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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | peterfiftyfour's comment | |
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| May 1 03:17:09 | Pizza Puzzle | ♥ 1 | Nice job! I love the gameboy aesthetic. The controls feel a little stiff but I think it actually matches the old school gameboy style haha. | |
| May 1 03:29:36 | 12m 27s | Spacial Delivery | ♥ 1 | That is a very nice background - is it just a scrolling texture? It kinda looks volumetric. I dunno what the ais were up to but the seemed to looove forming a big clump around planets which was entertaining lol |
| May 1 03:35:44 | 6m 08s | Energy Delivery | ♥ 1 | Cool idea, I did something sorta similar with energy networks! It was a bit hard to know what was going on - some number tooltips might help? I wanted to see exactly how much was going in and out so I could make better decisions lol |
| May 1 03:51:35 | 15m 51s | 10 Minutes Guaranteed! | ♥ 1 | Clever little game. The simplicity of the interaction is nice. Would be cool to see how far you can take it/how many mechanics you can squeeze in with just WASD |
| May 1 04:35:37 | 44m 02s | Postominoes | ♥ 1 | This is great and the mechanics all work together really nicely - at first I just filled up the truck randomly but then realised I have to take the packages out again to deliver :D having to actually plan your route and then also plan how you fill the truck is really cool! |
| May 1 04:49:14 | 13m 37s | Air Delivery | ♥ 3 | This is super great. Really cute lil characters and music. I especially like the bits of dialogue that hint at a larger world and history to explore. Gave me cave story vibes a bit :) |
| May 1 05:04:26 | 15m 12s | Toad Pizza Express | ♥ 1 | Y'ALL READY TO GET FUNKY?? |
| May 1 05:15:44 | 11m 18s | Deliver or Die | ♥ 1 | Jesus those citizens are murderous. I only made them wait a few extra seconds xD |
| May 1 05:26:03 | 10m 19s | Twisted Pedal | ♥ 1 | This is a fav so far! The bike mechanic is pretty satisfying. I feel like you could expand this out to a bike themed vampire survivors-like haha |
| May 1 05:35:19 | 9m 16s | The Silver Fleet | ♥ 1 | Those pirates are so cute. Love the sound effects and the music is great. Simple and effective nice job! |
| May 1 05:49:34 | 14m 15s | Bag Stranding | ♥ 1 | Masterpiece just like death stranding Untitled.png |
| May 1 05:55:33 | 5m 59s | Ambrosia | ♥ 1 | This is wild how did you even make it look like that? I keep getting "failed at 1% of the way" at the start but I can still move around for a while? Not sure what I'm supposed to be doing but I love the trippy visuals |
| May 1 06:03:50 | 8m 17s | Deliver Us From Evil | ♥ 1 | ourfatherwhichartinheavenhallowedbethynamethykingdomcomethywillbedoneinearthasitisinheavengiveusthisdayourdailybreadandforgiveusourtrespassesasweforgivethemthattrespassagainstusandleadusnotintotemptationbutdeliverusfromevilforthineisthekingdomthepowerandthegloryforeverandeveramen |
| May 1 06:14:55 | 11m 05s | Giggle Groove | ♥ 2 | This is sooo good! I laughed out loud at the audience voices 😂 Very original and clever idea good job |
| May 1 06:17:42 | 2m 47s | Dark Teeth | ♥ 1 | Thank u for this art |
| May 1 06:42:29 | 24m 47s | City Runners | ♥ 1 | This is cool and there are a lot of things going on! It would have been nice to be introduced to the mechanics gradually rather than all at once (unfortunately that might turn some players off, especially in a jam setting). Also with the map it woulda been useful to just have buttons for each thing like map, gym, shop and then if you could click on the cities to select them instead of having arrows it would have been a much smoother experience. I played this for far too long - can't resist maxing that move speed |
| May 1 06:45:59 | 3m 30s | Freight | ♥ 0 | Cute art and nice chill music. Now just need to add some more gameplay/mechanics :D |
| May 1 06:52:54 | 6m 55s | Pizza Rush | ♥ 0 | Surprisingly fun and bangin soundtrack. I think there needs to be a penalty for just spamming the pizzas cos that was my strategy lol |
