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Timestamp	Since previous	Game		Pat Cleaver's comment
Oct 5 16:40:54		Tables & Tremors	♥ 1	this was a fun one! You say in your description that you're bad at level design, but I thought these were actually really well thought out in terms of progression, taking a simple mechanic and stretching it out. Great work!
Oct 5 16:53:29	12m 35s	Everything is Fine	♥ 5	That sultry saxophone had me immediately intersted, the audio in general was really nice. So much beautiful art in this too, a very impressive entry indeed! It's fun to see what a larger team can manage at a jam!
Oct 5 16:59:26	5m 57s	The Leaning Tower Of Pizza	♥ 1	Who knew slow motion tumbling pizzas could be so fun? Nice entry, music really adds to the atmosphere too.
Oct 5 17:05:56	6m 30s	Bob's Underworld	♥ 2	looks and sounds great! The jump sound is a bit obnoxious maybe, especially since it gets spammed a lot. love the pixel art, fun design, I wish I didn't keep getting annihilated by those falling blocks XD
Oct 5 17:15:11	9m 15s	NauSea	♥ 1	well that escalated fast. It went from "there's clearly nothing to worry about" to "I'm stuck and need to be at 5 places at once". Nice work all around!
Oct 5 18:44:34	1h 29m	ALL PLANED	♥ 2	that was hilarious, AND fun! great work, had a blast with this one.
Oct 6 17:49:33	23h 04m	Negglected	♥ 1	I just lost a decent chunk of my evening to this game, so congrats on really hooking me in! Takes me back to some old school flash games (Burrito Bison anyone?) Really great work!
Oct 6 17:54:48	5m 15s	Unstable Adventures of the Space Engineer	♥ 1	The music was pretty ominous, so I expected something really terrible to happen to the poor guy. I guess the ship being destroyed is bad enough though... Nice art style, simple but effective mechanic. Nice work!
Oct 6 18:00:00	5m 12s	Where's My Tripod?	♥ 1	wow that was gorgeous, really nice combination of sweet pixel art, simple self explanatory mechanic and serene atmosphere from the piano and forest ambience. I really enjoyed this, congrats on putting it all together!
Oct 6 18:21:02	21m 02s	Wobbly Penguins	♥ 6	I would have been entirely satisfied with just the penguin guiding game, but you folks went above and beyond and did twice the work! Cool idea, nice subversion, great work!
Oct 6 18:50:27	29m 25s	Unstable	♥ 1	only time will tell indeed...nice game!
Oct 6 20:11:24	1h 20m	F%$#IN BIRDS!	♥ 2	very fun and addicitve! Games that use shouting into a microphone as mechanic just never get old!
Oct 7 16:18:53	20h 07m	PTSD Fishing	♥ 2	I made it to 5 fish! Really like the art work and simple but fun mechanics. Congrats!
Oct 7 16:26:16	7m 23s	Hellbamb	♥ 2	really nice work on the art front, and the music isn't bad either. I wish there had been more to the gameplay, it's sort of Mastermind but just brute force.
Oct 7 16:32:43	6m 27s	Crazy Cauldron	♥ 1	really great game! fun concept, cute artwork (and SO MUCH of it too!), nice audio too. Congrats, a very impressive entry!
Oct 7 16:40:21	7m 38s	Ethereal Runner	♥ 3	very nice game! Took me a second to get the hang of juggling the 3 mechanics (yeah I'm an idiot...) having to balance the speed vs attacking vs shielding was very cool. Congrats to the team!
Oct 7 16:55:03	14m 42s	A Hard Pill to Swallow	♥ 1	I did it, Let's Go!!! Really great game, just the perfect scope for a jam, lots of fun enough variation, humour. Great stuff all round!
Oct 7 18:17:27	1h 22m	the cards we're dealt	♥ 3	That was fantastic, such a serene experience, very sweet little vignettes, and gorgeous piano playing(really flows!) Congrats to the team whole!
