fun if you allowed us to build and lead the army. Also it crashed white screen after the meteor fell from the sky |
| Oct 6 18:02:14 | 4h 11m | Tower Knight | ♥ 1 | Nice game took half an hour of my life lol |
| Oct 9 08:14:48 | 62h 12m | Color Loop | ♥ 2 | I found selecting the colors are a bit difficult at first trying to memorize which key to which color, the concept is great but if you can maybe make the game a bit more accessible in the gameplay. |
| Oct 9 08:16:15 | 1m 27s | BagJam | ♥ 1 | Pretty cool concept, I found it a bit overwhelming when I had like three machines and a dozen bags lol, it was fun |
| Oct 9 08:16:57 | 42s | 12-to-6 Shift | ♥ 1 | reminded of my time learning Sketch, nice game. |
| Oct 9 08:25:34 | 8m 37s | Idol | ♥ 1 | The controls can be a bit tighter, but the game is great and the concept is solid. After I got the idol a painting showed up and the screen froze I don't if it's a bug or I completed the game. |
| Oct 9 11:33:38 | 3h 08m | Space Loop Kit | ♥ 1 | Lovely concept but the enemies shoots way too much. |
| Oct 10 09:59:55 | 22h 26m | T.A.P.E. Acquiring Proof Expertly | ♥ 1 | the first code took me forever to figure out and after digging up the code I found that I had the right answer but the first letter was Uppercase, you shouldn't really make the answer case sensitive, when my answer was actually made more sense because a Store name should be Uppercase in the start of its words. other than that I enjoyed the game and the concept was amazing, congratz on your first jam <3 |
| Oct 10 18:30:27 | 8h 30m | Donut Island | ♥ 2 | What a nice game and very addicting, I don't have the time to reach the eternal hall of glory but it was a fun couple of turns |
| Oct 14 17:42:41 | 95h 12m | Hyperloop | ♥ 1 | Great fun game, how did you achieve this level of graphic did you use any packages in unity other than the post-processing one? |
| Oct 14 18:00:23 | 17m 42s | Wieder | ♥ 1 | I really Liked the art style of the game, and I found a bug where you can go through cars in the driving sections |
| Oct 14 18:02:17 | 1m 54s | Gold Mine And Infamy | ♥ 1 | I love the concept of the game, but the game showed really small on my screen and I don't know if there is a bug but ton of enemes are on the gold and nothing happened. Untitled.jpg and the Gold would make sense to be in the middle of the screen than being on the right |
| Oct 16 06:45:15 | 36h 42m | Unknown Factory | ♥ 0 | I really like the innovation in this entry, needs a bit more works but it's solid, well done! |
| Oct 16 06:48:25 | 3m 10s | Unchangeable | ♥ 0 | The game lagged at the start but it was really a fun experience, love the GameBoy style! |
| Oct 16 06:53:28 | 5m 03s | Bee, leave it or knot | ♥ 1 | it's a good snake game but you missed the main "looping" mechanic of snake games when you exit the screen it loops to the other side. The game is fun, the flowers spawning in the corner are nearly impossible to get with how fast the game is going, and no bugs found. |
| Oct 16 07:11:19 | 17m 51s | Mocksha | ♥ 0 | I spent more time than I expected in this game, it's a solid game but the lack of feedback really broke it for me, it just seem to die in your sleep and loop again without know if your interactions were right. could you please share a guide for it I would to know the story or the ending. |
| Oct 16 08:47:14 | 1h 35m | Just Another Day | ♥ 1 | the only sad thing, that the game was really short other than that really well done. |
| Oct 16 15:11:16 | 6h 24m | Energy Flow | ♥ 1 | what an amazing idea!! |
| Oct 17 05:28:05 | 14h 16m | SpaceMan | ♥ 1 | Loved it, but sadly I reached a point that I was stuck without finding how many gems are there, or how to get into the ship |
| Oct 17 05:36:03 | 7m 58s | Outside The Loop | ♥ 1 | The Game is nice, but it took me a while your realize that I had to jump into the shrines maybe have them in different color? |
| Oct 17 05:41:34 | 5m 31s | Car Looper | ♥ 1 | The time limit for me seems unnecessary it took from the fun puzzle feel of the game, other than that a solid entry |
| Oct 17 05:51:22 | 9m 48s | Loop Frogs | ♥ 1 | Pretty good and fun puzzle game I really enjoyed it <3 |
| Oct 17 05:56:06 | 4m 44s | Group Chat | ♥ 1 | lol what a nice experience, the character gave me the wizard of Oz feeling lol |
| Oct 17 06:15:56 | 19m 50s | Woofice Chair! | ♥ 3 | it took me a solid min to figure out that I have always mash the space button but the game is really awesome from the art to the music to the programming all around great experience |
| Oct 17 07:19:37 | 1h 03m | Suitcase Panic | ♥ 2 | The concept is really great but the bag just pile up and up lol I was like where is the bag that I need hhhhh nice game |
| Oct 18 08:00:56 | 24h 41m | Revenge of Loopy the Turtle | ♥ 1 | LoL what an idea XD but the gameplay is spammy and you may die if something just spawn infront of you |
| Oct 18 08:02:46 | 1m 50s | Looped | ♥ 1 | a little fun game, it took me a while to notice that I can move, but having the balls when hit get smaller not on the center is really annoying making the rest of the bullets to miss |
| Oct 18 08:04:00 | 1m 14s | Singularity | ♥ 2 | Holy .... this need to be a full game and even fun as a board game, the puzzle element here is great when you have to think about which card to use to not just advance forward but to not let the AI skip you. SOLID GAAAAAME |
| Oct 18 08:15:29 | 11m 29s | Time Saver | ♥ 2 | I don't if it's bugged or no but if we just spam killing the first enemies over and over again we can get all the time needed to complete the game,and btw cool idea! |
| Oct 18 08:24:22 | 8m 53s | A Night Around the Fire | ♥ 1 | lol the hiding mechanic is awesome, nice game and the mood is just on point! |
| Oct 18 08:25:44 | 1m 22s | Falling Forever | ♥ 0 | The UI needs a bit more work, but the game is fun and the humor got me cracking at many point lol, nice entry and the art remined me of my old MS paint days when I discovered the spray can XD really great |
| Oct 18 08:27:30 | 1m 46s | Hamster Simulator | ♥ 1 | Oh god the art is great lol, this is just scream how much the game can be simple and just as fun, great Entry! made it to level 29 before giving up |
