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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Jonathan Lorenz's comment | |
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| Apr 25 09:06:45 | Chesburgrellia | ♥ 1 | Surprisingly addictive! Good job! | |
| Apr 25 09:31:38 | 24m 53s | Soul Sword | ♥ 0 | I liked it but it didn't hook me that much. Good graphics and music tho. |
| Apr 25 09:41:16 | 9m 38s | Guitar Fighter | ♥ 1 | Interesting idea! But I find it really hard to focus on both at the same time. Also, maybe the keys to trigger should be in line instead of switching from A and D (by the way, I'm on azerty) to mouses button. It could be more intuitive imho. Good work anyway! |
| Apr 25 09:47:30 | 6m 14s | Court Invaders | ♥ 1 | Difficult but an interesting mix of genres. I liked the pixelated 3d :) |
| Apr 25 09:54:09 | 6m 39s | A Fistful of Shrooms | ♥ 1 | Ho no! I can't play it on my shitty laptop (too much input delay). Would have to try it on a friend's computer. |
| Apr 25 10:01:39 | 7m 30s | Vector Rabbits Slayer | ♥ 1 | Nice game. The graphics are really the thing that make it shine. However the lack of sounds is detrimental to the mood. Also, the jump was a bit short imo. Good work! |
| Apr 25 11:15:52 | 1h 14m | CityDefense | ♥ 1 | The idea and the execution are great! The concept is worth exploring. Really good job, would love to see this much more developed :) |
| Apr 25 12:41:07 | 1h 25m | Patrick's Shoot Towers Pew Pew! | ♥ 1 | Nice! However I don't really see the racing part except the fact that we control a vehicle. The music is mesmerizing! Good work! |
| Apr 25 14:49:22 | 2h 08m | Black Horizon | ♥ 1 | Unfortunately, the game didn't work for me and my shitty laptop. In high quality or normal the car would not accelerate and in low quality the FOV is too short to see. Would have to try it later on another computer. |
| Apr 28 12:13:23 | 69h 24m | Wreckless Rally | ♥ 2 | Fun little game. Really liked the music. Good work! |
| Apr 28 12:22:06 | 8m 43s | Praxre | ♥ 1 | The game was interesting but I think the genres are more stacked up than mixed together. Good work. |
| Apr 28 12:38:44 | 16m 38s | About Love | ♥ 1 | Surprisingly good and addictive. We made it to the end so that's already a good pont for you. Also the game was very polished. Great work! |
| Apr 28 12:51:41 | 12m 57s | Dancemazing | ♥ 1 | Interesting. I assumed that "dance game" meant "rythm game" but that was not really the case. Good work. |
| Apr 28 13:08:42 | 17m 01s | Think Before Escape | ♥ 1 | Interesting concept. The genres works together. It was also puzzle / plateformer. What could be improved for us is a way to interact with the time phase. Shorten it with a skill or a collectible. Good work, could be turned into a full game imo. |
| Apr 28 13:20:36 | 11m 54s | Danmakoïd - Bullet hell metroidvania | ♥ 1 | You respected the main elements of the genres you are mixing. This was working very well and made us retry several times the game. Would love to see this turned into a full game. Good work! |
| Apr 28 13:33:26 | 12m 50s | Crazy Cube | ♥ 1 | Really interesting. The genres combined imo are more puzzle and shooter. It gave me a rubik's cube vibe. I think you have a pretty interesting idea on your hands! Good work even if it was a little rough around the edges. |
| Apr 28 13:44:48 | 11m 22s | Shuffle Climber | ♥ 1 | Fun little game. Maybe it lacks a bonus to reroll all your hand? Good work overall! |
| Apr 28 13:56:59 | 12m 11s | Type n' Jump | ♥ 2 | I was pretty sceptic with the concept from the get go but you manage to surprise me. Could be a bit tiring on the long term tho. Good work. |
| Apr 28 14:03:39 | 6m 40s | Soccer Fight | ♥ 1 | Good point for the humor! |
| Apr 28 14:11:04 | 7m 25s | Haiti Kitty | ♥ 1 | Nice little graphical adventure. The graphics were the things that made it shine. Good work. |
