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Rat Game

By pachino55, Halki and Tastical

View on ldjam.com

CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall7933.2972
Fun5803.3572
Innovation9972.5371
Theme5113.7272
Graphics7383.3272
Audio3963.4169
Humor2423.5872
Mood7123.3371

Comments

world-search-you 2024-10-07 22:58

When the mouse trap fell on my head in the first level I had flashbacks to Cat Mario (does that make this game Rat Mario?)

brotherbrody 2024-10-07 23:02

After the first falling mouse trap I was almost expecting a Mario Kaizo type game, so I was surprised to see the later levels were so simplistic. Something that would be nice to add to a platformer like this would be 'coyote time' so that running and jumping off of the edge of a platform doesn't feel as difficult!

ftz 2024-10-08 04:46

The music and art was great, the player movement/physics/collision could be better.

For platforms I use this as a good reference: https://gmtk.itch.io/platformer-toolkit

coopizcool 2024-10-08 05:33

That falling mouse trap kept me on my toes and then i stayed on my toes. If that makes sense... Regardless for the jumps on the wall, try using composite colliders. Helped me before. Neat story

bearcage 2024-10-08 05:39

Congrats on finishing the jam and thanks for sharing your game!

Cute game — my favorite bit is the cat sprite though, which sorta makes the first level hard-mode — it's tricky to keep him on-screen without dying :-P.

I noticed an oddity around mid-air collision: it seems like when you come into contact with a wall it zeroes out both components of your motion vector as long as you're holding the x-axis movement key into the obstacle, even if you're midair. It seems like maybe it's setting velocity to zero instead of just velocity.x?

Some of those jumps were pretty tricky to get just right — I also enjoyed the bits of dynamic puzzle with the other rat and the falling trap — with the quick levels and fast retry times it's satisfying to run repeatedly and learn the timing.

gaudy 2024-10-08 10:14

I liked the music in this game, I liked the lvl design, especially when a mousetrap falls on you at the first level, I thought there would be more moments where you need to memorize the path, but this did not happen, I still did not have enough jump animation, and so I really liked the music, lvl design, graphics

zhaoyin 2024-10-08 12:43

Nice little platformer game! I like the setting and the art style. However, I did notice the lack of some platformer QoL features like coyote time and a jump buffer. Those are small additions that turn a good platformer into a great one.

hangovergames 2024-10-08 13:31

Nice platformer! Here is a tip for ya, use interpolation on rigidbody to get rid of vibrating effect. you can also add gravity multiplyer if y speed is less then zero, with this jump will fill better , more live and snappy

trioxxdreaper 2024-10-08 15:08

just i got a flashback when i got kill by the sky but it's really cool

memz 2024-10-08 15:08

Fairly decent platformer. A bit repetitive once you get to the later levels, but some of the jumps did feel fairly difficult.

radiorat 2024-10-08 15:47

A good platformer with a fun story

johnnysix 2024-10-08 17:27

This was great - I loved the level of detail, especially in the kitchen level . Great art style too.

Your cat had some super realistic sound fx, I need to add some to mine. :smile:

kirass 2024-10-08 17:37

I really liked this game! It's awesome!

radjax 2024-10-09 03:05

Nice work! I loved the art. The cat sprite was fantastic, it totally caught me off guard. The vibrating when walking and colliders next to walls were the only things I noticed that could use some work, otherwise great!

davidsheadgames 2024-10-09 05:58

"Cool. We date now."

"Yay"

I love that the piano follows the dialogue.

Thank you for making the game forgiving and letting you retry the level on death.

The platforming is a bit rough, but I appreciate the effort in jamming this out :mouse:

hotaloca 2024-10-09 05:58

The art and the music was really nice and cute. The controls somehow felt off for me a bit. I loved the cat and that it continue to push you to make progress faster :)

pppppppp 2024-10-09 05:58

An interesting game that uses a mouse as a perspective to represent tiny animals. I find it very interesting to escape from the pursuit of cats while avoiding obstacles reasonably! I invite you to try my game too

poboy 2024-10-09 06:01

One day I wish to be as forward and direct as Ratony

God-tier story and I am so glad. I cried, it was beautiful

leitdorf 2024-10-09 12:12

Very cute game, very nice graphics :)

frogcula 2024-10-09 15:37

I got the cheese Ratina, please go out with me. I loved the part where I drowned in the sink.

Honestly the controls/collision detection are a little bit wonky, but the art and level design is impressive in this short amount of time.

