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Electric Jezebel

By ottersden

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness1100
Audio2303.37
Innovation2653.45
Overall2893.46
Graphics3003.68
Fun3193.29
Mood3273.29
Humor6932.21
Theme7063.31

Comments

atomicvikings 2014-12-09 03:58

Cool game. I like the music. :-) Sometimes the scrolling of the screen is a bit slow. Keep that good work. :-)

jacksendary 2014-12-09 04:00

Very fun game the character times some time to get used to, both due to how much it slides and the bunny jumping.

disdanes 2014-12-09 04:00

Excellent graphics, and really unique take on the theme! I liked pushing the screen to see more of the level and reveal some of the platforms. The jumping could use some improvement - it was a bit frustrating.

pinpickle 2014-12-09 04:01

This is a really neat idea, good way of getting around the restrictions of the theme. The puzzles certainly had me stumped - a great turnout in terms of thinking in such a short amount of time.

The graphics did seem a bit cobbled together, though.

stvr 2014-12-09 04:02

Didn't work for me. Pressing enter did nothing, and after that Unity was giving me errors.

bkgh 2014-12-09 04:03

Amazing for a first attempt!
One pet peeve of mine, A and D could be used for movement, but S couldn't be used for interactions, I had to actually use the down key.

jpcote 2014-12-09 04:05

Nice game! Puzzles are challenging!

fatkarate 2014-12-09 04:07

its pretty neat

dracomagna 2014-12-09 04:08

Good game, the concept is simple but it's quite interesting. I think you really got something with this game.
The only problem I had was the frustration of having to push again and again the screen.

Anyway, this concept is really interesting and the graphics are pretty :D

digibody 2014-12-09 04:09

I think the moving screen breaks the theme. Graphics are nice, controls are not easy, a bit sticky.

rjhelms 2014-12-09 04:09

Great game. Great interpretation of the theme, nice visual style, and just about the right puzzle difficulty.

I'd love to see more of this!

akurn 2014-12-09 04:10

Great puzzles!

ricardobusta 2014-12-09 04:11

great sound!

thingostudios 2014-12-09 04:12

The most polished game I've seen so far, with an amazing score and really nice graphics. I would love to see this fleshed out into a full game!!

coolchesire 2014-12-09 04:13

I really enjoy the puzzles.

soulgame 2014-12-09 04:17

Graphics are nice but i think some animation could improve the overall. Puzzle platfrom challenge seems to be here but i felt stuck when i pushed floors with the rigid jump.

frump 2014-12-09 05:04

Moving the screen around to reveal the level seem like the opposite of having the entire game on one screen. I didn't realize the circuitry parts were hazards until I walked over them.

HelkeGames 2014-12-09 07:32

Nice game! I love the music and the game design! Congrats!!^^

ottersden 2014-12-09 09:26

Thanks for the feedback, everyone! We are listening to all your comments! :)

happytransportgames 2014-12-09 09:38

Nice puzzles, quite addictive. I wanted something "more" to justify the theme.. Clever idea anyway! :)

oscarabraham 2014-12-09 22:08

Really nice way to push the theme (pun not intended)

voidqk 2014-12-10 00:30

great game! 5/5!

aflatminerstudios 2014-12-10 05:36

Neat mechanic and nice use of the theme. A little bit of tweaking (jumping and edge pushing) and some additional levels and this is ready for full release.

pavel_insight 2014-12-10 13:13

Congrats with your first game! Very interesting concept. Can't stop playing. :)

hollowspecter 2014-12-10 18:34

Wow. Just wow. Excellent use of theme and terrific game and level design in case of ramping and making the player think out of the box literally. The only flaw I found was sometimes when falling down you could die without a warning.

hollowspecter 2014-12-10 18:36

Also Kudos to using a woman of color as your main character (with an awesome name! (my middle name is jezebel, thats why i played :D))

phocker 2014-12-11 04:24

nice job - enemies moved a little fast - still fun

gemberkoekje 2014-12-11 16:31

Nice game. I like how the main character looks, it looks like a real game character! Other than that I found it a bit too hard, but I did like how you integrated and played with the theme. Very nice effort!

shivur 2014-12-11 18:08

Interesting interpretation of the theme.

pjchardt 2014-12-12 05:12

Nice. Interesting puzzles utilizing the screen mechanic:)

kalaskrysset 2014-12-12 09:37

Cool art style and smooth movement/controls. Moving the screen is a little slow. Really impressed by the puzzle mechanics!

tritegames 2014-12-12 12:12

Enjoyed it a lot. The challenges with the portals, doors and the screen movement are a great idea. The only thing that bothers me, are the enemies which don't seem to fit with the overall art style. But still good job :)

panda 2014-12-13 03:43

That third level is hard! I didn't really make it to the puzzle part, but the game's well done! The character looks amazing, how did you make it look so good?

kddekadenz 2014-12-13 22:09

Unity web player does not support Linux OS.
You may want to add a Linux executable :)

sivgoose 2014-12-13 22:14

dunno if it quite fits the genre. and it was very frustrating when trying to see what comes next, a lot of times I had to kill my self just to find out. graphics and controls on the other hand where great, just go too frustrated from having though throw myself into the abyss. if you could scroll with the mouse or drag it too see what comes next tho I feel that would improve your fantastic idea

pkenney 2014-12-13 22:16

Cool puzzle platformer with a nice mix of metal and physical challenges! Great work and a nice mechanic for the theme.

donovanwu 2014-12-13 22:27

Very innovative game mechanics of having to push the screen and actually change the game world by doing that.

yodamaster 2014-12-14 13:35

Solid game. Interesting use of the theme. Fun to play. Please add more levels!

lereveur 2014-12-14 21:34

Very interesting interpretation of the theme ! Good job !

puppetmaster 2014-12-15 20:28

I love the music.

Well made!

01rafael 2014-12-20 21:49

Camera is really hard move across the screen. Maybe it would be better if you'll fix the camera behavior

zompi 2014-12-20 22:35

Ok, the idea that behind the screen nothing exists is awesome! It gives opportunity to create awesome riddles.
Graphics are nice, but music is fantastic it creates great mood. Good job! :)

lynx 2014-12-27 22:20

Interesting game, the player didn't seem to match the visual styling as much as the rest of the artwork and enemy characters though.

I like the in-game music a lot, the menu music seemed a bit out of place though.

Anyways, these are just minor things, overall you guys did great!

anachron 2014-12-29 09:01

Nice game! The controls are pretty tight, although the screen-pushing feature makes it a bit difficult to jump onto platforms sometimes. Really great for a fist attempt, good work :)