| May 1 11:11:05 | 4h 18m | Delivery Dungeon | ♥ 1 | This is pretty funny and the addition of the minimap was good although it could have been on a key closer to WASD haha. I'll never trust houses again |
| May 1 11:20:17 | 9m 12s | Dave's Pizzas | ♥ 2 | This is pretty entertaining - I love the music most of all. I like to imagine it's being blasted out of the car like a nightmarish icecream man. |
| May 1 11:27:02 | 6m 45s | Goose's Run | ♥ 0 | Nice entry! The cloudy background is quite pretty. Also love the cats images just stuck on |
| May 1 11:32:12 | 5m 10s | B.H.M.D.S. | ♥ 2 | I love the grainy visuals and this looks super cool but unfortunately I'm stuck on "adjust trajectory" I can't seem to progress from there? |
| May 1 11:46:36 | 14m 24s | Little boat delivery adventures! | ♥ 1 | Love the chill music. I wish the game ran while unfocussed so I could leave it on a bit. As others have said the boat is a bit slow and hard to control but the core idea is solid! |
| May 1 11:53:37 | 7m 01s | Turbo Baby | ♥ 4 | That epic landing omg. This is hilarious the animations are so good. The start throws you into the deep end a bit - might be nice to start of slow to get the hang of it? |
| May 1 12:01:18 | 7m 41s | Waggle Danger | ♥ 0 | Love the pixel art and the crow sound is very fitting! Nice color palette too |
| May 1 12:05:44 | 4m 26s | Thats So Punny | ♥ 2 | Whaaat this feels professional! Really similar to jackbox games in tone. Nice job :D |
| May 1 12:22:44 | 17m 00s | Mt. Deliverest | ♥ 8 | This is really satisfying. Kinda reminds me that quop like climbing game but this is much easier and nicer to play. It's very polished for such a short amount of time so nice work! At first I was clicking the hands and dragging but I found it was easier to click on a target hold directly - I dunno if that's cheating haha |
| May 1 13:00:25 | 37m 41s | Firelore: First Fate | ♥ 1 | I imagine a work that will finally fulfill me yet it never comes.. damn. This was inspiring! I wish there was more. Having the whole story laid out like that is fascinating. I feel like it opens up lots of possibilities for puzzles/mystery without the player getting lost since they can always return to 'nodes'. I hope you expand on this as I think with this particular format you could do a lot of very interesting narrative things! |
| May 1 13:07:37 | 7m 12s | Eternal delivery | ♥ 1 | Slightly janky but I like the simplicity of it. Physics based stuff is always satisfying to mess around with. |
| May 1 13:12:06 | 4m 29s | A Bag | ♥ 3 | I just got ubereats and they forgot half the order so this is pretty realistic |
| May 1 13:20:00 | 7m 54s | Comeback | ♥ 0 | Was a bit hard to know what to do but I really like the hand drawn style and cute ghosts! |
| May 1 13:25:04 | 5m 04s | Delivery Island | ♥ 2 | Love the music! I wasn't sure what to do after getting the dialogue but I like how the camera does this dramatic zoom just so I can watch myself sink haha |
| May 1 13:31:48 | 6m 44s | Parcel Blaster 2099 | ♥ 2 | Daaamn this one is juicy as! So much polish. Love the music and visual design. That chunky cannon is so cool makes me think this should be a raiden like shmup with big bosses and stuff. Just how the whole truck rocks back after the shot feels so good! |
| May 1 13:45:16 | 13m 28s | Serum Run | ♥ 3 | I put on the recommended listening :) This is super cool. I love this kind of narrative game. Have you played Roadwarden? You should, it's a masterpiece. Also you could totally expand on this and release it. I'd buy it! |
| May 2 07:05:37 | 17h 20m | RELEASE THE MEAT | ♥ 3 | MEAT! This is my fav so far I think. So fun and addictive. I love these kinda crafty-machine building games. AS others have said it could do with some UX polish but this is super good. I only wish there were more levels! |
| May 2 08:34:11 | 1h 28m | Handle With Care | ♥ 3 | This is very ambitious! You've included a lot of features and the are pretty polished for such a short amount of time! The controls are really tight and the aesthetic is real cool. I think doing the actual building with the jetpack mode was cool but quite slow which made it hard to try/fail/iterate which I think is a core part of the fun with this kind of game. There might be a way to incorporate the jetpack in another way since it did feel good to fly around? You should check out this entry too as it's similar to yours but it's a pretty different take - way more silly lol https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/53/release-the-meat |