| Apr 28 14:22:02 | 10m 58s | Stealth Trucking | ♥ 1 | The two genres were working pretty well together. Good idea to use the light from the trucks as a cone of vision. The way the truck was moving gave the game a "heavy" gamefeel wich is fitting the trucks theme but a bit detrimental to the fun imho. Good work overall! |
| Apr 28 14:46:40 | 24m 38s | The Heat Of Battle | ♥ 1 | Unfortunately we got stuck because we put the wrong people together. Too bad because we had a really gret time playing. Awesome humor and mood! Cheers! |
| Apr 28 15:00:53 | 14m 13s | Peculiar Adventures of Dorothy Hops | ♥ 2 | You really respected the theme and managed to do something with those two incompatible genres. The game was fun. The graphics were really good, nice reflection effect. Good work! |
| Apr 28 16:09:23 | 1h 08m | Dark Soil | ♥ 1 | I'm amazed by the level of quality and polish. This could really be turned to a full game. Love the "build your own level and difficulty" factor. Congratulations! |
| Apr 28 22:07:17 | 5h 57m | DUNK EM UP! | ♥ 1 | I was hyped by your posts during development and I am not disappointed. The game feel is really good. I found myself restarting multiple times. Very good work! |
| Apr 28 22:12:08 | 4m 51s | SCARE-CADE | ♥ 1 | Nice game, I had fun. Would have loved to be able to "charge" an attack and then release it when the enemy is close. Good work! |
| Apr 30 11:49:22 | 37h 37m | Golf N' Grenades | ♥ 1 | Awesome music. Loved the low poly art. Did you make those yourself? The game was hard to play. Maybe you should be able to aim (left , right) after you start charging your shots. There are definitively some gameplay aspects that can be improved but nice work overall. Cheers! |
| Apr 30 11:56:18 | 6m 56s | Cyclevania | ♥ 2 | Fun concept! However I found it a bit too fast for me. Maybe having 2 different speed could help. The sfx were good but I think the music doesn't really fit the game. Either go full castlevania or extreme sport punchy music. Good work! |
| Apr 30 12:10:41 | 14m 23s | Ultimate Hero Simulator | ♥ 2 | Interesting. However for me it was more an action platformer with some QTE. I didn't quite get everything that was happening. Maybe a little tutorial could help. The graphics and the music were good. Good work! |
| Apr 30 12:20:02 | 9m 21s | Daxua | ♥ 1 | Super cool mood! The graphics are very good and the music is on point. The gameplay is good but not at the same level as the art. The game is short but I had a great time anyway! Didn't really get what the genres are ... beat em up and? Good work. |
| Apr 30 12:30:02 | 10m 00s | Chef, yes chef! | ♥ 0 | The game looks really cool but unfortunately is laggy on my shitty laptop. Can't rate but thumbs up for the effort ;) |
| Apr 30 12:49:00 | 18m 58s | Helsing | ♥ 2 | Interesting! The concept is worth exploring. I had a great time and the last level was very satisfying! On the down side, having to hit multiple times keys to move was a bit unpleasant.Very good work overall! |
| Apr 30 12:59:55 | 10m 55s | Final Click ZX | ♥ 0 | Nice combination that worked very well. Maybe was it lacking some challenge? If I can't lose, is it really a game? Other than that, good work! |
| Apr 30 13:10:56 | 11m 01s | Magic The Shattering | ♥ 1 | Nice! Definitively got some Touhou vibes in here! Why can't I rate the mood of the game? Good work! |
| May 3 11:58:45 | 70h 47m | Intergalactic Goblin Ramming Speed! | ♥ 1 | The game looks really cool but unfortunately is too much for my pc to handle. Can't rate but really like the graphics and the concept. |
| May 4 11:22:56 | 23h 24m | Wandering Rogue | ♥ 0 | I had fun playing this game. Maybe could you had the possibility to do a shock wave by landing? It could create more gameplay opportunities. Anyway, the game feel was satisfying so with more content and a long term goal for the player, this game has potential. Good work! |
