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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | joao-marcello's comment | |
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| May 3 12:58:40 | WitchDelivr | ♥ 2 | Nice controls and beautiful pixel art. Also, your game fits perfectly the theme. Run over the pedestrians added a great touch to your game. But I misses some objective after a while as the game was a bit too easy... | |
| May 3 13:20:18 | 21m 38s | Cow Delivery | ♥ 1 | I love your concept and the game was incredibly fun! The music fits perfectly with your game, i liked it a lot. Some advices: - I found some problems with the boulder's physics, for example, when we drop it close to a wall, the bolder get stuck. - The color of the boulder sprites could be better to contrast with the background (gray, maybe?) Overall a great entry. Good job! |
| May 3 13:30:51 | 10m 33s | Crazy Chimichanga: The Pixelated Adventure | ♥ 3 | Nice pixel art and funny music haha! The map sometimes generates obstacles in a unfair way and the hit boxes seems a bit off, but overall, a good job. |
| May 3 13:38:06 | 7m 15s | Delivery Survivor | ♥ 1 | Unfortunately I couldn't play the game. My PC's resolution is 1366x768 and the game was not adjusted to it. I couldn't even get out of the tutorial screen (I tried the download version too and it has the same problem). |
| May 3 13:53:14 | 15m 08s | Purrfect Delivery | ♥ 10 | Wow! What a nice and fun game hahaha! Took me a while to fully understand the controls but once I managed, the game kept really fun. The pop-ups added a nice humor to your game (I laugh a lot with some of them). Very creative idea. Although after a while they get really annoying (they're pop-ups after all). Great job!! |
| May 3 15:34:15 | 1h 41m | The Holy Scanner | ♥ 2 | Your game is absolutely hilarious 😄 ! The music is pleasant and the graphics are great. The movement of the legs and the arms of the player made me laugh a lot haha. The only problem was that your game don't support 1366x768 resolution and I can't read the dialogues. It's a shame, cause judging by the comments, they must have been pretty funny. Overall, a nice entry! Good job! |
| May 3 15:41:17 | 7m 02s | Out of Time | ♥ 1 | Too shame it isn't finished (I supposed) The controls seems very responsive and the pixel art is nice, but I missed some objective (I just following the arrow's direction, but reaching there don't give me nothing). |
| May 3 19:28:49 | 3h 47m | License To Serve | ♥ 1 | Very intelligent puzzle game and creative use of the theme. Loved the anime art style, but the discrepancy between the art of Susan and the art of the NPC's was a bit anticlimactic... Overall, a competent entry. Good job! |
| May 3 19:42:52 | 14m 03s | Storky McStorkface Express | ♥ 1 | Pretty fun game! Loved the music, but the SFX became annoying very quickly and it ruins the mood of your game. Graphics simple, but it serves its purpose. The only thing I dislike is the discrepancy between the level art and the characters art (pixel art vs. cartoon?) Overall, I enjoyed this little game. Good job! |
| May 3 20:06:19 | 23m 27s | Delivery Boy | ♥ 2 | OMG! What an addictive game! The pixel art is simply divine and I loved the little details: the money splash, the musical notes when the phone is rigging, the smartphone interface... Seriously, very nice. Question: Your character was inspired in Fry, from Futurama? I found them very similar 👇 Fry.png |
| May 3 20:36:37 | 30m 18s | Hell'o-Cargo | ♥ 6 | Divine polish game 😱 ! By the way, It's The best I've played in the jam so far. The SFX gave a nice feeling to your game and the graphics are simply amazing! The animations are very fluid! Smart Level design, with new mechanics been added as we pass trough the levels. Some puzzles forced me to think for a while. The only negative point was that the controls using the arrow keys are uncomfortable (J + [Keys]?). A solution could be allow the player grab the box with the 'F' key for example. Overall, a great entry! Good job, guys! PS: The plot twist on the final will make me have nightmares at night 😄 |
| May 3 21:23:20 | 46m 43s | Hexpress | ♥ 3 | The visual of your game is absolutely amazing! Nice use of a limited color palette! Plus, I liked a lot of your isometric tile map. By the way, a BIG map considering the jam's deadline. The game needs some implementation (scores, objective, etc.) but, I liked what I saw here! Good job! |
