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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | rohanmoon's comment | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| May 1 12:35:17 | Give Us Our Sh%@ | ♥ 0 | I tried to deliver the green box and the game just wouldn't let me progress. Simple concept though, reasonably well executed. not bad. | |
| May 1 12:38:18 | 3m 01s | Battery Boys | ♥ 2 | Interesting concept, I was having a bit of trouble aiming attacks, as needing to move first was hard sometimes. I found it really difficult to keep the switches on too, the little shadudes kept turning them off too quickly! Good bit of fun! |
| May 1 12:40:29 | 2m 11s | Strange Supplying | ♥ 3 | Challenging to navigate the spikes, hit box was unforgiving. I didn't notice they were spikes at first, and tried to drive my truck a few times. Simple concept but not bad for LD, nice work! |
| May 1 13:08:46 | 28m 17s | Ultimate Package | ♥ 4 | Enjoyablle little game, I loved the sound track! Movement was far too floaty though and was pretty frustrating. Otherwise a nice entry, good job! |
| May 1 22:18:17 | 9h 09m | Cold Pizza | ♥ 1 | Oh this is a neat little game, I like the core game mechanic. Some feedback: I didn't realize the green boxes were showing delivery locations, I thought those were the only places I could put down the instruction tiles. Level 3 took me a while because of this. I really like the level design and progression, it's acting as a natural tutorial as well. It was a bit frustrating that retrying the level reset all my tiles, sometimes all I needed was a slight tweak to get it right. All in all a pretty decent entry, nice work! |
| May 1 22:24:06 | 5m 49s | Idyll : Democracy delivery | ♥ 0 | Oh great another idler for me to get hopelessly addicted to, JUST WHAT I NEED. No seriously this is actually a really solid idler, I think you've done really well. My favorite part was the artwork progressing with each new purchase, made me want to keep going just to see what was coming next. |
| May 1 23:15:15 | 51m 09s | Contraband Critters: A Tactical Transporter | ♥ 3 | I love the art and music, the concept seems really cool, but I really struggled to progress at all. My robots just kept dying and I feel like I'm missing some core concept. At one point one of my robots just disappeared. |
| May 1 23:24:33 | 9m 18s | The Pigeon Post Principle | ♥ 4 | OOh this is lovely! I absolutely adore the artwork and audio, and what a wonderful core mechanic (deceptively complex). I think you did really well teaching the player the basic concepts and then iterating slowly on it with more and more complex level design. Great job! |
| May 2 03:47:06 | 4h 22m | Asteroid Outlaws | ♥ 3 | oh wow I really enjoyed this, wonderful implementation of realistic physics. I had a lot of fun chasing down packages, and I thought I was doing so well because I'd tractored up a whole stack, but then i realized their mass was also affecting my ship, making it almost impossible to fly! Awesome work, seriously! |
| May 2 03:55:31 | 8m 25s | Dead-End Delivery | ♥ 1 | AAAAH! This was seriously awesome! I loved the vibe the CRT overlay gave, and your art style matched it perfectly. The controls were a bit rough, the turning circle kind of sucked. Maybe in a future version you could select cars with some different specs like turn speed and top speed etc. This gave me huge nostalgia vibes for micro machines (remember racing little cars on table tops?) and GTA1/2. What a great entry! |
| May 2 10:40:16 | 6h 44m | WASTELAND Express | ♥ 2 | WOW! Stunning graphics, lovely physics, such wonderful details (dynamically destructible car???) This is insanely good! |
| May 2 23:06:33 | 12h 26m | Bird Express | ♥ 1 | Hmm I couldn't get this to work, the game would load up with some animations but I didn't know what to do, clicking on things did nothing and keyboard wasn't useful. The artwork looked pretty nice though. |
| May 2 23:15:08 | 8m 35s | Peggy's Post | ♥ 2 | I found this pretty overwhelming, and my morning brain couldn't figure out how to do anything at first. I finally found that I could turn the page on the instructions book, THEN found there was a map under the book! The map just made things more confusing though. That feedback aside, I think this is a wonderful game with a lot of charm, I love the art style, I love the setting, and I am a huge fan of Paper's Please so everything here sits really well with me. I think in a future version you could just take some time to introduce the player to the mechanics, and slowly build up their repertoire of skills, if given some time and space to learn the complexities of the puzzles in the game I think this would be a wonderful experience. What you have here is just perfect for an LD entry, and my feedback is mostly just to consider for future, I think you've done really well. |
