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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Arscene's comment | |
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| Apr 4 21:18:10 | DeLay Of DeLand | ♥ 0 | The concept is refreshing and the soundtrack is great. You should write down the controls on your page. The game begins kind of slow, something to fast forward the time would be a great addition. I don't think that I fully understood how messenger should be used. | |
| Apr 4 21:25:35 | 7m 25s | Kalopsia | ♥ 2 | I love the concept of the attack, drawing a triangle is very unique and it works really well with the design of the level. The weird little sounds that the enemy make are pretty fun. You made a really cool camera effect when sprinting. This game has a very nice concept, the downsides I see are: The controls could be a bit more snappy Some people seems to spawn horizontally There are some z-fights between the triangle you draw and the floor Nice job ! |
| Apr 4 21:27:51 | 2m 16s | Uchievements | ♥ 1 | Brilliant idea |
| Apr 4 21:33:23 | 5m 32s | Foundations | ♥ 3 | Hey there fellow card game maker ✌️ Why did you make me lose after all this hard work xD Great concept! |
| Apr 4 21:39:40 | 6m 17s | Ambulance Simulator | ♥ 1 | Love the sound design and the visual feedback when your patient is nearly dying / getting better. Simple, but effective. Nice entry ! |
| Apr 4 21:46:05 | 6m 25s | My Girlfriend Wants a PUPPY!! | ♥ 1 | I will not show your game to my girlfriend. Very nice job ! The only suggestion I have to add is to make the color of the particle you shoot match the kind of answer. |
| Apr 4 22:10:42 | 24m 37s | Starline Rescue Squad | ♥ 1 | Really great audio, love the mood ! |
| Apr 4 22:29:33 | 18m 51s | Future me problem | ♥ 1 | Sloppy physic always get me. Nice entry. |
| Apr 4 22:44:07 | 14m 34s | Click to Continue | ♥ 1 | Really clever, great job! |
| Apr 4 22:48:18 | 4m 11s | Cup Half Full | ♥ 1 | This game gets messy really fast xD. Nice arcady mood, loved this entry ! |
| Apr 4 22:58:52 | 10m 34s | Down to the Wire | ♥ 5 | Really clean entry, clever puzzles :) Good job. |
| Apr 4 23:07:35 | 8m 43s | Happy Piggy Farm | ♥ 1 | Really interesting concept and cute little pigs. I feel like I have the most fun when my pig is eating apple, yet the game don't want me to eat all the apples. Love this entry. |
| Apr 4 23:26:44 | 19m 09s | Ydunian Prune | ♥ 2 | Really solid entry, calming mood, nice visuals, well done! |
| Apr 4 23:34:19 | 7m 35s | Colony Defender | ♥ 3 | I love the idea. You could improve on feedbacks, it is not always clear where your turrets are. You could write down the exact controls as they may not be obvious to everyone. Great job! |
| Apr 4 23:36:53 | 2m 34s | 1000 Ducks | ♥ 2 | I don't know why, but I expected a much darker death animation and a lot more quacks. Really fun game! |
| Apr 4 23:47:42 | 10m 49s | Last Core | ♥ 0 | Cool intro. The controls are cool and the game is easy to pick up. Hard to master, but easy to pickup. This game could use some more balancing as to where the enemy shoot, spreading shots as the time goes by. Great entry! |
| Apr 4 23:52:53 | 5m 11s | Running the Clock | ♥ 3 | Great little game. If you plan to make the experience longer, I strongly suggest to stop time during dialogues. Loved the art, the sound, the level design and the persistance in death ! Great job. |
| Apr 5 00:00:19 | 7m 26s | HONORED EXECUTION | ♥ 3 | I had a blast, super fun! Great sounds ;) It's a simple mechanic well executed. Love all the visual feedbacks and the persistance. It's pretty hard to keep track of your kill count, adding it to the death screen would be fantastic. Well done! |