| May 3 21:44:01 | 20m 41s | Beelivery | ♥ 4 | OMG, what a nice entry 😱 ! Congrats! The animation intro was soooo cute! I really liked the 2D art of your game (the animations need some frames, but this is not a issue overall) The gameplay was really addicted! Some parts were hard (the trees with the wheels for example), but the feeling of pass trough them are very satisfying! Finally, about the music, the chosen soundtrack was the icing on the cake from your game! Good job! 🎵 Let it bee! Let it beeeeeeee! 🎵 |
| May 3 21:56:18 | 12m 17s | Deep Delivery | ♥ 1 | Simple but competent game. Some areas seemed unfair as our submarine's width is a bit large, making difficult to dodge the obstacles sometimes. I liked the music and the graphics style. Add some animations would make it even better. Overall, a good job! |
| May 4 14:22:49 | 16h 26m | Hamazon Waremouse | ♥ 1 | Beautiful pixel art and well use of the theme. However I think that I don't understood what exactly to do... Despite been so loud, I liked the music 😄 |
| May 4 14:58:12 | 35m 23s | Swallow Express | ♥ 1 | I've already played some "Bird delivering something" games here on Jam and yours was the most fun until now. Loved the dialogues and the SFX when the animals are speaking (remember me Banjo-Kazooie from N64 and bring back some nostalgic memories) Unfortunately, a weird bug make me get stuck in the ground and I had to start all over again 😢 . bird-error.png Suggestions: - you should change the obstacles color to better contrast with background. It's really hard distinguish one from another. - The duration of the game is maybe too long since you have to constantly press space to keep flying. Finally, I liked the glide mechanic and the fact that you added a ranking. My best time was 00:04:54 Overall, a good game. |
| May 4 15:20:28 | 22m 16s | Haitatsuin no kaeru | ♥ 1 | Pretty graphics. Work on a parallax background would be a nice touch. On the other hand, the gameplay need some polish: most of the time the jump does not allow the player cross the snow on the way and wasn't clear what was the objective of the game... |
| May 4 17:04:24 | 1h 43m | Potion Delivery | ♥ 1 | Cute game and beautiful work with pixel art. Good job! |
| May 4 17:11:44 | 7m 20s | Panini | ♥ 0 | Such a unique concept! Great Job! The aesthetic of your game is so adorable and I liked that the slippery movement add some difficult. The only thing I missed was some score system, but overall I really like this little game. |
| May 5 01:06:03 | 7h 54m | Air Fast Chaos | ♥ 1 | Very funny game and good use of theme. The simplistic graphics are competent and the music and SFX do their job. I didn't like that cars hurt us even when they are stopped in traffic, and sometimes It's hard leave the house without take damage. Overall, a good game! |
| May 5 01:26:56 | 20m 53s | Solar Eclipse | ♥ 1 | Wow! Nice platform. One of the most mood games I've played in the jam until now (yeah I'm a huge fan of platforms 🙂 ). Interesting idea of using the attack command together with the double jump, though this makes the game a lot harder to master. The pixel art is beautiful and I loved the design of your main character (remember me Bill from Dragon Ball Super). The music give the Asian climate that your game intended to convey, but I missed some more elements from that culture to be perfect. Some suggestions: - Add some checkpoints would be a great addiction to your game, considering his difficult. - The dialogues take up a lot of screen space and distracting after a while. Turn their off after we dead could be one solution or else you could shrink the font size. Overall a great game! Good job! |
| May 5 01:43:28 | 16m 32s | Zip and Steady | ♥ 1 | Wow, here we have well designed puzzles with new mechanics presented at each level. Well done. The graphics are cute but need some polish to become more attractive. Nice that you put hints in the levels (that helped a lot). Overall It's a good game. Good job! |
| May 5 01:52:16 | 8m 48s | Dungeon Pizza Delivery | ♥ 3 | Love this game. Incredibly well done considering the jam's deadline. The variety of enemies is impressive and I like the pixel art. One possible adjust would be decrease the shoot reload time to lower the difficulty a bit. Good job! |
| May 5 02:01:17 | 9m 01s | Delivered With Care. | ♥ 4 | Nice graphics and challenging game. The mechanics are a bit hard to master and the lack of checkpoints make it almost impossible to finish. I liked the concept and you used very well the theme delivery. Overall, a good game! Nice job! PS: I loved the footsteps sound. |
| May 5 02:08:08 | 6m 51s | E.T. Eats | ♥ 1 | Fun little game (the ship's moves remind me my own entry)! Beautiful pixel art and the movements are easy to master. Add some soundtrack and SFX and it your game will be perfect. Good job! |
