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Your Little Tale

By lfleck

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness287
Innovation543.48
Graphics903.60
Humor1002.58
Audio1352.77
Mood1472.68
Theme1622.76
Fun2102.10
Overall2132.42

Comments

omaha 2012-04-24 04:59

I love the concept. I got stuck after dropping a few of those items on the stage. Not sure what I was supposed to do next :)

thegamingproject 2012-04-24 17:49

link wouldn't load / mysql error

zoomyzoom 2012-04-24 17:51

I couldn't get the web player to work. And since i a not able to download things at the moment. I am unable to play. sorry bro :(

alink 2012-04-24 18:20

Very cute graphics and cool idea. I could use some tooltip for actions because it was not clear how to use them

nolanlabs 2012-04-24 18:27

@TheGamingProject same here.

yanmania 2012-04-24 18:46

I couldnt get the web version to load either. Maybe try hosting it somewhere else?

saikai 2012-04-24 19:00

still mySql error...

transmit 2012-04-24 20:18

Both links go to a swfcabin file which fails to load. Fixit Fixit Fixit Fixit.

pixelulsar 2012-04-24 20:48

Interesting concept and it was a cool use of the theme, was bit confusing though...

monkeyarmada 2012-04-24 21:25

Great concept, hope to see it more developed.

lfleck 2012-04-25 11:22

Sorry guys looking into the error, i will post another link soon...
Thankz for the feedback

netmute 2012-04-25 11:48

I was impressed by the graphics, but had little to no idea what I was doing. Stuff kept falling from the top and people drew weapons :)
Great idea anyway!

unicornpooping 2012-04-25 12:15

Nothing will load :-(

piman 2012-04-25 12:18

The web download link doesn't work for me.

moth 2012-04-25 12:32

I think this was a cute little thing! At first I was confused but I really like how the audience is put off by the same thing over and over again, and seeing how changing up the order of set pieces you use will entertain them and stuff. I really like the concept and would love to see this fleshed out further!

The graphics and music are cute. I like the interpretation of "tiny world" being theatre too, nice :)

caranha 2012-04-25 12:32

I can't really rate this game, because the host is too slow. How about hosting it on Newgrounds or some other bigger site instead?

lfleck 2012-04-25 12:32

Sorry about the link, right now im in class without the file to upload somewhere else, but as soon i get home ill upload the game someplace else

moth 2012-04-25 12:33

Also LOL I see Garen in that third screenshot! :P

minercraftguy 2012-04-25 12:56

The game looks promising, the idea with Tiny World is well played with.

meedoc 2012-04-25 15:12

Great idea! I really enjoyed the game even if it's hard to understand the different effect. Need more polish, but here is a strong basis!

andrew-2 2012-04-25 17:39

I failed horribly at it but the concept is interesting. Maybe you can finish it up in a post-compo version.

jiddo 2012-04-25 17:53

Nice idea. The web version worked perfectly fine for me, even tho it was a bit slow when initially loading the page. I don't think that I fully understood the mechanics of the game tho. The graphics look great and the background tune is nice. Good work!

jwolf 2012-04-25 19:27

I thought this entry wouldn't load, but eventually the host responded. You may want to look into that.

It's a neat concept, but kind of difficult to figure out what you're supposed to do. I imagine that's mostly a result of the time issues that you were having.

Please keep at it. After fleshing out and adding feedback / consequences to the chosen actions, I think you could make something very interesting with this one.

moop 2012-04-25 19:33

Ambitious idea and great graphics. Would like to see a more finished version.

codexus 2012-04-25 19:34

The characters are cute

supersoul 2012-04-26 02:59

Really like the idea. Was not sure what to do though, sometimes I got feedback from my actions through graphics or the meters, other times nothing seemed to happen when I clicked an icon. So I ended up just randomly selecting icons. With work it could be a very fun and amusing game. Great start!

misfit 2012-04-26 16:57

Cool concept and great graphics, but maybe it needs tooltips or something?

rik 2012-04-28 13:01

Good concept, coulda been developed further.

dokidoki 2012-04-29 19:09

I like the graphics and concept, but couldn't fill up the heart bar at all. Would like to see more. :)

djcsdy 2012-05-04 00:35

I like the idea, but it's not remotely clear what's going on :(.

The graphics are good though :).

I vaguely recall seeing a very similar game a few LDs ago and that didn't work very well either :(.

SethR 2012-05-06 02:47

Didn't quite come together, hope you keep working on this one.

pacifistgames 2012-05-07 12:02

Really couldn't understand what the icons meant, I was trying to bring the action, romance and drama bars up but no matter what I did the audience always got bored. You lose when the curtain falls right? Good art and music, but it could use some more explanation.