| May 2 09:00:40 | 26m 29s | Peggy's Post | ♥ 3 | This is beautiful. It was a little hard to tell why sometimes I got a bad result - not sure if I made a mistake or if it was just janky. Good use of minimal music and audio too real papers please vibes of course :D Could easily be expanded upon and released! |
| May 2 09:13:39 | 12m 59s | Very Good Happy Joy Play 3000 | ♥ 3 | noooo mooooom Untitled.png |
| May 2 09:22:21 | 8m 42s | Red Planet Rendezvous | ♥ 2 | Very tricky but eventually succeeded! These lunar lander style games are always simple and fun nice job! |
| May 2 09:27:29 | 5m 08s | Cuckoo Delivery | ♥ 3 | Sick menu music! It's suuuper bassy too haha. I like the birds eye view while still having some perspective reminds me of teleglitch |
| May 2 09:38:31 | 11m 02s | Delivering Better Worlds | ♥ 4 | Love the main menu idea xD I haven't played many twists-on-tetris games but this seems like quite a cool spin on it! Interesting to think about other ways this mechanic could be expanded! |
| May 2 09:40:35 | 2m 04s | Pizzapocalypse | ♥ 3 | @noahmfisher fuggeddaboudit |
| May 2 09:48:56 | 8m 21s | Resource delivery | ♥ 4 | The movement was a bit janky, the character kept getting stuck and so did the lil dogs. Sad cos I wanted to see an army of lil dogs scour the whole map. Even with the jank this is pretty fun and the music loop is catchy too! |
| May 2 10:06:51 | 17m 55s | Cow Heist: Space Delivery Mission | ♥ 3 | Cool art! I like the cutscene at the start. Pity there was no audio as it would have helped with the vibe. It was pretty hard to dodge asteroids without losing the cow. Actually that cover image reminds me of that movie NOPE haha. Nice job! |
| May 2 10:11:54 | 5m 03s | Delivery G.U.I. | ♥ 1 | I hate birds and also old people. The core of a fun game is in there! I think if the drone control was a little more free/fast it would be a bit more exciting. I did like the art and level layout, it kinda felt like a lil adventure maybe just cos it looked like a fantasy setting even though there was a drone haha |
| May 2 10:32:29 | 20m 35s | Parcel Madness: The Last Delivery | ♥ 1 | Love the black and white! Classic. Pretty cute lil game, had some issues with the box clipping through the floor and having to go back through the level and I thought the throw was a bit strong - might be nice to have a mechanic where you can hold throw to charge it up? |
| May 2 10:36:14 | 3m 45s | ê¦ê¦ºê¦ªê¦¼ê¦«ê§€ ꧕; Layer 5 | ♥ 2 | Interesting idea if a little simple :) One thing that would be nice is an option to turn down the audio as those beeps were very loud haha |
| May 2 10:57:38 | 21m 24s | D.I.Y Deliver it yourself | ♥ 4 | That menu transition is sick! Spend ages just clicking back and forth haha! Pretty crazy to get a whole level editor done in such a short amount of time! Really cool and pretty well featured too. I made a cursed track - you should try it out it's called 'puck' |
| May 2 11:08:06 | 10m 28s | Drone Delivery | ♥ 2 | This is sick! Love terminal based games and ascii art. I wish there was more to discover and little stories and stuff! Nice entry :) |
| May 2 11:16:55 | 8m 49s | Bird Express | ♥ 3 | Nice entry! Was fun to slowly build up the number of birds - it would be nice if the detection of the paths was a bit snappier. I wanted to draw them very quickly but sometimes they didn't register very well and it slowed me down a bit. Cute art btw! |
| May 2 11:21:15 | 4m 20s | Xenoluv | ♥ 5 | It's so cute when a lil alien in shorts carries of your squadmates to meet their horrific demise <3 |
| May 2 11:29:27 | 8m 12s | Space Cowworking | ♥ 0 | I love how you are actually in the cockpit - it adds so much to the feeling/atmosphere when what are essentially menus are in-world. Cool entry! |
| May 2 11:38:14 | 8m 47s | Dinolivery - The adventurer delivery service guild needs you ! | ♥ 1 | Love the pixel art and the music! This is a really cool idea and could definitely be expanded into something. I like the idea of having a bunch of lil adventurers running around that I can equip and level up and stuff. Kinda like a semi idle game. Also a dino/lizard thing as a delivery service is just cool |