| Apr 5 00:06:12 | 5m 53s | Time Bandit | ♥ 1 | Hey there, great job on your entry. I think that you could make the clock disappear after some time, it would add more variety to the game. As @kurakurture mentionned the hitboxes and platform deserve a bit more attention. Also I noticed that if you collide with a demon some of its momentum sticks to your player until you jump on a tree. More snappy controls would greatly benefit the game. Overall you nailed it, keep up the good work! |
| Apr 5 00:13:02 | 6m 50s | Low Tide | ♥ 1 | Cute game, the camera if a bit frustrating. Out of curiosity, did you try a static camera ? Good job ! |
| Apr 5 08:44:07 | 8h 31m | Sunday Traffic | ♥ 2 | I really love your entry, only thing I could suggest is to make you lose when you cause a crash. I feel like trying to stress out the player to make "correct" decisions would improved the overall game feel. But hey, as mentioned this is a really solid entry! |
| Apr 5 09:04:56 | 20m 49s | The Manbutton Project | ♥ 1 | This game feels like playing QWOP, great job! One of my fav for sure. |
| Apr 5 09:13:10 | 8m 14s | Later... | ♥ 3 | What if some people enjoy writing code ? Just kidding, really well designed game. It's short, but on point. Good job ! |
| Apr 5 09:21:51 | 8m 41s | QUADRATORUM | ♥ 1 | The music really creates a great mood. I love the movements of the squares, it is really smooth! I would say that I expected to die faster. It takes quite some hits before dying. Great job! |
| Apr 5 09:48:27 | 26m 36s | We Need To Talk | ♥ 2 | My favorite game so far. Bravo. Very polished game! |
| Apr 5 10:24:48 | 36m 21s | Dating under the Comet | ♥ 1 | The first time I launched the game, I had to mute and then unmute the game to have audio. I don't know if this is consistent tho. Great game! It is very fun to play and it is a unique idea. If think that a fullscreen button would be great. As the page background is the same as the game background it is kind of confusing why clicks don't do anything. Other than that, nice entry! Good job. |
| Apr 5 11:14:00 | 49m 12s | Run Wacho Run | ♥ 8 | This game kept me hooked for a while xD It is fun and engaging to discover the not so much bonuses spawning. Good job. |
| Apr 6 11:39:32 | 24h 25m | Soul Drain | ♥ 0 | Your link does not work. You should probably upload a build on itch.io / update your drive link. |
| Apr 6 11:40:26 | 54s | Last Contact | ♥ 0 | Your itch.io link contains only an .apk. |
| Apr 6 11:51:57 | 11m 31s | Trouve ta voie | ♥ 1 | Hey there, If you can make a webgl build and host it (itch.io for example) it would probably make more people try your game out. Pros: - The idea of having an illness impact the gameplay is very clever and nicely implemented. - Your game fits the theme very well. Your game art is consistent. - Nice french touch Cons: - Some colliders are missing on buildings (bottom left for example) - It is really hard to remember addresses while having the pressure of the clock. Something like a map (even an image on your ludum page) showing roughly where the streets are would make your game more engaging I think. Congrats on your entry ! |
| Apr 6 11:54:56 | 2m 59s | Capsice | ♥ 3 | Sad to read your game deson't work ! Maybe the extra category may suit you. Congrats for doing the jam anyway. |
| Apr 6 12:08:37 | 13m 41s | Delay the Inevitable Explosion | ♥ 2 | Hey there, I downloaded Quest and gave your game a go! Marvelous text writing skills, your ability to describe environment is really good. I spotted some spelling mistakes, but nothing critical. I am not really used to read stories, but I really enjoyed the experience. I killed myself once and successfully saved the president the next time :) |
| Apr 6 12:21:20 | 12m 43s | Biscuit Brawl | ♥ 1 | This game is fun! If you can do webgl build, you should do it. Easy to pick up and you nailed the feedbacks when an attack is incoming. I should mention that your art is being stretch / the resolution is off. Great entry! |
| Apr 6 12:24:39 | 3m 19s | Mysni's Revenge | ♥ 1 | You have to keep the MonoBleedingEdge folder, if it was not created something went wrong building your game. |