@tattomoosa thank you alot for that large amount of feedback, I will say there are a couple of things that even I personally didn't like about some of the dialogue pieces in the game...there are actually quite a few more situations and choices I meant to put into the game and flesh out more, but I almost ran out of time trying to get this done...I want to try and remake this game once Ludum Dare is officially over with better sounds and an actual planned and fully written and edited script
I meant for the choices to feel a bit difficult, as based on somewhat personal experience some choices wouldn't have mattered but I agree with you that I should have given more clues on certain situations.
This is the kinda feedback I was needing though because I knew there were things I rushed and ended up lacking in the final product that I wish I had done differently, so thank you again for taking the time to dissect my game like this!