| May 4 14:39:27 | 3h 16m | Super Word Knight: Searching for Courage | ♥ 0 | A very simple concept but it works. Maybe you can extend the content of the games by also adding shapes or colours instead of words. Or you could have coloured words and sometimes you have to match the word, other times you have to match the colours. Good work! |
| May 4 15:01:32 | 22m 05s | INSiTU | ♥ 1 | After exiting the first room I just fall into the black space outside of the boundaries of the game. The game is pretty polished and the puzzle are hard. Made me think about Fez. I liked the overall mood of the game. Good work_ |
| May 5 14:56:55 | 23h 55m | Sword step | ♥ 0 | Very efficient. Sometimes I'm not sure which one I was. Would love to see this more content (weapons with different ranges). Love the minimalist aspect. Would be nice to have a little more audio (a short melody when you killed everyone in a wave. Good work! |
| May 5 15:07:06 | 10m 11s | Risky Squad | ♥ 0 | Good work! It deserve more ratings. Promote your game! |
| May 5 15:14:05 | 6m 59s | Dungeon Racers | ♥ 0 | Nice idea. The gameplay and the handling of the car is the thing to upgrade for me. Also it was hard to see what's in the way. I've been hitting lots of walls. Good work! |
| May 5 15:47:32 | 33m 27s | Puzzle Tower | ♥ 1 | Interesting concept!Could be expanded! A bit short but nice work! |
| May 5 16:00:03 | 12m 31s | Pinball Golf | ♥ 1 | Nice. Needs some more work on the physics. Good work. |
| May 8 11:50:59 | 67h 50m | Zig-Pong | ♥ 1 | So simple and effective! You have a good game on your hands. Graphics were on point and music was awesome! Good work! |
| May 12 20:30:48 | 104h 39m | One Man Crew | ♥ 1 | High score : 213. It was funny and the music was empowering. A bit repetitive but good work! |
| May 12 20:37:31 | 6m 43s | Magneto De Liquidus | ♥ 0 | I have to say it is pretty original. With more mechanics and polish this could be an interesting complete game. Good work! |
| May 12 20:44:46 | 7m 15s | Officer Pain - The Smash Cop | ♥ 1 | I feel like the player is missing some feedback about when he is charging hits. The game was ok but the characters felt a bit motionless. Good work overall! |
| May 12 21:04:06 | 19m 20s | Tower Racer | ♥ 0 | Would be nice to be able to shoot with the mouse! Also, for this type of game, I prefer if the car/tower is facing up when no keys are pushed. Easier to control imo. Good work! |
| May 12 21:33:04 | 28m 58s | Black-Crops: Tactical Farming | ♥ 0 | Surprisingly addictive! Loved the metal gear-like music and sound effects. I spent a bit of time on this one which is a good sign. Good work! |
| May 12 21:33:57 | 53s | Total Cornage | ♥ 0 | Unfortunately my shitty laptop can't run this game properly, so I can't rate it. Too bad the game don't have a low settings option. |
| May 15 11:20:29 | 61h 46m | Self Golf | ♥ 1 | Very effective little game. Simple and funny. Would be cool to be able to cancel your shot once you have charged too much. Also maybe a hard mode where you can't walk and the only moving option is to shoot. Great game! (Ho I made it to the leaderboard!) |
| May 15 11:28:59 | 8m 30s | Game Jam the Game | ♥ 0 | Nice. Made me think about Gamedev Tycoon (of course). For what I understood it is like a guessing game, which I'm not a big fan of. Good work anyway! |
| May 15 11:34:59 | 6m 00s | Evil Bunny | ♥ 1 | I have to say it is pretty intimidating with all those menus. A good improvement imo would be to have a little tutorial explaining to the player what are the objectives of the game and how to reach them. Like something that take them through the basic game loop once and then let them free. |
| May 15 15:18:57 | 3h 43m | SURVABY | ♥ 2 | It works well! The tension of the zombies + the tension of the babies makes a great but stressing game. Also you got an extra star for humour because of the baby sounds made by adults :) |