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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Daniel123's comment | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Oct 7 13:38:13 | Autumn Apples | ♥ 3 | Really like the art style of your game. | |
| Oct 7 13:53:23 | 15m 10s | As Before | ♥ 1 | I‘m sorry to say but this game is simply unfinished. Your idea is great. It’s a pity there wasn’t enough time. Perhaps sometimes, completion matters more than perfection. |
| Oct 7 13:57:04 | 3m 41s | Grabby | ♥ 1 | 想法很好，就是对手残党不太友好 |
| Oct 7 14:01:53 | 4m 49s | Revolution Nexus | ♥ 1 | 这UI是真的无敌。真的是两天做出来的吗...叹为观止 |
| Oct 7 15:18:02 | 1h 16m | SPIRAL | ♥ 4 | The design of the scene is awesome. It's just the character is too short—I don’t feel like I’m controlling a person.I feel more like I’m controlling a walking ball haha. |
| Oct 7 15:29:49 | 11m 47s | Cardboard Collector | ♥ 2 | To be honest, I think you'd better make a guidance in the game. It's a little bite confusing . |
| Oct 9 14:28:38 | 46h 58m | Collectorogue | ♥ 1 | We need more cats! |
| Oct 9 14:32:08 | 3m 30s | Neon Doll Maker | ♥ 0 | Simple but really interesting. Like your game. |
| Oct 9 15:06:28 | 34m 20s | SNoWay | ♥ 1 | Maybe we can try to make snow ball bigger. |
| Oct 9 15:15:28 | 9m 00s | Opa is de Koning | ♥ 2 | You made this in three days. Incredible. |
| Oct 9 15:30:26 | 14m 58s | Holy Eggs | ♥ 0 | Met the same problem on windows. Can't start the game. |
| Oct 9 15:33:44 | 3m 18s | Mars Rovers | ♥ 1 | Great game. If there's a background music, it would be better. |
| Oct 9 15:58:42 | 24m 58s | Canned | ♥ 1 | The mood of the game is great. I believe a background music would be better. By the way, do you use ai for creating the sentences. It feels a little weird when reading the context. |
| Oct 9 16:13:12 | 14m 30s | Rust Rebirth | ♥ 2 | Truly amazing. Really like the atmosphere that been created. Can't believe this could be done in just three days. You guys are monsters. |
| Oct 10 01:15:31 | 9h 02m | Claw & Collect | ♥ 0 | I think time limited your creation. |
| Oct 10 01:20:18 | 4m 47s | United Stamps | ♥ 1 | The guy who made this game must really hate breakfast. |
| Oct 10 02:31:53 | 1h 11m | Asteroid Miner | ♥ 0 | Is it just me, or there's no sound in this game. |
| Oct 10 02:50:22 | 18m 29s | Capo Collector | ♥ 1 | I really like the idea. But I have to say the UI design of the book and the document could be better. You can see the letter on the book squeezing and the hole on the document paper block the first letter of the sentence. |
| Oct 10 02:57:29 | 7m 07s | Pekko's Bottle Odyssey | ♥ 2 | Good game. The content in the store looks like it's written by hand. |
| Oct 10 03:06:19 | 8m 50s | Precious Cargo | ♥ 1 | Same problem. The link is broken. |
| Oct 10 04:16:10 | 1h 09m | Antiquas | ♥ 0 | To be honest, it’s not so good. You used pre-made assets. And if you only need an indoor scene, you could choose an enclosed one instead of the one you use now(you didn't even make the sky). |
| Oct 10 04:38:19 | 22m 09s | Talla and the Tomb of the Takers | ♥ 1 | After playing this game, I understand why do comment say the game feels a little wired. For the movement part, the player’s movement works like the command input: press the key once and move a space. Unlike free 3D movement, this can feel a bit strange. Also the font is a little bit difficult to recognize. Luckily, I a furry, so it's a good game for me :) |
| Oct 10 04:52:49 | 14m 30s | Host Collector | ♥ 1 | Brilliant idea, |
| Oct 10 05:19:09 | 26m 20s | The Poem Of Your Life | ♥ 1 | I like the floating fish. |
| Oct 10 05:42:19 | 23m 10s | If I Ran the (Alien) Zoo | ♥ 1 | I like the art of this game. A main menu would be better. |
| Oct 10 05:48:11 | 5m 52s | Monkey Business | ♥ 2 | Good game. Really funny, I think the guards in the zoo are all deaf. |
| Oct 10 06:31:20 | 43m 09s | Bail-out | ♥ 3 | Really like the hand made painting. |
| Oct 10 06:38:27 | 7m 07s | Doomsday Sale | ♥ 2 | Really like the background music. Great atmosphere. |
| Oct 10 06:52:34 | 14m 07s | Mom sent me Grocery Shopping | ♥ 1 | I think I need a bigger shopping car and more stable item. I just make a turn in the shop and all the products were thrown away:< |
| Oct 10 07:17:14 | 24m 40s | Lost In Taxation | ♥ 4 | As a fellow developer who also created a text-based game, I tip my hat to you. It’s a pity that due to time constraints, I couldn’t see the fully completed version of your game. The UI looks really clean and pleasant — it’s simple yet elegant. I can see a lot of potential for further improvement! |
