huacati 2014-08-26 14:23
Very cool game, fits the theme really well. I like how you have the text not part of Unity Web Player. Great atmosphere too.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD30 → Advesperation
By dookie
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 1 | 100 | ||
| Innovation | 68 | 3.78 | ||
| Mood | 104 | 3.73 | ||
| Overall | 176 | 3.53 | ||
| Theme | 204 | 3.55 | ||
| Humor | 352 | 2.48 | ||
| Fun | 356 | 3.08 | ||
| Graphics | 439 | 3.25 | ||
| Audio | 625 | 1.89 |
Very cool game, fits the theme really well. I like how you have the text not part of Unity Web Player. Great atmosphere too.
Very gripping game. very engaging :) great job on connecting Twine with unity. and an awesome story as well :D
The second Twine+Unity game I've played this LD. Really interesting combination that I never knew was possible. I agree about the second bit not working though, and it is terribly maze-like which is always worrying. The first section has promise though.
Twine+Unity! Awesome combination, and used quite effectively.
Very nice. Although, I was left on a bit of a cliffhanger. What was this experiment?
This is probably the best use of the theme i have seen so far! Amazing work
Wow, I love it! Awesome art style on the train, and good storytelling!
Dang super cool! Loved that the links interacted with the game scene. :) Would really be great with some audio.
Oh my ... All that labyrinth to find a fridge xD ? Just kidding, the game is very old school but I felt the work you put in there. Too bad there are no sounds or musics, that would have brought even more depth to the game.
Very nice! We released a game recently on Steam that also uses Twine along with Unity. I'd link it here, but that would seem like shameless plugging. :P (but umm, yeah, it's called The Maker's Eden)
Nice game!
The "GUI" is great meaning the text and the graphics being separated. This is also a fun and Immersive game. Love It.
Nice simple point-and-click interactive fiction. The overall presentation is good: smooth graphics, and nice writing style.
The story felt fairly linear, and I played through a second time to verify this. Linearity is expected for a jam game though.
I can't say I understood much of the details of the story. What kind of experiment was going on? Why was the world "dark"? What manner of connection did G have with H? Was the briefcase real, or just symbolic?
Anyway, it's a neat little game.
-- Tommy
To JoeEliTommy and anyone else wondering: I only have a very vague idea about the story myself. I wanted to put in a little more to tie it more together, but I spent all the time just getting the game to work :) At least now I have a little framework for making similar games in the future.
So, another Twine/Unity game.
Interesting.
Have I missed something on this fusion somewhere.
Good graphics.
Good story. Well done.
Very cool idea!
I loved this... The story kept me on the edge of my seat and the lack of music actually made it terrifying for me for some reason. The movement scheme added to that. I was expecting to turn around and find something terrifying behind me at some point, after that quote you put at the start. Very, very atmospheric. Well done.
Neat combination of text and visuals
This was very cool. I loved the mixture of Twine and Unity - that worked really well. The story was well written and the art was great, but I wish there was audio to really set the mood. Good job!
What a strange thing. I like it.
The super low fi graphics are very charming on the train.
The controls don't really feel like a good fit for the larger maze-ish area.
Great combination of Unity and twine though!
Too bad there's no music.. or better yet, ambient sound would set the stage well I think.
Really good writing. It's a nice puzzle that builds up.
Great writing, I felt immersed in the story, and then that maze surprised me and made me change my mind about the score, as now I could see the connection with the theme. However with audio it would have been even better. Great work!
Hi there. Impressive combination Twine and Unity. Only the second one I've seen so far. Nice movement and discovery in the Unity part. Like the running train trees animation. Good job!
I enjoyed it ! I thought I was lost but... I was not ;)
Good story ! ;)
An interesting game. I was quite immersed into this.
Very good entry, I love the crazy plotline and the half nightmarish atmosphere. Great job!
Love the writing.
I love the imagery, very effective story telling. I really enjoyed it, nicely done.
Very good story telling. I also like the idea of mixing a text adventure with these dungeon crawler like bits. A bit of sound would have been cool though. Also the ending was a bit abrupt. Overall, awesome work!
I really liked the graphical style! Great use of simple shapes.