| May 2 11:56:01 | 17m 47s | WASTELAND Express | ♥ 2 | This is awesome congrats! The car and trailer movement is so satisfying I could just drive around for ages. The explosions have old school raiden vibes - love it |
| May 2 12:11:59 | 15m 58s | Mars Delivery Program | ♥ 2 | I love this one. Just driving round the martian landscape is so serene and chill. The pixel textures are reallllly cool too! Love the style. I think this could work as a full game like a lowfi death stranding haha. Yeah the more I play this the more I think this needs to be expanded. Imagine like.. storms, shuttle landings with these pixelart graphics it would be so perfect |
| May 2 12:51:15 | 39m 16s | Days on the Lake | ♥ 2 | A little janky here and there but I still spent far too long playing this haha. Was fun to try upgrade the boat and the dialogue was pretty funny! |
| May 2 13:05:39 | 14m 24s | Mech Express | ♥ 3 | Love the visuals and music! It was pretty hectic to control everything - the combat could have been much slower paced so we could focus more on the packages and like planning what to use on what although that might not be the direction you had in mind. Nice entry! |
| May 2 13:18:54 | 13m 15s | The Delivering of Christ - The trials of Mary | ♥ 1 | Pretty sure the "power of christ" melting the flesh from peoples bones was not in the book but this is canon to me now |
| May 2 22:45:32 | 9h 26m | Deep Sands Delivery | ♥ 0 | This is so cooool. Gives me deserts of kharak vibes. I love these kinda tower defense hybrid things especially if they are desert themed :D |
| May 3 10:29:51 | 11h 44m | Trajectory Express | ♥ 1 | Really love the visuals of this one :) The planets turned out real nice too! |
| May 3 10:39:44 | 9m 53s | Mouth Feel | ♥ 3 | Omg the menu music is perfect. Well this is a 10/10. Nuuuuuuuuuuu it crashed on me twice. I need to know the ending of this gripping story. OKok I finished and this is the best thing ive ever played |
| May 7 02:30:56 | 87h 51m | Verses & Vibes | ♥ 4 | This is superb. Such a cool idea! I feel like this belongs in an art gallery or something |
| May 9 08:13:43 | 53h 42m | Cloud City Cargo | ♥ 1 | Really beautiful world. I wish there was more to explore and discover! |
| May 9 08:21:17 | 7m 34s | An Ocean Planet | ♥ 1 | I love hover ship/car/whatever things! Really liked the vibes just zooming around on the ocean planet |
| May 9 08:39:45 | 18m 28s | Lexicon | ♥ 2 | Such a cool entry! Love the idea just needs some difficulty balance as others have said :D |
| May 9 09:03:23 | 23m 38s | Rocket Lawnchair 2: Baby Deliverydoo! | ♥ 1 | this is glorious and the UGGHHh when crashing is amazing |
| May 9 10:11:54 | 1h 08m | Derro Delivery | ♥ 2 | despair.png I journey across this blasted blue wasteland, chasing the infinite horizon with only the chatter of Knob AM to keep me company. I feel my sanity is slowly slipping away but I will never go back to that hellish place. May God have mercy on my soul. |
| May 9 10:56:46 | 44m 52s | Goblin Trail | ♥ 1 | Cute art and sound! it was pretty tricky but got the hang of it in the end. When I saw the title I first thought it was going to be like oregon trail lol |
| May 9 11:00:35 | 3m 49s | Akoban | ♥ 1 | Cool art style! particularly love the wavy flower like pupils in the eyes! |
| May 9 11:13:17 | 12m 42s | Couriers' Route | ♥ 1 | This is really cool - the music kinda makes it haha. It's such a mysterious vibe. Loved all the dialogue choices that you managed to get in. I think if it was a little more forgiving this could encourage exploration of the map a little more! |
| May 9 11:40:16 | 26m 59s | Game Genie: Crunch Time | ♥ 2 | I have no idea what just happened 😂 |
| May 9 11:51:57 | 11m 41s | Mailville | ♥ 1 | Super polished and juicy nice job! |
| May 9 12:09:34 | 17m 37s | Trailer Trial | ♥ 1 | Nice and simple but these kinda things are always good fun! Also love how dark the music suddenly got at times heheh |
| May 9 12:42:10 | 32m 36s | Fork This | ♥ 1 | ham.png |
