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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | jakeblake's comment | |
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| May 1 02:36:06 | LD53: House Delivery! | ♥ 2 | It really gets moving! 😄 Fine job! | |
| May 1 02:49:05 | 12m 59s | Energy Delivery | ♥ 2 | I liked the tutorial being included in the game, and the opening lines did a lot for the mood. I thought it was a bit too fast (without pausing) to have enough time to switch between adding and removing lines, but I enjoyed your game overall and thought it had the right amount of difficulty. |
| May 1 03:10:09 | 21m 04s | Packontra | ♥ 1 | I've played several times and I'm still not sure I understand how to deliver the packages correctly. 😆 I really enjoyed the opening sequence and had fun overall. |
| May 1 03:33:09 | 23m 00s | Icy Porch | ♥ 2 | I loved it! Tricky delivery took a few more attempts than I'd like to admit. 😆 Great level design and a very polished game. |
| May 1 03:47:06 | 13m 57s | Infant Interceptor | ♥ 1 | The slurp sound effect on pickup was 10/10. I enjoyed the isometric art style as well. |
| May 1 04:10:02 | 22m 56s | LD53 - Constellation | ♥ 1 | I'm assuming it was by design, but in level 2 (Draco Vienna) it was really difficult to tell where I had been before. Other than that, I really enjoyed your game. The space dragon noodle was great! |
| May 1 04:24:29 | 14m 27s | Stork Exchange | ♥ 1 | Fun game and it matches the theme perfectly. It's very simple in a good way. |
| May 1 04:37:10 | 12m 41s | Its All in the Delivery | ♥ 1 | The art was really good! And I enjoyed playing something without deliverables in it 😆 |
| May 1 05:35:45 | 58m 35s | Stand and Deliver | ♥ 2 | The character art was ok, but the UI needed a bit more time I think. Nice to see an entry use the ursina engine! |
| May 1 05:54:47 | 19m 02s | Neverending PetriChore | ♥ 1 | I love the art style! Combining dash and double jump mid air felt a bit inconsistent. |
| May 1 06:13:31 | 18m 44s | Urgent Delivery | ♥ 1 | You listed your itch.io page as source. Just thought I'd let you know in case that was by accident. Music was good (maybe a bit loud), but I really liked the concept and difficulty. |
| May 1 06:24:09 | 10m 38s | Pizza Rush | ♥ 0 | Great game! I think the jumps could be a bit more powerful, but that would be my only critique. Overall, I think you nailed the difficulty by requiring two different mouse inputs all while controlling the bike. |
| May 1 07:00:48 | 36m 39s | Pet Delivery | ♥ 2 | While I was playing I wished the sensitivity of the catapult was a bit lower (as in you'd need to drag your mouse a longer distance). Other than that I really enjoyed it. |
| May 1 07:16:17 | 15m 29s | Pizza Puzzle | ♥ 1 | Solid entry and I'm a big fan of the art style! |
| May 1 07:29:39 | 13m 22s | Deliver Them | ♥ 2 | Cool concept and sort of relaxing. I'm not sure I'd say their planetary defenses are puny though 😆 |
| May 1 07:38:22 | 8m 43s | Slalom Pizza Delivery Service | ♥ 1 | Great graphics, difficult but fun. My top score was only 45 points, but it felt like I did much better than that :D |
| May 1 16:08:54 | 8h 30m | Spirit Mail | ♥ 2 | I loved the atmospheric music and the graphics fit the mood. The signposts were a big help--I had a hard time finding the chef after delivering his dish. Good entry |
| May 1 16:34:17 | 25m 23s | Delivery Sim | ♥ 0 | As others have touched on: the movement could be better and the purpose of the different floors wasn't clear. I did like the graphics and the idea of objects having different move distances and abilities. I called it after 500 rounds. I had 2224 remaining money. |
| May 1 17:39:20 | 1h 05m | Rollin Express | ♥ 1 | Wonderful art. I agree with the other commenter about transferring some momentum. Nice entry |
| May 1 17:57:15 | 17m 55s | PRECIOUS CARGO (and some aliens trying to steal it from you) | ♥ 1 | I loved it! And, as many others pointed out, it's amazing what you accomplished without an engine. |
| May 1 18:08:44 | 11m 29s | Super Pizza Kid | ♥ 1 | Just challenging enough without being frustrating. The quick restarts helped. I really liked it. :) |
| May 1 18:21:34 | 12m 50s | Delivery Dungeon | ♥ 1 | I really like the gameplay loop and the map. I'm not in love with the movement, but it wasn't necessarily bad. This is a solid game. |
| May 1 19:24:53 | 1h 03m | The Envelope | ♥ 2 | I wish the walking sound changed when you sprinted. This game has an awesome atmosphere though, and great art! |
| May 1 19:40:59 | 16m 06s | Andromeda Delivery Service | ♥ 1 | The whole thing felt very cohesive. I struggled for a minute or two building my first ship but quickly figured each block out. Great job! |
| May 1 21:02:49 | 1h 21m | Drone Delivery Service | ♥ 1 | The box was erratic at times when bumping it into stuff, and it once glitched through the level wall (happened on 2nd level). Maybe slightly tilting the drone to represent it's momentum would help the "feel" of movement, but that's nitpicking. Solid entry and I enjoyed playing it! It's my first LD as well, and I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did. :) |
| May 1 21:43:23 | 40m 34s | Supply Line Simulator | ♥ 3 | There's a lot of fun content here, great job! The whole idea (gear, manpower) reminds me of logi in Foxhole--a game I've played for years. I felt the UI could have been better. The music/sfx sliders could have been smaller. The blue hex highlighting where you can move blended with the green tiles a bit. The end result was hard to make out sometimes. Mostly, though, I would have loved an indicator showing me how many turns until a unit ran out of supplies. Like I said, this was a lot of fun. And I love the concept! supplylinesim.png |
| May 1 22:19:53 | 36m 30s | Baby Juggling | ♥ 1 | babies2.png This is a simple (but very fun) game. I started to toss vertically offscreen to make doubling them up easier. Good entry. |
| May 1 22:47:58 | 28m 05s | Bad News Inc. | ♥ 2 | Your voice acting really fit the game. The writing was great and the character art very good as well. Solid entry! |
| May 2 03:52:08 | 5h 04m | Decrypting Handwriting | ♥ 3 | The most unique entry I've reviewed thus far. Thanks! I really like the premise. I'd love to see how it would play if the static document was instead a list of search results from the info you fill in. Maybe you could have wildcard character to represent what you're not sure about when filling it out. That's not a critique as much as a brainstorm. 🙂 I had fun and enjoyed playing. decrypting.png |
| May 2 05:19:52 | 1h 27m | RELEASE THE MEAT | ♥ 2 | This is very fun and well executed. Rather polished too. An absolutely great entry for your first game jam! It's my first as well, and I'm quite jealous of what you made here. 😍 |
