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5 Days On 2 Days Off

By bradleysmith

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Mood224.05
Coolness372
Graphics754.04
Theme1074.09
Overall2513.49
Humor3152.63
Audio4322.91
Innovation6403.02
Fun7592.76

Comments

SuperlevelSebastian 2013-04-28 11:45

Lovely piece of work.

bradleysmith 2013-04-28 12:37

Thank you kindly.

joekinglake 2013-04-28 12:56

Awesome piece of work. Very enjoyable experience.

chman 2013-04-28 21:06

Really interesting game. Simple but concise storytelling.

There was a few typos though, and I got this error at launch :

TypeError: Error #1009: Cannot access a property or method of a null object reference.
at RECOVER_Game1_fla::MainTimeline/Main()[RECOVER_Game1_fla.MainTimeline::frame2:24]

chman 2013-04-29 05:50

(Rating comment, see the post above. Btw, still get the error at launch)

bradleysmith 2013-04-29 14:01

Thank you so much for playing... what were the typos? I'm quite bad at English which was the reason I wanted to try something like this just to work on my storytelling... lack of sleep probably didn't help too. xD
I'll work on fixing those errors too.

Thanks again!

geepit 2013-04-29 15:16

Graphics and the story were really nice! Very enjoyable

vikingjonathan 2013-04-29 15:17

Fantastic game, I love the feel of it.

igrowbeards 2013-04-29 15:17

Nicely done.

depp 2013-04-29 15:18

This made me smile.

atrodo 2013-04-29 15:18

Very simple and well done story.

cmayhem 2013-04-29 15:19

Very very cool, great art direction.

overv 2013-04-29 15:20

Very well done.

bradleysmith 2013-04-29 15:24

Thank you so much.

rab236 2013-04-29 15:27

Though short, it was a good experience. The graphics style fits the theme quite well.

ariake81 2013-04-29 15:38

nice, short and sweet.

idovoodoo 2013-04-29 15:53

I really enjoyed this. Great story telling and beautiful artwork :) well done!

bortstudios 2013-04-29 18:22

I actually really liked the story in this game. Short, but presented well, and with a good message

stqn 2013-04-29 18:24

Nice even though it’s not really a game.
I notice someone else did the audio, then it should be in the jam.

bradleysmith 2013-04-29 18:28

What do you mean should be in the jam? o.o

jellycakes 2013-04-29 19:16

The cube with the tie was an amazing Idea. A great take on the deep oppression of going to a really boring office job, and just wanting to quit.

rafaelsales 2013-04-29 19:37

Great work. The universe that you created is very immersive. Congratz!

onzephyr 2013-04-29 19:41

short and sweet. Nice story.

lioneljitro 2013-04-29 20:05

I loved the art style.

Music made a great atmosphere.

lidfrid 2013-04-29 21:38

5 stars for me, great work, i have goosebumps :)

saggiosoft 2013-04-30 11:30

Short, minimal, straightforward. Great art.

ariake81 2013-04-30 23:16

Not sure this is a game your supposed to enjoy!? Tells an interesting story and perfectly captures the drudgery of work. Graphic and sound track are neat but personally think it would benefit from an upbeat tempo at the end. I like the exploration and the unobvious direction. Plays smooth, no bugs

vilya 2013-05-01 22:30

This is amazingly atmospheric & the music is incredible. I really liked the introduction of colour too. The one criticism is that it's more of a story than a game... but one I really wanted to see through to the end!

messiano 2013-05-01 22:43

Pretty sweet!

nate427 2013-05-01 23:12

Very nice story! It felt short but that's understandable because you only had 48 hours, but I love how you put so much detail in all the levels. I did a similar storytelling thing (with a very different interpretation though) and didn't get to put in nearly as much detail as I wish I had.

killedbyapixel 2013-05-01 23:19

Cool game, good design flow and visual style! I liked where it was going but it ended too soon.

the-jack 2013-05-02 07:25

Thank you for introducing me to Steve Hughes. Game's great too.

miotatsu 2013-05-03 22:56

very nice storytelling and artwork :)

atraxgames 2013-05-09 11:49

I love story-telling experiments. Add some kind of choices, that would be interesting

recursor 2013-05-11 00:55

Love the cubes with ties and the little janitor sweeping the floor.

minionstudios 2013-05-13 21:49

Simple and fun. I like the art style.

sylvain-p 2013-05-14 19:02

Good game (It look like every day the same dream) with very nice atmosphere (anxious), maybe a bit too short.

farmergnome 2013-05-16 08:21

Full points for Mood and Graphics and Theme, this definitely brightened my day, very simple but expertly crafted. Good job.

tomk32 2013-05-16 08:28

Excellent game, and love the the minimalistic character who is so much like Pixel in my game.