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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Jonathan Lorenz's comment | |
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| Aug 15 11:25:20 | Running out of Graves | ♥ 0 | Fun little game. I liked the mood of the game. There's isnt much happening in the middle since all the corpses are coming from the sides of the screen. Maybe add a little something there? Good work overall! Cheers! | |
| Sep 3 12:21:45 | 456h 56m | Getting Over Gold Hoarding | ♥ 0 | Fun little game. I would have liked a musical score to help improve the mood. Good work! |
| Sep 3 12:34:47 | 13m 02s | Gravity Hook | ♥ 0 | Interesting idea. The character was a bit hard to control in space (which is the point) but my feelings where that it (the movements of the character) was lacking a bit of pleasure. Good plateformer/puzzle overall! |
| Sep 3 12:43:21 | 8m 34s | HexaGlitcher | ♥ 0 | Instant fun! This simple but effective concept works very well. I restarted the level after dying multiple times. Add a few differents levels and weapons and you have a cool complete game! When is the battle royal mode out? Cheers! |
| Sep 3 12:52:03 | 8m 42s | CapyBarbra: A New Brow | ♥ 1 | The gameplay and game pleasure were ok but it's really in the other categories that your game shine. Thumbs up for the humour and the cool chiptune! |
| Sep 3 12:57:58 | 5m 55s | Disaster at Starbase 7 | ♥ 1 | Nice! This game made me a bit nostalgic because it made me think about old DOS games that I was playing in my early years like Duke Nukem 1 or Slime World. So you definitively got me ont the mood, graphics and music categories. Good work! |
| Sep 3 13:13:30 | 15m 32s | Devil Warship Makujin | ♥ 2 | Imo this kind of movements doesn't fit really well a shmup. I had a hard time aiming at ennemies whiles they were pretty good at shooting me. Maybe add a fonctino to rotate without moving? Or use two axis, one for aiming, one for shooting. Other then that, the game is nice. Good work. |
| Sep 3 13:51:52 | 38m 22s | Poisoned Palace | ♥ 2 | This looks like my type of games! Unfortunately it was a bit laggy with my shitty laptop :( Anyway, the gamefeel was very good (except the jump which can be "lighter" imo). Got a Metroidish mood and I liked it! Good work! |
| Sep 3 14:01:24 | 9m 32s | FIND - A - MOLE | ♥ 0 | This execution is good but I felt that the concept was lacking some mechanics. Will now try the lowrezjam edition of the game to see the improvements :) Good work! |
| Sep 3 14:27:32 | 26m 08s | Goo'N'Ghosts | ♥ 0 | Very good mood! The graphics and the music are the highlights of your game imo. The movements and jumps feel a bit off. It is the part that I think needs improvements. Also I would have liked to play the game with a controller but unfortunately, jump wasn't mapped. Good work overall! |
| Sep 3 14:40:37 | 13m 05s | Get Off My Space | ♥ 1 | Fun little game. There a fews details taht I didnt liked, like the fact taht some bushes are blocking you, which made the movements a bit frustating. Also the fact that you cannot move diagonally. I would also liked to have a use for the apples you collect. Like, spend X apples to get a better weapon or unleash a secret attack. Good work overall! |
| Sep 3 15:05:26 | 24m 49s | Plenty Of Junk | ♥ 1 | Godot doesn't work very well on my computer :/ But I wanted to comment anyway because the thumbnail caught my attention, so it's already a little victory. Cheers! |
| Sep 4 07:21:53 | 16h 16m | Super Hoarder Man | ♥ 0 | On my shitty computer, both the html and the windows build don't work :/ |
| Sep 4 08:30:16 | 1h 08m | 11042 | ♥ 1 | Love the Flashback / Prisoner of Ice vibe! However, imo there was a bit too much to do for the first level, maybe trim it down to fewer task and later increase the number of tasks. Also, at a certain point, my cheap pc started lagging and never recover. Good work and good mood! |
