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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Donamougou's comment | |
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| May 1 22:47:02 | Yuki's mystery | ♥ 5 | Nice game! Too me longer than I'd like to admit to understand the trigger for the key, but it was hinted in the messages Incredible background quality. Music is cool asweel, and in the theme of the game. Don't know if it is intended but in the last sequence you can easily be stuck in a room if you don't go directly to the exit, which is a bit fustrating. | |
| May 1 22:57:59 | 10m 57s | Pigeon Post | ♥ 3 | WOW ! Music and art are fantastic ! Tutorial is perfect and allows to quickly enter in the game. From a gameplay point of view, mails feel a bit overwhelming, and it feels unfair to have a negativ score at the end of the day when you were as quick as possible. I died on the first day twice :( Overall, a really impressive entry ! You managed to give your game a strong 'Paper Please' vibe, congrats for that ! A small problem at launch due to the size of the game compared to the size of my screen. PS : Just saw in the comment that you can roll several letter in the same tube. So I'd update my comment saying that it wasn't clear for me aswell |
| May 1 23:13:01 | 15m 02s | Postman Path | ♥ 3 | I love the take on a puzzle game about delivery. Mechanics are cool and well explored. Music loop is too short in my opinion, and even if the music is cool I had to mute it to finish the game. (The LDjam integrated version doesn't work for me) |
| May 1 23:24:47 | 11m 46s | Guns and Toads: Battle for delivery | ♥ 3 | Nice art, you managed to obtain the feel of a 'Vampire Survivor' in only a week end it's impressive And a question : is you music a jojo ref ? |
| May 1 23:35:18 | 10m 31s | Olith | ♥ 2 | Your pixel art is very cool ! :usic is also very cool, and it's a nice touch that it's a different music when restarting the game. Nice entry. Camera is a bit confusing when dying and restarting the game. |
| May 1 23:40:45 | 5m 27s | Post It! | ♥ 2 | As @weston-goggins mentioned, it was a bit confusing to understand where we were compared to the building I feel like the controls have a potential to be really cool but it was difficult to understand them and then control properly the bird during the span of this test (4 tries of the 1st lvl) Nice entry though ! A lot of potential |
| May 1 23:48:35 | 7m 50s | Pizza Time | ♥ 2 | I LOVE the music and the mood it creates in the game ! Nice little puzzle game, really like the overall feel |
| May 1 23:55:42 | 7m 07s | Deliver Us Evil | ♥ 3 | I tried and I tried but couldn't figure what we were supposed to do, even with the hint. It could mitigate the frustration if we had a feedback when pressing enter to try a guess. Currently we don't know if it's doing something. The mood you created with whispers and graphics is really cool though |
| May 2 15:52:59 | 15h 57m | 26 Minutes or Less | ♥ 2 | Nice game ! Really like the humor and comments as boomers and anti home office from the mad employees ! Too bad there wasn't a ambiance music to go with that. Good job ! |
| May 2 15:57:43 | 4m 44s | Highway Delivery | ♥ 1 | Really nice feel when you can spam the letters the further you go in the game. As mentioned before, it leads to missclicking on upgrades as I was spamming the mouse-button. Music loop is a bit too short Nice entry ! |
| May 2 17:28:08 | 1h 30m | Mya's Pizza | ♥ 2 | The gameplay loop is simple yet very effective. Graphics and music are really cool ! Best entry so far ! Well done |
| May 2 17:35:41 | 7m 33s | Rescuer Rabbit | ♥ 2 | Nice entry! I like the way you went with the audio, really authentic. Quite difficult to be efficient in the saving of theses peoples. Maybe them being less slippy could improve the overall experience, as it was really difficult to push them, and I feel like it mandatory to F "Follow me!" them to bring them to the escape area. Well done ! |
| May 2 17:48:08 | 12m 27s | Maily Melo | ♥ 6 | As I only play the game that are directly available as HTML5, I was SOOOO glad you did because it looked amazing ! And boy was I not disappointed ! I love the art style ! Music is simple yet very entertaining. The narrative is really good and works well with the gameplay. Two things to improve this already awesome game : - Depending of where we open the letter, a part of it is masked by the screen size, and I needed to repack, move and reopen the letter. Being able to move the letter once open would be a nice QOL improvement - (Clearly out of the scope of this jam but) an achievement system to track if we experienced the all storyline depending on if we sent the letters to the good people would be really nice. Awesome entry, well done ! |