Very cool submission.

regmont 2024-10-09 20:00

We need more rats. And cheese. Lots of cheese!

nickhellquist 2024-10-09 23:14

Cool game, like the cartoony feel of the art and animations, gives it a good feel even though the animation is simple. Nicely done :)

jellyfishhunter 2024-10-10 18:49

This art style is the essence of jams! Fun and unexpected level design. However it could be improved if the rat wouldn't stick to walls when jumping against them.

kseniya 2024-10-10 21:54

Great graphics! and an interesting idea, I got a buzz from the game))

arcolm 2024-10-10 22:08

I found the art style very endearing - and it works well :). Cool game!

schadocalex 2024-10-10 22:28

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Like the art, not really the controls! But I played to the end, I wanted to explore the levels. Well done for your first ludum and keep going!

initialposition 2024-10-10 23:58

A story that will make you laugh, cry, feel joy, despair, hope and dread all at the same time. The art was fantastic, the sound design was good, I enjoyed the random traps you could die in but I wasn't too much of a fan of the controls. I was also sad when the game ended so fast, I really wanted more :)

iaroslavik 2024-10-11 08:44

I like music, good job

royrosta 2024-10-11 09:13

I like the levels layout. And the dialog are funny!

calcopod 2024-10-11 11:42

Interesting art direction. Not necessarily my style, but it was all cohesive and looked good in the game. The audio matched and improved the gameplay, so extra points for that, especially the chords playing when pressing space during the dialogue.

Narrative and story telling were a 10/10, made me cry.

As others have mentioned, better collisions and movement would have been appreciated, but for a jam game it was fine.

Additionally, while the game was short, it was quite enjoyable. A solid entry!

joshua-reumann 2024-10-11 19:06

asdad.JPG I enjoyed this game. Short but nice Story

nemuikoda 2024-10-11 19:12

the art is really likeable, the controls sadly are not. But i still really liked the game and the fact it had an fast playthrough

fabula-rasa 2024-10-11 19:54

I liked the world you created. It's imaginative and feels cool to platform on everyday objects. Jumping felt alright, not too floaty, not too abrupt. I wonder what kind of cheese he got to melt the heart of the lady mouse instantly :laughing: :mouse:

The music fit the atmosphere perfectly. I think it was too easy to get caught on the edges of the objects - we should just slide off those. And in the first level, where there's a falling trap, there should be some shadow or something of the sort to let the player know that something is gonna happen :grin:

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xparker 2024-10-11 21:03

Really good Idea for the jump and run.

personally, i found the edge-hanging a bit unpleasant.

Other than that I was a bit disheartened that the sound effects on space weren't played at the end.

kaiynest 2024-10-12 14:07

I really liked the art style and the story was good, the movement felt a bit weird tho but I got used to to pretty quick other than that it was a great game

renier 2024-10-12 14:21

I really enjoyed this game fun little story and liked the art! movement was sometimes a bit odd feeling (floaty) but a great and fun experience well done! :D

vladmirps 2024-10-12 22:09

Amazing art and gameplay. I struggled a bit with collisions though. Anyways it was a nice experience.

whitefox 2024-10-13 17:48

Great submission! I got confused with some objects on whether I could step on them or not (lego bricks, sponge). It would be nice if the objects that kill you are highlighted differently than other objects. Still a better love story than Twilight. Awesome stuff!

daria-toni 2024-10-13 21:29

Ratony, she doesn't deserve you after all these trials (cat's paw is very scary and dangerous, actually!). The game is small, but funny. The jump feels a little weird, especially when colliding with objects, but I got to the end of the game quickly anyway. I really like the hand-drawn art style, a big plus from me! Nice entry :)

kirill228 2024-10-14 17:29

i like your drawings, but you need to work with collisions and with control.

the-floating-brain 2024-10-14 23:59

Cute! Good fit for theme!

chusmimax 2024-10-15 17:15

One tip, if you upload to play on web browser (as you did, which is better for jams), place the link in the html box, not in the windows one.

Some people will be discouraged to try if they think they have to download it. Also, while in html it should work on every major platform, linux and mac included.

For the game itself, neat platformer, I hope to see you around again next ludum

johnbrynte 2024-10-16 23:15

Loved the level design! It felt coherent and added to the feeling of a small but real journey. Some true Tom & Jerry vibes which was real nostalgic! Yay! :smiley_cat:

PS. I was sad that one mouse/rat killed me. Even more deadly than the cat! What did he have against me?

co5monaut 2024-10-18 12:20

Thanks for the game, I had an interesting time! The graphics and music/sound are really solid. It just felt like it needed a bit more technical polish and maybe a standout feature to really hook me. But it's a good idea with decent execution. You did a great job!

ang-parodi 2024-10-19 13:44

Could use a bit more work on controls, but it does its job. Congrats!

pres2300 2024-10-22 15:48

Fun game! I liked the art, music, and sound effects. The collision on some objects was a bit wonky, but overall I enjoyed playing this. Nice work!

kumber 2024-10-23 17:03

I liked the game. The graphic style was nice, I believe the gameplay could have benefitted by a smaller bounding box for the player - but overall it was a solid work. Very cool!