| Sep 4 08:47:39 | 17m 23s | Hiding Spot | ♥ 1 | Very simple but very effective! Made me think about Stephen's Sausage Roll. I don't have much advices since the game is polished in nearly every aspect. Sometimes you're not sure in what direction you're gonna go when you press a key, but that's a common trait for isometric games. Very good work! |
| Sep 4 08:57:11 | 9m 32s | Bloody Hooligans | ♥ 1 | Funny. Made me think about zombie driver. Imo it lacks some "spices" to add replayability. Maybe add some bonuses that pops on the floor. Or add a combo mechanic that can unlocks another football ball. Good work overall! |
| Sep 4 10:46:06 | 1h 48m | You Wanna Pizza Me? | ♥ 0 | Nice! The only complaint I would make is that it's not always clear if your position is correct to kill the delivery guys. Sometimes I felt like I was at a good spot but the delivery guys see me and kills me. Other thant that, good little game! |
| Sep 4 10:53:07 | 7m 01s | Bloody Cell | ♥ 1 | Yes! I like this kind of simple concept, just nicely executed. The fun was here and that is the mlost important part for me. I also like (and am guilty of) simple cube design. The only thing that bothered me was the fact that the blood stains are about the same colour as the cancer cells, which made the game a bit unreadable at a certain point. Good work! |
| Sep 4 11:05:47 | 12m 40s | Cronus' Tomb 2 | ♥ 1 | Ho damn, why is this game so brutal? I'm totally in love with the art style, graphics and music. I also like this concept of simple quest where you have to grind a bit to level up. Made me think about Half Minute Hero. I'm a bit sad that the game is so hard, because I only manage to get to the first dongeon, die after getting a few gold coins, go to the shop to heal, rince and repeat :( However, you manage to hook me, I will try it again later. So Really awesome first impression, but then a bit disapointed by the brutal difficulty of the game. Good work! |
| Sep 4 11:28:46 | 22m 59s | Pizza Defender | ♥ 1 | Ok I don't mind some tomato zombies eating my pizza, daily occurence, but broccoli!?! That's one step too far! Good execution on the gameplay and graphic departement. I'm a bit sad you don't have a soundtrack that mixes elements of Tarantella and horror music. Good work, and watch out for thoses broccolis! |
| Sep 4 11:49:22 | 20m 36s | The Space Between Us | ♥ 1 | Fun little game! I liked the variety of the different levels. The art style is simple but suits the genre well. I manage to reach the end :) Simple game but effective. Good work! |
| Sep 4 12:20:00 | 30m 38s | The legend of the looter and the incredible backpack that never runs out of spac | ♥ 0 | I like the idea of crawling through a dongeon without having to kill anyone. It's a bit unexpected but it works! The game could use a mini map and a signal telling the player that he has completed the item list. Good concept, needs more digging. Good work! |
| Sep 4 13:03:13 | 43m 13s | Tales Of Steel And Mana: Empire's Birth | ♥ 2 | I have to say, it is a pretty ambitious game for a jam! I liked the adventure / rpg mood sprinkled with strategy elements! There are some elements of gameplay that remained mysterious to me (like the speed stat). I also would have loiked and indicator showing me when the monsters are gonna level up so I can make my route knowingly. But overall I think you have a solid basis for a good game! Good work! (The Undead Lord kicked my entire party's ass!) EDIT : Also, a short tutorial would be welcome. Maybe a short first level with only few encouters, a boss and a town. The game isn't that complicated but it can help players enjoy the game quicker. |
| Sep 4 13:45:29 | 42m 16s | ECO WARRIORS | ♥ 1 | That was hillarious AND enjoyable to play! Good job! |
| Sep 4 13:50:41 | 5m 12s | Escapeless | ♥ 1 | Looks really nice but unfortunately it is too laggy on my cheap computer :( |
| Sep 4 14:01:01 | 10m 20s | Organize Your Life | ♥ 1 | I tried stabbing the overseer with the screwdriver but it didn't worked... Awesome art but gameplay needs a bit of depth. Cheers! |