| May 2 17:51:41 | 3m 33s | Freight of BOOOM! | ♥ 3 | Hard game, but the "two characters for one player" works really well and gives depth to the game. Nice entry, well done ! |
| May 3 02:02:29 | 8h 10m | INTACT™ | ♥ 0 | Stuck my package behind a door on the first try :'( And on a pit on the second level :'( |
| May 3 02:09:06 | 6m 37s | Space Haulers Inc. | ♥ 2 | I like the idea of an Ogame-Like simulation, well fitted with the theme of the jam ! Difficult to know if I'm doing the good thing when exporting ressources. Nice entry ! Maybe the music loop is a bit short for a game that needs a lot of time to complete |
| May 3 02:14:54 | 5m 48s | Mt. Deliverest | ♥ 7 | Wow ! Really cool entry! The controls are sweet, and even if the game is difficult, and seems sometimes unfair (damn you avalanche!) it makes you want to play again Well done ! |
| May 3 02:18:55 | 4m 01s | Ultimate Package | ♥ 5 | Really nice entry! Graphics are really cool. The game feels a bit buggy sometimes (music stops, ennemies following us in other rooms (? maybe intended), we can re-jump when touching the edge of a plateform or flying over one) Overall a very nice entry ! Well done. |
| May 3 02:23:37 | 4m 42s | 30 Minutes Or Your Potion's Free | ♥ 2 | Wow, it feels like a full mobile game (mean that as a compliment, for a gamejam) ! Impressive ! Well done ! Don't know if it's a bug from my side, but I hadn't any music during the play. |
| May 3 02:27:21 | 3m 44s | Delivery Champ | ♥ 1 | @cmdpancakes, @brandon-campbell I also interpreted the theme as a baby delivery ahah :p But definitly not with the same approach Nice entry ! Took me a couple of seconds to understand what we were supposed to do (was expecting the baby the be catapulted to me), after that it's a nice little game. Well done ! |
| May 3 14:58:49 | 12h 31m | Dungeon Delivery | ♥ 4 | Really cool game for a first game jam ! Impressive Some commentaries : The concept is simple yet really cool, but the navigation in the level is quite difficult, and I ended several times in the bottom of the level, unable to go up. Maybe lowering just a little bit the plateform would greatly increase the experience ! And because I'm not really agile and I spent my time throwing the packages down without knowing the recipient, it became really difficult |
| May 3 15:31:44 | 32m 55s | Impeachment | ♥ 3 | Sprites and mood from the game is really well done ! From a gameplay point of view, it was difficult to understand how to grab the crown, and sometimes the swarm of ennemies made it impossible to take back efficiently leading to the gameover. But overall it is a really nice entry, well done ! |
| May 4 02:53:45 | 11h 22m | Constellation Courier | ♥ 5 | Amazing work team ! The music and art is from another world (pun intended). It was a really nice experience! And real quick emotional ! Love it ! |
| May 4 03:08:09 | 14m 24s | MailBeats ✉️🎶 | ♥ 2 | I was left hanging at the end of the first song, but gave a try to the second level and... WOW ! Music is really cool ! Gameplay is simple yet very responsive and gives a nice feel to the game. Pixel art is cool, it does the job but I my opinion you have a strong base to do some amazing pixel art... But for a jam it's already really cool. Well done ! |
| May 9 01:11:18 | 118h 03m | DECRYPTOR | ♥ 1 | Storywise, moodwise this game is amazing ! From a gameplay point of view, maybe having a different timing for the messages, in order for us to have something to do instead of just running around waiting for the message to give us clues. Very nice entry, well done ! And congratz for your 20th vote ;) |
| May 9 01:30:13 | 18m 55s | Delvery Service | ♥ 3 | Don't really know how, but I think I bugged the game. I delivered a package to a the troll thingy at the end of the first level, it gave a big package and then, nothing. I couldn't interact with anything in anyway. Or am I missing something ? The avocado ennemy got me once, apparently avocados are bad for your health, gotcha ! :p The feel (sound effect, fluidity etc...) when delivering packages is great ! As mentioned by others, a feedback when we are hitting ennemies could greatly improve the game. Nice entry, well done ! |
| May 9 01:34:09 | 3m 56s | Zero gravity delivery | ♥ 2 | Good job with the game ! The tutorial is very handy and well done ! A background music could greatly improve the overall experience |
| May 9 01:58:30 | 24m 21s | Read All About It | ♥ 2 | As you don't have an online version of your game and it requires to download it, you really should add images to improve your visibility and to make people want to play your game ! |