| May 5 12:25:27 | 10h 17m | Note | ♥ 1 | Such a relaxing game! The simplistic graphics do their job and the music is nice. I wished that the spin speed was a bit faster and I found a bug: the first time i played the note fell off the game screen! |
| May 5 15:51:52 | 3h 26m | Level Delivery System | ♥ 1 | I liked the minimalist art and It's great that added many different gameplay (very ambitious considering the jam's deadline). It's not clear in the game what the Special Ability does in the game due the lack of some animation or effect. Add these little details would help a lot to improve the player's satisfaction. One tip: generally in game like this (composed of some minigames), It's common organize them to play in sequence one after other, with no need for player commands, like the Wario Ware minigames. Good job! |
| May 5 16:01:09 | 9m 17s | Mail-In Vengeance | ♥ 1 | Nice concept! Took me a while to master the controls due the lack of some "how to play" tutorial but after some time the game keep so smooth! Liked the soundtrack, and the graphics do their job. Great Entry! PS: you could add the tutorial here in the jam's page, it will help a lot others players. |
| May 5 16:09:06 | 7m 57s | AstroParcel | ♥ 1 | Challenging, but incredibly fun! The controls are hard, but pleasant to master. The minimalist graphics are amazing! I'm impressed with the little effects (the UI text effects in special). It was a good work! Congrats. |
| May 6 12:19:34 | 20h 10m | G.E.L.D - Guild Express Loot Delivery | ♥ 0 | Amazing pixel art! The care you had with details is impressive! Liked the music and SFX too. However, I found a bit tricky play it with mouse and keyboard combination, maybe add an option to play only on keyboard might be a good idea... Overall a great submission! Good job! |
| May 6 12:29:54 | 10m 20s | Inconvenient Conveyance | ♥ 0 | Great concept! I liked that the house's colors keep changed forcing us to explore the area instead to throw the boxes always on the same house. The pixel art is nice and competent. Like others said, just add some Music/SFX and you game will be perfect! Nice job! |
| May 6 12:52:10 | 22m 16s | Warmazon | ♥ 4 | Great game! Nice pixel art and interesting color palette. The dialogues are funny and the music and SFX really helped to give the war feeling for your game. However, the items were not very useful once we can pass the levels only running and dodging the bullets. Overall a nice entry! |
| May 6 12:57:29 | 5m 19s | Dimensional Delivery | ♥ 0 | Simple and interesting concept. The text box really helped a lot to understand your game in few time. Good job. |
| May 6 20:53:00 | 7h 55m | Winter Factory | ♥ 1 | Loved the concept, right on theme! The graphics do their job and the music is relaxing and not become annoying as the time pass. Good progression on difficult. Only thing I dislike is the rule on the top-left side of the screen cover the device that drop the gifts. Overall a nice game! Good job! |
| May 6 21:04:30 | 11m 30s | Valhalla Calling | ♥ 2 | Such amazing retro feeling! Congrats! The art is simply phenomenal: the minimalist pixel art is great and the use of shaders just enhance his beauty. For some strange reason, even reading the tutorial and knowing that we could use dash, I did'n t use in the game (??) The music and SFX were also pleasant to hear. Seriously, you did a GREAT job here, and it's even more impressive to know that you did it all by yourself! Good job! |
| May 6 22:13:58 | 1h 09m | Machine Meltdown | ♥ 1 | Excellent work with pixel art! The intro with the tutorials were a great addiction to understand the controls, but I missed some way to quickly restart the battle (waiting the dialogues finish over and over became annoying as the time goes by). I agree with others comments that the controls were a bit tricky to master Overall, a good game! |
| May 6 22:26:55 | 12m 57s | Void Scion | ♥ 1 | Congrats for your submission on your first game jam! Liked the combat mechanics (the void was my favorite) and I found you created a big map considering the jam's deadline. The music and the SFX were pleasant to hear. For some reason, some parts of the map dropped the FPS. Overall, a good job! |
| May 7 20:37:36 | 22h 10m | News @ Doorstep | ♥ 2 | Unfortunately, the game does not support 1366x768 resolution and I cannot play it 😥 game-tt.png |
| May 7 20:48:24 | 10m 48s | Lame Duck Delivery Service! | ♥ 0 | It was not that clear what to do in the beginning and the ship's rotation was a bit too slow... Liked the graphics and the care you had to add some SFX. PS: I cannot read the in-game tutorial cause it keeps outside of the screen (my PC resolution is 1366x768) |