Oct 10 15:38:59	69h 21m	Snowbody's Mountain	♥ 2	OK this is a fantastic mechanic, but SOOOOOOOO punishing. I would love to have seen more of the levels, but I lost patience with it I'm afraid. It's a very cool idea, nice art and music. Congrats!
Oct 10 15:55:31	16m 32s	Emily vs the Unstable Creatures	♥ 1	Very nice game! I got the bug where I could purchase lots of upgrades at once and go into debt, which obviously ruins the upgrade path. The dialog felt kind of long winded and unnecessary at times to me, and there are some blatant language mistakes in there (totally understandable for non-native english speakers though). The art is stunning, and the music is sweet too (elevator music for the shop is perfect!0 overall great work
Oct 10 16:02:55	7m 24s	Un-stabled	♥ 3	Pretty cool using your own engine for this. I found the floatiness a bit too much, would have liked things to feel a bit more grounded. My team didn't end up going with the "horses escaping a stable" approach to the theme, but we did have a good laugh discussing a "horse heist" concept, so it's nice to see someone went for it! Congrats!
Oct 10 16:22:08	19m 13s	Rocky Rhodes and the Cracked Case	♥ 3	OK this was fantastic, what a trip! Only remark I'd have is, could you maybe add a changelog to this page to explain what the differences are in the postjam version? It's only fair to label that clearly on your page while the rating phase is still happening. It's a very polished and diverse experience, nice voice acting, tons of great art and different mechanics. Great work to the whole team!
Oct 11 09:29:40	17h 07m	Brittle Buildings	♥ 2	very cool concept, and nicely executed, congrats! This is a perfect little loop for a jam game, kept me engaged for a while. Great work!
Oct 11 09:38:22	8m 42s	Pile Up Medieval	♥ 2	wow this is so cool! I would have been happy with just the "build a town and try to get as many inhabitants as possible" concept, but the dragon is a cool addition. Some nice variety in all the buildings too. Great job!
Oct 11 09:59:38	21m 16s	BeaverShock	♥ 1	I enjoyed this one. I got stuck when the log floated down the river. The music is very cool, although I don't really feel like it fits the game, I guess it's something you just took from somewhere since you don't list a composer or audio desinger? Just some forest sounds would probably have worked just as well. Some simple puzzles, the ever shifting world mechanic works well. Nice job overall!
Oct 11 10:10:38	11m 00s	Paper Route	♥ 1	very nice take on the game. Didn't make it past the construction site, but I may have to return to it. For someone just starting out making games this is very impressive, congrats!
Oct 11 10:17:27	6m 49s	Unstable: Save a Herd of Horses	♥ 4	I really enjoyed the art style on this. I only saved 3 horses (I feel terrible...). My team considered "Horse Heist" during our brainstorming, but we ended up going with a different idea, this was a fun take on that! Congrats!
Oct 14 12:56:05	74h 38m	AFTER SUN	♥ 1	very nice work! It took me a while to understand the controls properly, and there seems to be a bug where you keep getting teleported away from thje platform when trying to climb the stairs. I really enjoyed this when I got the hang of it though! Congrats
Oct 14 13:02:12	6m 07s	The Unstable Comet	♥ 1	I recognise those Kenney assets ;) I would have liked there to be a bit of progression and variation, some different sized hazards, maybe vary the speed of the player, throw in some "gates" you have toi fly through. But for a solo effort, this was really quite good, congrats!
Oct 14 15:30:02	2h 27m	Volatile	♥ 1	I enjoyed this one a lot, had that sweet addicitive game loop. A simple enough concept, but well executed and the perfect scope for a jam game. Congrats!
Oct 14 15:37:45	7m 43s	Unfabled	♥ 2	What a great game! Love the art (and so much of it!!!), nice music (the sound effects on ennemy hit got repetitive and annoying though). It's a very strong entry overall, congrats!
Oct 14 15:44:20	6m 35s	Super Stable Charger Robot	♥ 1	fun game, interesting set of puzzles. Especially impressed that this is a compo entry, congrats!