| Oct 10 10:41:05 | 3h 23m | The Collection of Me - 自我图鉴 | ♥ 0 | 超赞的视觉小说，画面和背景音效都配合的很好，特别是点击物品之后出现的黑白画面，我个人特别喜欢这个画风。 |
| Oct 10 10:54:11 | 13m 06s | ＄ECURITY CHECK | ♥ 0 | The art of the game is amazing. Cooperate with the background music it creates a great atmosphere. |
| Oct 10 12:55:50 | 2h 01m | Leely in the Sky... | ♥ 0 | Sorry bro, but no background music or any sound effect really influence the game play experience. I have to use my phone to play some background music when playing this game:> |
| Oct 10 17:00:12 | 4h 04m | EYE DEALER | ♥ 1 | I like horror game. I think if you add some Milestone goals or levels in the game would made it much more interesting. |
| Oct 10 17:47:56 | 47m 44s | ColorCollector | ♥ 0 | very interesting game with brilliant idea.不过话说回来，我觉得可能做成关卡的样子会更加合适，这个游戏的模式我总感觉有点贴近魂游地图的感觉，对于我这种手残党就不是很友好哈哈。 |
| Oct 11 04:06:14 | 10h 18m | Trivia Hart in "The Case of the Porcelain Tricorn" | ♥ 1 | To be honest, we don't usually call this a game. We called this a masterpiece. The art, the music and the story, they are all wonderful. I hope this game could be number one in this event. |
| Oct 11 04:43:42 | 37m 28s | [blank] | ♥ 1 | I really like this kind of game, like the "milk inside a bag of milk..." this kind of style. Let the people see another form of the world. But I don't think it's a good idea to make it incomprehensible. Here's my own opinion: what makes the uncertainty attractive is the certainty. Maybe to add some certainty in this game would make it much more attractive. |
| Oct 11 13:25:22 | 8h 41m | Spyder | ♥ 1 | I really hope there would be some sound effect for this game. It would help make the game to the next level. |
| Oct 12 03:44:58 | 14h 19m | Trash Dash | ♥ 2 | Simple and fun. I like this game, I wish my car could jump like this. |
| Oct 12 03:53:22 | 8m 24s | Unwordy | ♥ 2 | I really think you can add a sound effect, at least some background music in this game. They can help to create the atmosphere. |
| Oct 12 10:06:01 | 6h 12m | I Need Paperplanes | ♥ 3 | I believe the backstory of this game with the art style in the title scene has the potential to become something truly exceptional. When I see the words "childhood dream of flying through the night sky", I came up with the story: The hospital is kind like a prison that built in your mind. The paper airplanes contain fragments of your memories — collecting them helps you recover those memories and overcome the shadows of your childhood. At last the moment you collect all the airplanes and let it flying through the night sky. It will bring the sunlight which is also the symbol of you accept your childhood trauma and ready to move on. Sadly this is just a little running game. It's also a good game but not the kind of style I like:) |
| Oct 13 20:04:23 | 33h 58m | Collector | ♥ 1 | To some extent, I think this kind of data collection could also be considered consistent with the theme of “collect.” Back to the topic. In this jam game project, I tried integrating a pre-trained Distil BERT model into the game to interpret player intentions and create a small text-based puzzle game. I’m really curious — did you also integrate an AI model into Unity to build your LLM simulator? |
| Oct 15 02:49:23 | 30h 45m | Guard the Forest | ♥ 1 | I really like the art of the game and the idea of reducing the game’s file size. My laptop doesn’t have a GPU, and it usually lags when running 3D games. But it didn’t happen with this game — that’s really great. Maybe it would be better to add some background music in this game. |
| Oct 15 08:14:10 | 5h 24m | WaveRush | ♥ 1 | Simple and interesting rouge like game. Here are few suggestions: 1. Add some appropriate audio cues, such as hit sound effects when the player takes damage, and a coin/pickup sound when collecting money. 2. Experiments show that in this kind of roguelike game, the player’s attack direction isn’t particularly important. Taking Brotato as a reference, you can simply auto-attack the nearest target, leaving the player to control only movement. This makes the game more confortable. |
| Oct 15 22:21:48 | 14h 07m | Shadowstalker | ♥ 0 | I really like the graphic and the darkness of creating the atmosphere. However, the atmosphere seems to be too dark that I can not see the environment clearly. I know this may be the design that you can only use the flash light to see it clearly. But I don't think this is a clever desgin. |