| May 7 21:21:24 | 33m 00s | Rush Deliverance | ♥ 2 | Nice endless runner game! Impressive work for a solo developer! (being a solo dev too I understand the problems that surge in our way...) Good graphics; I just didn't like that the notifications disturb the player visibility. Overall, a good game. |
| May 7 22:15:57 | 54m 33s | Air Delivery | ♥ 1 | Absolutely incredible! I've played others pico-8 games here in the jam and your is the best so far (by the way, yours is my top 5 best mood games; I really enjoyed this). The pixel art is adorable and I loved the little details: the dust when we move, the wind when gliding, the care with the NPCs... The music is relaxing and it doesn't get boring with time, which is great! I managed to finish your game, but can't find one of the person to deliver the letter (by the way, the letter count on top-right of the screen showed 9/9 but I still had one letter to deliver; It was a bug?) Overall, a excellent entry! Congrats! |
| May 7 22:31:00 | 15m 03s | Spider Sorter | ♥ 0 | Such a great game! I liked the concept. The controls are, somewhat, confusing in the beginning, but due his simplicity is easy to master (played using the arrow keys). Despite the lack of animations, I liked the graphics. Some music would be a great addiction to your game but I understand that the jam's deadline might be cruel sometimes (my own game doesn't has music due this 😅 ) The gameplay turns really frenetic at the end but I manage to score 39 points. spider2.png Overall, a good job! Congrats! |
| May 7 22:46:17 | 15m 17s | Sky Drop | ♥ 2 | Cute game! The work with the graphics were notable and I found the characters very charismatic. About the gameplay, since we have to drop the packages in the target, would help a lot to allow visualize the shadow even at high altitude. I did not realize what the crows are for: they seems not inflict damage on player and die very easily. Overall, a liked this game! Good job, guys! |
| May 8 21:21:51 | 22h 35m | Unwanted Postman | ♥ 1 | I Loved this game! His simplicity in controls and concept make it a pleasant to play. Competent graphics, and great soundtrack and SFX. Overall a great entry! PS: that dog will give me nightmares... |
| May 8 21:34:43 | 12m 52s | Banana's Invasion | ♥ 1 | Such a cute entry! Easy controls and nice graphics; great use of SFX for weapons. I'm kind undecided about the allies: at first it's great have some help in the battlefield but they kill the enemies so fast that I felt the game was playing itself. Also, they need some IA adjust since they constantly kept stuck in the wall. Overall, a good entry! Good job! |
| May 8 21:53:34 | 18m 51s | Deliverance | ♥ 1 | Strong inspiration in Celeste and Shovel Knight, which is nice! Liked the graphics and the music is the best in the game for sure! Really like it. The physics need some tuning: the player can't jump/move near to wall without being stick in it, which is frustrating and ruins the mood of your game. With some adjustments in the physics, this game will be great! |
| May 9 14:02:41 | 16h 09m | Holiday Halfpipe | ♥ 3 | Absolutely incredible! Had much fun on this! Just like some players, i initially played only jumping across the roofs without caring for tricks until i notice they give much more points. Loved the graphics and nice parallax! Also the music is pleasant to hear (would love play this game on Christmas) Overall, a great game! Good job! |
| May 13 14:18:26 | 96h 15m | DeliveryQuest | ♥ 1 | Nice mini games! I hadn't problems with the first and the second, but the third it's too hard... One solution would be decrease the package gravity, this way the player have more time to attack the enemies and to grab the package later. Overall, a fun game! Good job! |
| May 18 21:19:10 | 127h 00m | GobEx | ♥ 1 | Nice and unique concept! The art is so adorable and the music and SFX help a lot to increase your game's mood! (Liked the "Yeah" scream when we deliver a item to goblin) Took me a while to figure out how to play properly (I thought the game would only use the mouse and didn't notice the hotkeys), but once I managed the game becomes very fun! Nice that you put a online leaderboard into your game (I didn't get my place in the ranking, these players are too skilled for me 😆 ). Overall, a incredible and nicely polished game! Good job! |
| May 18 21:43:31 | 24m 21s | ΗΠΛ Debate Club | ♥ 1 | Loved the concept and very polish entry! The art is cute and the sfx from the audience as the debate unfolded was an excellent touch. It was a bit confusing figure out whats going on at first try, but once i managed the game keeps pretty enjoyable. However, don't having someone to play may spoil the fun (like others commented, add a AI opponent would solve the problem) and the Windows version presented lag after the third round. Overall, a nice game! Congrats! |