| May 2 23:22:38 | 7m 30s | Pizza Pete's Peculiar Predicament | ♥ 2 | This was pretty neat, I liked the pizza tossing mechanic, I dont think I've ever played a platformer where you're also shooting and aiming with the mouse. Nice work on the sounds! |
| May 2 23:26:49 | 4m 11s | Baby Bots | ♥ 0 | Doesn't want to work in the browser for me Screenshot 2023-05-03 092622.jpg |
| May 2 23:29:57 | 3m 08s | Spacial Delivery | ♥ 1 | No bad, I enjoyed the physics, I couldn't figure out what I was doing though, I couldn't tell where I was going or what my goal was. Also couldn't do any damage to other ships. |
| May 3 06:33:30 | 7h 03m | There is a monkey here! | ♥ 0 | Very nice, I love the theme. The artstyle and chiptune audio mixed well together. I loved the core mechanic, getting lower with each monkey made you a bit stressed about running out of time, but it also made it easier to drop them on the land, a very nice self-balancing mechanic. Very well designed. My only feedback is I think you should have given more than one life, and let me drop more baby monkeys...look I know how bad that sounds but please let me make mistakes! |
| May 3 06:39:26 | 5m 56s | The Clockwork Express | ♥ 2 | Very cool! I definitely did not take enough time to read the instructions and was a bit confused at first, I tried to use the mail gun as a normal gun and wasted all of my packages trying to destroy pirates. I loved the art, but I'm a sucker for voxels, ultimately this was surprisingly deep and I think you accomplished a great level of detail for such a short time. Very solid entry, nice work! |
| May 16 23:30:53 | 328h 51m | Tank world | ♥ 0 | "you cannot kill me!" oh yeah? |
| May 16 23:52:16 | 21m 23s | Parcel Control | ♥ 0 | Absolutely love the soundtrack and sound effects in this game, just wonderful! I found it a bit difficult to figure out what I was meant to be doing, intially (I was playing it on itch.io) I was trying to compare the stamp shape to the one in your page header, not realizing that wasn't even part of the game. Then I figured out I could open the computer, but not hadn't figured out I could open the parcel too to compare info. I think a bit more detail in the tutorial or description would have helped a lot. Still a very neat game, great entry, well done! |
| May 17 00:03:05 | 10m 49s | Unwanted Delivery | ♥ 1 | This was kind of neat, I liked the combat and your sound wasn't too bad at all. Nice work on setting the mood and writing out the story! |
| May 17 00:10:55 | 7m 50s | Pollygone | ♥ 1 | Very clever concept, nice implementation of a good puzzle. Loving the soundtrack too. This was deceptively simple on the surface but had some nice depth to the design, a really solid entry that I enjoyed! |
| May 17 00:13:26 | 2m 31s | The War is Over | ♥ 1 | Liked the soundtrack and the art, the gameplay was a bit rough, the movement was very floaty. |
| May 17 00:18:59 | 5m 33s | Detective Root | ♥ 0 | Pretty neat, but the puzzle was super hard and I feel pretty stupid trying (and failing) to solve even the first door. I think it'd be better to go with simpler versions initially, to let the user build up their knowledge of how to solve the future puzzles. |
| May 17 00:57:02 | 38m 03s | Warehouse Tycoon | ♥ 1 | This was really quite neat, a very nice implementation of this puzzle type. It took me longer than I'd like to admit that some boxes just COULDNT be rotated 😂 |
| May 17 00:58:59 | 1m 57s | The Stork Purrsuit | ♥ 1 | Very cute art, nice sound design, puzzle/mechanics were a touch simple but I think tastefully implemented. Nice job! |
| May 17 01:03:00 | 4m 01s | Careless Express | ♥ 1 | This was a good b it of fun, I love physics games! I really liked the implementation of the dual modes, throwing the box was fun, if not sometimes a bit tough. Nice entry! |
| May 17 01:05:49 | 2m 49s | Crazy Hearse | ♥ 1 | Very tough, the controls were definitely CRAZY! This was a great first entry though, had a bit of fun zipping around, nice work. |
| May 17 01:09:15 | 3m 26s | Pizza Race | ♥ 0 | Pretty unforgiving, I think some lives or health would've been good. The timer was going down way too fast though I couldn't figure out how I was going to get to the destination in time |
