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Oct 5 05:30:10 Rat Inc ♥ 4 Very intense for me haha! The visual feedback feels great and the music fits well with the aesthetic. Well done! The dialogue in the beginning was good. It was a lot of text so maybe breaking it up into smaller dialogue would make it that much better. Awesome work!!
Oct 5 05:43:08 12m 58s Call Of Dooty ♥ 0 Love the writing! Enjoyed it. The squirrels feel like the a bigger hit box then I'd expect. Makes it feel a little unexpected when I lose!
Oct 5 05:59:18 16m 10s LoopLab ♥ 0 Link not working :(
Oct 5 06:02:56 3m 38s GHOST FROM JAIL ♥ 2 This is a great little game. Good explanations and absolutely love the title screen with the alternating ghosts. For some reason, that fits so well here. Good job!!!
Oct 5 06:07:46 4m 50s Mandala Spa ♥ 1 Feels very loose and I love it. It is quite relaxing. Quite mesmerizing if you ask me! Controls feel tight and snappy. Great job guys!!
Oct 5 06:17:34 9m 48s BLOBIUS ♥ 1 Great visuals and awesome take on the theme. The title screen intro was amazing. The game feels very fluid and controls are tight enough. The music was good too. Its a retro style game so retro sounds seem fitting. Maybe adding more modern synths may have been the icing on the cake!
Oct 5 06:30:15 12m 41s Stranded ♥ 0 Amazing solo work my friend. The music captures such subtle emotions when playing this. Not sure how to explain but the music theme glues things together. Graphics are great and pleasing to the eye
Oct 5 06:36:53 6m 38s Eternal Run ♥ 1 The game juice in this one is awesome. Satisfying kills and scoreboard. As mentioned previously, it is quite dark and had a difficult time distinguishing the background and the player
Oct 5 13:58:05 7h 21m WhileLoops ♥ 1 This is great. Not much of a programmer myself but still enjoyed it!!
Oct 5 14:01:15 3m 10s GunTron ♥ 2 Nice shooter! Top down execution was nice! I too had trouble with the letter finding.. but game has enough juice that it was still enjoyable to repeat lol
Oct 5 14:10:57 9m 42s Sock Mates ♥ 2 Hmmm I can't seem to get the controller working.. im on mobile. Does this only work on the computer? I love the visuals and sfx
Oct 5 14:14:52 3m 55s Feedback Loop ♥ 2 I love the humor in this. Makes the game that much more enjoyable. Impressive that it was all done in paint!!
Oct 5 14:16:39 1m 47s Infinite Dreams ♥ 1 Adorable! Great voice acting little one!!
Oct 5 14:23:42 7m 03s Weighing of the Heart ♥ 2 Art style is old fashioned vintage looking. I absolutely love it. I tried playing on mobile and I got stuck on the sebastion part..i think if you add a tutorial or maybe your narrator part might have had instructions on how to play, that would great impact on your game!!
Oct 5 14:31:28 7m 46s Roll back the time ♥ 1 Great visuals. Would love more sound effects. This game is screams soft edm or something. Needs something techno sounding. The button press sfx was a little loud for my taste but fit the anesthetic!! Overall great job!!
Oct 5 15:18:19 46m 51s Whack a Mole ♥ 1 Moles were definitely faster than expected!!! Great game though
Oct 5 15:23:16 4m 57s Save Her ♥ 1 very interesting take on the theme. It was kind of hard but eventually made it to the end. More audio would solidify the experience!!
Oct 5 15:27:21 4m 05s Between Times ♥ 1 That's awesome that you were able to finish!! It's a hard task especially if it's your first. More audio!! And bigger font maybe and the game will feel much better in my opinion
Oct 5 15:30:12 2m 51s Coronary Shooter ♥ 0 As a healthcare provider, I appreciate the aesthetic and attention to detail!! Just curious, Is the shooter a macrophage?? Or like a b cell?
Oct 5 15:43:18 13m 06s Fire Loop ♥ 2 Amazing that you made this during the jam!! Love the textures and animations. Really sells the fire haha!! 🔥
Oct 5 15:47:07 3m 49s CryoCrunch! ♥ 3 Love the concept. Simple layout. Nice graphics.
Oct 5 16:18:19 31m 12s Unfinished ♥ 3 No worries!!! Hope you learned and will join the next one!!
Oct 5 16:20:52 2m 33s Beet Roots ♥ 0 This reminds me so much of lemmings of when I was a kid. Enjoyed the gameplay and the visuals are fantastic!!
Oct 5 16:25:31 4m 39s Millenniloop ♥ 1 This was great!! Loved the visuals. I did have the wasd problem but refreshing it fixed it. Kudos to you coming back to the game jam space!!
Oct 5 16:28:26 2m 55s Re;Member ♥ 0 Not bad!! The character did have a bit of a ghosting effect when I scrolled off screen from my comp but it was kind of cool honestly lol. Maybe you should implement a trailing animation for the character to give it more life!
Oct 5 16:31:00 2m 34s Ghost Loop ♥ 0 Awesome job my friend. I agree with the previous comment. The rotation does give it an awkward feel but nonetheless, pretty intriguing game!!
Oct 5 16:33:11 2m 11s Rewind : A companion Cube Experiment ♥ 1 Fan of the art and texturing. Very well executed!! The controls feel tight and juicy. Really awesome that its your first too!
Oct 5 16:36:12 3m 01s Super Sushi Circuit ♥ 2 Made me want to eat some sushi!! Well done man! Such a clever implementation of the theme. Loved the sfx too
Oct 5 16:39:17 3m 05s Catch the Loops ♥ 0 Great visuals but the controls and feel seem a bit janky!! Nonetheless great take on the theme!!
Oct 5 16:45:15 5m 58s Animal_Valley_V2080 ♥ 2 loved the mix of 2d and 3d. Huge fan of any 2.5d experience. I did have fps drops when interacting with Npc s but that maybe bc my comp is old. Great job!!
Oct 5 16:47:09 1m 54s Plock in Clock ! ♥ 2 Simple design. Very clean and tidy. Color palette very soothing. Controls were a bit hard to get used to.
Oct 5 16:50:20 3m 11s Stuck in a Loop ♥ 3 Great job! Had a chuckle when playing this. I felt like visual studio was trolling me. Also, i kept seeing LOL on screen because there were only O's and L's
Oct 5 16:57:20 7m 00s StackOverflow ♥ 2 What a trip. Great job homie
Oct 5 17:05:54 8m 34s Black Hole Loop ♥ 1 Controls feel tight and visuals are awesome!! Maybe more ambient audio or crunchier sfx. For some reason the sfx does not punch through enough
Oct 5 17:09:14 3m 20s W.M.L.F ♥ 1 Great concept. The lasso idea is clever. The art does seems to be a little confusing in terms of perspective (like elevation, depth) but this may be on purpose! So its just personal preference. The lasso does make me a bit dizzy after doing it a couple of times lol
Oct 5 17:11:27 2m 13s Bhoot && Toobh ♥ 1 Not bad for 24 hours. Even had a title screen. Game feels responsive, not sure if this is truly a loop though!! But overall good job!!
Oct 5 17:15:32 4m 05s Stuck in the Office ♥ 2 Wow, I adore the visuals on this one. Super moody man. Luckily I had a controller to try it out on and it was great. Controls feel tight. Would love more of an ambient music scene too!!!
Oct 5 17:50:03 34m 31s Dr. Needles and the Nightclub ♥ 1 Reminds me a little bit of earthbound/undertale feel. Super impressive that you did this on an home made engine. I feel I did need some indicators to help me through the game. Felt like I was guessing the entire way through
Oct 5 17:53:14 3m 11s Lovely Planet (Travel the World) ♥ 1 awesome!! I only got 60 but enjoyed it. Would have loved music !!
Oct 5 17:59:37 6m 23s The Bender ♥ 1 Not familiar with construct but cool effects nonetheless. Great job!!
Oct 5 18:01:30 1m 53s Hell Ring ♥ 0 Music makes this game. I love it. The sfx were a little jarring though. Maybe adjust the volume or process them through some filters but thats just my personal preference! Good job!!!
Oct 5 18:03:35 2m 05s LoopyDraw ♥ 1 wow this is awesome. I can see how others can see that the flexibility can lead to inappropriate images. But nonetheless, a very clever game design!!
Oct 5 18:08:08 4m 33s SAW: 60 Second Loop ♥ 1 Very spooky but cool puzzle game. You made it work!! There were some moments where I had to think!! Overall great execution my friend!!
Oct 5 19:29:26 1h 21m Hyperloop hell ♥ 2 Art is amazing and very fitting for this game. Font is a bit hard to read.. but perhaps this type font is what you were going for!
Oct 5 20:21:13 51m 47s Escaping the Void. ♥ 2 I love the theme my friend!! The intro, start menu, initial dialogue, and gameplay all tie in very nicely with tight controls!!! I absolutely love the aesthetic. Very good use of 2d lights. Overall great job!