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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Jod's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 24 17:48:00 | Truth be untold | Hey, you're pretty good at Twine! Putting a background behind the choices is pretty smart. <br/> <br/>I really enjoyed the simple and clean layout you made and the way you styled the 'results' of lying or the truth. <br/> <br/>I also felt that I missed a few bits in between the scenes. Jumps, as it were. <br/> <br/>All in all, great to see more interactive novels in the LD! Also, kudos on the crazy amount of content. Wow. | |
| Aug 24 17:51:00 | 3m 00s | Monster. Interactive comics | Haha, loved the bit where you broke the panels. I played it a couple of times but didn't notice any different storylines, which would've made it even more awesome. Great job on the animation! |
| Aug 24 18:02:00 | 11m 00s | Nombeast Jr. | Controls worked just fine for me (Chrome). <br/> <br/>Had great fun floating around and trapping the vilagers. <br/> <br/>I accidentally nommed a bird. |
| Aug 24 18:07:00 | 5m 00s | Village in the Valley | Okay, I laughed. <br/> <br/>Loved the art on the monster! |
| Aug 24 18:09:00 | 2m 00s | Well I'm Not A Monster | Loved the concept, although I'm afraid getting ratings for multiplayer game will always be hard in Ludum Dare. :( |
| Aug 24 18:12:00 | 3m 00s | BOoOo!! | Keep on going, awesome! |
| Aug 24 18:15:00 | 3m 00s | A battle for the graveyard | I am incredibly impressed by your clear art direction and ability to make a two-player game. <br/> <br/>The ability to switch between mosters is awesome. Slime is OP. :D |
| Aug 24 18:23:00 | 8m 00s | St. George's Academy for Monster-Slaying Lasses | Okay, Ren'Py, awesome! <br/> <br/>Great work on getting your own art, story and music together. Keep it going! <br/> <br/>Tip: draw your sprites a bit longer, so that their waist is above the text displayd on the screen. <br/> <br/>Keep on writing! |
| Aug 24 18:29:00 | 6m 00s | The Greater Good | Loved the bit at the ending with the counting numbers. <br/> <br/>I really had no way to see if what someone pleaded was correct or not, so my choices felt arbitrary, except for when I let one of them go with a fine so I could buy a jail, that was spot on! <br/> <br/>-1100 |
| Aug 24 18:32:00 | 3m 00s | The water ghost | I really liked this! <br/> <br/>The little texts made it for me! <br/> <br/>I'd have loved to see some more levels, maybe with the kids fighting back? |
| Aug 24 18:37:00 | 5m 00s | Where am I ? | Looks great! |
| Aug 24 18:38:00 | 1m 00s | Monster VS Tanks | The tanks won... |
| Aug 24 18:46:00 | 8m 00s | Crossy Chasm | I walked off the left of the screen and dropped right into limbo :). <br/> <br/>Cool game though, took me a while to figure out what I was doing, a small introduction text might be useful. <br/> <br/>Great animations! |
| Aug 24 18:48:00 | 2m 00s | de-monstration | I did not de-monstrate! I crushed their puny little guitars! <br/> <br/>Loved it :D |
| Aug 24 18:52:00 | 4m 00s | Release The Kraken | I am terribbly impressed. <br/> <br/>The mix of music, gameplay and graphics is extremely well done! <br/> <br/>I went 'Oh, you must be kidding me!' when I saw the airships :D. <br/> <br/>I believe at one point I hit myself with a tentacle. Why are you hitting yourself Kraken? Why are you hitting yourself? :D <br/> <br/>8 tentacles up! |
| Aug 24 18:58:00 | 6m 00s | Entropy | My thoughts while playing: <br/> <br/>-"Click anywhere to destroy the universe.", now _that_ is an opening statement! <br/>-Aaah! The black thing on the bottom is talking to me and I missed stuff! Damnit! <br/>-Wow... this is tablet-ready. <br/>-Hey, a Maltezer cross. Cool! Ooh! Ooh! A Triforce! <br/>-Oh, there's a par! Wow, that text is hard to read if you're focussing on the big shiny balls in the middle. <br/>-Aaah, I lost what the big balls do. <br/>-Wow, the music is pretty. <br/> <br/>All in all, colour me impressed! |
| Aug 24 19:06:00 | 8m 00s | No Country for Troll Men | I ate 78 sheep, broke 16 fences, defended myself against 13 soldiers and mistook 5 villagers for sheep. <br/> <br/>Loved the growth in each level! Slowly there are more houses and more soldiers. Very well done! <br/> <br/>I had fun! |
| Aug 24 19:15:00 | 9m 00s | Blob | I _loved_ this. The intro is pure genius. Even in paint, it conveys all the beautiful B-movie drama of a big pink blob taking over the world. <br/> <br/>I found the gameplay a bit hectic, jumping between organs and the main screen and those tanks! But I had fun playing. |
| Aug 24 19:23:00 | 8m 00s | Greetings, Human | Wow, that's very well done! <br/> <br/>I love your clean, cohesive art style! The music and sfx is well done, too. <br/> <br/>Found something though: I decided to do another playthrough, but it remembered the votes from my first playthrough. :D |
| Aug 24 19:26:00 | 3m 00s | passive-aggressive vegetarian game | Haha, well done. An ending screen would add a bit. |
| Aug 24 19:29:00 | 3m 00s | Island Terror | Pretty cool, it worked well. <br/> <br/>Would be great to have some kind of goal, like eating a 100 villagers. |
| Aug 24 19:34:00 | 5m 00s | Hydra | I enjoyed the chaos a lot! The first time he spawns more heads is like "AWESOME!" <br/> <br/>Loved the music too, very well done! |
| Aug 24 19:44:00 | 10m 00s | Writhe: The Thing from the Omega Sector | I am completely impressed. The level of graphics and sound are immense, and so much content! <br/> <br/>The best thing is the soundtrack, loved it to bits! <br/> <br/>Als the character design of Writhe is genius! Tentacly goodness! |
| Aug 24 19:46:00 | 2m 00s | Motherflipin' T-Rex! | That was good fun! Loved the countdown. Genius. |
| Aug 24 19:51:00 | 5m 00s | Lovers on a Park Bench | I loved this. I loved exploring, trying to see what I needed to do. Great! |
| Aug 24 19:54:00 | 3m 00s | Eye of the Basilisk | Cool! Smooth gameplay, nice graphics. Would kinda help to have a goal (like, reach ten-thousand points or something). |
| Aug 26 06:23:00 | 34h 29m | Chrys | That was cool and flowed smoothly! <br/> <br/>A little more time to read the instructions would be nice, I was killed before I could finish reading them :D. <br/> <br/>Great job on the music! |
| Aug 26 06:29:00 | 6m 00s | The Terror of the Night of Day | Loved the concept, but the second house I could not leave or proceed or sleep. :( |
| Aug 26 06:32:00 | 3m 00s | Run, Frankenstein's Monster, Run! | Great work on combining graphics, sound and gameplay! Were some of the villagers holding flowers? :D <br/> <br/>If the jump could be cancelled, or adjustable, that would have added a lot. |
| Aug 26 06:45:00 | 13m 00s | Slavery Simulator 2015 | Wow. <br/> <br/>That's an extremely good take on the theme. <br/> <br/>Kudos on working that one out. Also, on making a game with actual good gameplay on it. My game's vampire has nothing on the monster I was while playing this. |
| Aug 26 06:49:00 | 4m 00s | Colony 06 | Good core mechanics! