Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD45 → adventure again
By gamefive
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 958 | 2.96 | 62 | |
| Fun | 752 | 3.03 | 63 | |
| Innovation | 863 | 2.77 | 63 | |
| Theme | 934 | 2.76 | 61 | |
| Graphics | 566 | 3.50 | 63 | |
| Audio | 1.90 | 18 | ||
| Humor | 739 | 2.33 | 52 | |
| Mood | 897 | 2.87 | 57 |
I really like the paper art style. The controls are a little wonky in my opinion. Like sometimes it takes a while to speed up all the way, occasionally longer than other times. I really enjoyed the simple yet challenging gameplay, I only wish there was a more clear way to see where the end of a level was. Overall a very enjoyable game with a very unique art style. Well done!
Very cute platformer! I was only frustrated by friction on the walls and by last level... that didn't actually changed to another screen at the end ;)
I enjoyed the simplicity of drawings, which makes your game nice at the same time!
Nice platformer. I really like the paper Graphics wich are very unique.
The paper art style isn't bad. The controls are a little rough though...The jump seemed to increase speed mid-way up the jump which makes the precision jumps very difficult. I liked the concept of the next level adding onto the previous level.
The controls where a bit unresponsive and the friction was set too high, but other than that, a really cool concept
The art idea is really awesome and worth to further explore I'd say! With that being said, the assets in the game could have used just a little bit of post-processing (little white dot at the corners and lightness differences where two pieces are put together for example).
Controls are indeed somewhat wonky and I feel that a little background music could have improved the game a lot.
Some levels felt like they stop in the middle and the last one I did several times until I realized this was the last one. So some kind of goal indication would have been nice.
But all in all a solid entry with a really awesome graphics idea :)
I agree with the above comment on seeing the end of a level. Having a visual for what we're working toward would be nice, and I'd also like just a simple sound effect for landing as well as completing a level, but otherwise a good and straightforward entry! :)
Really cool graphics, stands out from any other games. Overall a solid platformer, nice work!
The controls feel quite strange: friction was set too high and the jump is very hard too control because how the speed over-time escalates. Very unique and cool art style tho!
The controls are really unresponsive. Nice art style though
Was frustrated by the last level, but it was fun to play ! Can be way better with paper soundeffects and a calm music. Keep on coding ^^
So this is the end? The controlling fells good! I like the friction between the player and the platform, and the idea of constantly adding levels is great! I guess the whole level may be rorating if the levels continue, in all, great job! Snipaste_2019-10-09_21-24-04.png
This is pretty neat, the art is really unique and the game feels pretty tight.
Well, as people said, without any visual for where the goal is some levels are frustrating.
Also, I love the graphics, but I think that solid color background is really out of style. Maybe some hatching would look better, like, hatch an actual sheet of paper with a pen and then photo it and put it in the background.
Nice little game! It would help, as the other commenters pointed out, to have some indication of where the destination is for each level. The aesthetics are really neat, but the dark blue background looks a bit off here - perhaps something like pencil hatching would look more in line with the rest of the visual. Also, I found the playable character movement to be a bit on the slow side. Some background music would be nice, too. I had fun playing the game, though! I hope you can develop it further.
Cool to see you progressing in every game jam @gamefive! This was cool.
I really like the artwork but was missing some sound. Also, the movement was a little weird, as people stated the slow acceleration played a little problematic.
Cool entry, liked how you used this paper style, just lacks a few sound effects and some musics. I like what you did there with the level that builds itself each time you reach your goal, fits the theme well.
What a nice little platformer with cute paper graphics. I'd prefer a bit less levels but more difficult and varied ones.
@copper-aardvark-games The character speed seems to be due to the acceleration properties. I updated the game progress and the end of the game. Thank you for liking my game.
@blint6 Thank you. I made the last level.
@alzelemon Thank you very much. We tried to create a unique level as much as possible.
@evilobjective Thank you. I tried to make the level as new as possible.
@tc5550 Thank you. We are modifying the character movement and jump attributes. The Level Design tried to make it as new as possible.
@simonl Thank you for your interest in my game. I'll add more sound when I have time. The purpose of the game has been updated. I made the end of the game. I'll modify the tile set as soon as I have time. Please play my game again any time.
@ben-ash You created the last level of the game. I've also added some help with the game's progress. Game help is within the level. I'll add the sound. Thank you for playing my game.
@yubs Thank you very much. Thank you for giving me a good evaluation of my game.
@ncarrico I will modify the properties of the character's movement and jump. Thank you for giving me a good evaluation of my game. I'll keep trying.
@reasonable-games Let me check the character movement. Thank you for your favorable evaluation of my game.
@sir-galloy-de-fierpate Thank you. I've modified the last level. Thank you for making it fun.
@dimlight That's the last place. However, the ending screen has now been added when we arrive at the end. Play again. Please enjoy the ending screen. Thank you.
@whatnamegames [gamefeels pretty tight] How can I fix this? Please advise. Thank you for your advice on my game.
@andre-606 I fixed the game level. I've been able to focus more on the game. Ending added successfully. I'll modify the background. Actually, I'm thinking about the background.
@xlomid Thank you for your good assessment of the game. The background is worry. The level of the game has been fixed. Now you can see what you have to do when you play games. Thank you for your interest in my game.
@raffe Thank you. I'll do a good job next time. Thank you for your interest in my game.
@dk5000p Thank you. I'm thinking about what to do with sound. I'll correct the advice.
@djindegames Thank you for your evaluation of my game. I'm thinking about what to do with sound. Thank you for your good assessment of the game level.
@flying-dog-fish Thank you for your assessment of the game. Is the level too easy?
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gameend.JPG Cute game, I like the hand-drawn levels, it was kind of refreshing for LDJam games
@emiliabea Thank you. The cute and easy game is my game design concept. LDJAM has a variety of concept and graphics games. I think that's why many people like it. I drew myself. Thank you for liking my character.
cool concept! I always find interested games that use hand drawn assets on paper! I wish it had more levels to play.
Really cute game, the paper art style is refreshing and it play nice Good job!!
@koukwst Thank you. I'll make some more levels. I'll introduce you when I make more levels.
@savvy-community Thank you very much.
I like the hand drawn graphics style! very nice. The movement was a bit heavy for a platformer but it just added to the challenge so there's a good side. Some kind of a papery sound would be great for this. Like paper crumbling and stuff. But all in all a neat paper platformer, I enjoyed!
@barracudadisaster Thank you. I'm working on sound. I'll make the game harder.
Hey! Simple platformer but with a really cool art style. Love it! A more smooth control would have help. But good job!
The physics were a bit annoying (too much friction when touching walls and floatiness when in the air) but otherwise pretty decent
@lonewolfdevI will correct the attribute value of the character movement. Thank you.
@atomfox0213 Let's modify the character movement properties. Thank you.
I found it a bit annoying having to redo the same part of the level over and over again. Furthermore, the controls were a bit difficult to handle as you slide a lot.
It's not often you see a Ludum Dare game made with pencil-and-paper graphics! I like the style.
@smbe19 I'm sorry. The system of this game is a way of moving to the first position when a new level is reached. So when it's filled with a screen-filled platform, it starts from a new location. It'll be even more weird now that we've made only Level 1 in total. I will continue to make it. The character movement is being fixed.
@philomory Thank you for your interest in these strange and simple graphics.
Simple and lite mechanics. I like that "Piiuu" sound of jumping (BFXR?). Not sure about the theme conformity but I like levels set. Selection_759.png Good job, comrade!
@room606 thanks ^^
Cool game! Gameplay-wise it's okay, but the artstyle really picks up the mood and makes this game much more enjoyable than it'd be if it was just simple square sprites.
@jakobthequizguy Add moving and jumping animations for Player characters
The hand-drawn style is very nice. Wish there was more than simple platforming, though. Some doodle enemies would have added alot more charm to this game.
Also wish there were sound effects for clearing a level and dying instead of just one for jumping.
The graphics are really cool. The sound is a bit off at first. Just wished it was longer!
The style is interesting, though am not sure about the slow revelation of the level, or what mechanic that serves.
Maybe having to earn the revelation/creation of an 'easy' route after taking a hard one, if the levels were larger and there were set restart points.
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Pretty cool game, short and simple which I clearly prefer that to long and frustrating. The controls work well and the platforming is satisfying.
The graphic have a certain charm too, but doing them on paper and taking a photo of them after causes a little lack of cohesiveness. For instance the paper doesn't always have the same color and the junction between different sprites can be a bit jarring. The blue background isn't very paper-y either, perhaps a texture like this http://img.hisupplier.com/var/userImages/2008-11/20/glpaper$004445729(s).jpg might have worked better. Anyways that's mostly nitpicks but a potential lead for improvement next time.
Good job !
@phoenix-fireflower Thank you. The level design will continue. Levels are added. The enemy will show up. There'll be a trap. I'll add the sound. Thank you for your feedback.
@techsec Thank you. I'll fix the sound. Level design continues.
@johnnysix Thank you for your interest. Every time the game reaches a new point, a new level emerges. When you start, you cannot see the entire level. When you play a game, a new level emerges. The last level and the new level appear together.Right now, it's a level with one correct answer. I'll keep the easy level and the difficult level together. To do that, you'll need to make the scene bigger.
@ashtrail Thank you, graphics have not been reworked. I had to make corrections after taking a picture. But I couldn't. The graphics will be fixed. Thank you for your feedback on the gay background. Please keep an eye on me
Visuals are very original and cute :D It would be nice if the character didn't slip when he stopped ^^ Anyway, I really enjoyed this little adventure, good job.
I like the progression of levels being the same but with added parts in the end.
@gamefive - I get it, I guess it's the challenge to find a way to hide stuff, maybe traps or something in the 'fog of war' style - so there's an advantage to revealing the next part.
Small screen but neat gameplay though! Adventure again :slight_smile: