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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | Co | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2017 | 38 | A Small World | 👥 | SurviBall | jam | 56 | 4.00 | 3.00 | 3.64 | 4.50 | 4.73 | 3.40 | 2.59 | 3.90 | ||
| 2016 | 37 | One room | Bill Untold | jam | 787 | 2.80 | 2.73 | 3.40 | 3.40 | 32 | ||||||
| 2016 | 36 | Ancient Technology | Tape Memories | jam | ||||||||||||
| 2016 | 35 | Shapeshift | Space Cargo | jam | 290 | 3.52 | 3.35 | 3.70 | 3.26 | 3.41 | 3.45 | 48 |
josemorval leaves an average of 8.8 feedback comments each event.
Very rough graphics and animations. But the dialog system (I think character movement should be locked though!) is well done and story is interesting. By the way, I got one of the bad endings I think :(.
Woah! I didn't expect a story-driven game in a Ludum Dare. Yesterday I had to put it aside midgame but today I started it again just to finish it and see what was all about. Really intereseting story! And I liked the descriptions too. Congratulations!
It is already being said by RuinWalker, there is should be a way to avoid damage but right now it is impossible. I managed to beat the game because I got lucky getting two +dmg power ups early and towards the end I simply ran away from skeletons thanks to the chamber being so big.
Regardless of that, very nice game! Theme is spot on, sounds are very well made and the concept of a chamber that grows room by room is cool. And this is a compo entry! Congratulations and good job! ;)
Nice game! Fun platformer and its visuals are very apealing. Also, the jump mechanics are fun, sometimes it felt slippery though. Thanks for doing it and keep doing games!
Very good! I loved it! It has been a great surprise finding ship controls worked really well and they make this entry fun to play. Love the graphics, the principal character is very well-made (its design is a nod to bird-people messengers of Wind Waker? :D). Ambient sound is nice and sounds give a good feedback of what is happening. Having two screens to show what is happening inside and outside the airship is cool, but I'd like to hide in some moments.
Cons: There is no clue where you have to go and what you have to do. Finally, it can be guessed but not the game's end goal. An introductory text or tutorial could have solve this. Also, the level is too big, it would be helpful to have a map.
Nevertheless, good game! Congratulations!
It meets the one room theme perfectly and escape room point & click games are always nice to play.
Things I'd improve:
- A bit of ambient music and sounds, like when you are opening and closing drawers or when you failed to enter the password.
- Show a little description when you click an object.
- Little things: certain colors, dialog boxes...
Graphics (figures) are fine.
[SPOILERS] I didn't understand the clock puzzle, I had to see the passcode. And even then, I still don't understand how I could have guessed it. But there are people who did it, so I think I didn't try hard enough. Also, I'd like to have known a bit more of the Hotel Room owner so I could have choosen better in the decisions. I died thrice! (Yes, I chose wrong in every decision). Despite that, I liked the last part. [/SPOILERS]
Overall, not a bad job. Keep making games!
Enjoy the atmosphere and the story. Very good job!
Very nice game! Good concept and a great execution :)
Nice game guy! :)
Nice concept and quite fun :) Good job guy!
Really good game! Nice entry guy :)
Nice effects and cool gameplay! Great work! :)
Pretty funny :) Great work
Nice idea and fun! Great job!
Awesome graphics but a little hard! Good job guy! :)
Nice game! Good job guys!
Really nice but a bit difficult! Good job guys!
Little addictive game :P Nice job!
Nice game and very funny. Good job guy! :)
The art and music fit very well together. Nice job!
Interesting concept! Good job guy!
I don't know why...but it reminds me of Chihiro...it is very simple mechanic a game, but it has something special. Good job!
Love the graphics, love the story, love the mood...very good job guy! :)
Nice concept and graphics! Good job!
So nice game, love how this visual style match perfectly with the story. good job!
very original! love the math env :)
great game! Awesome mechanic :)
pretty nice mechanic...maybe a little easy right now, but there is a lot of potential :)
Awesome experience and very nice mood and graphics :) Good job!
LD38 — A Small World (1)
Miniverse by sebasrez 2017-05-04T21:14:50Z ♥ 1
A really nice concept and mechanic :) As a negative point I'd say that the space feels a bit empty sometimes, you go up and down, left and right without discovering any world for a 'long' time, in some cases. Anyway, it's a great ludum game. Astonishing visuals, by the way.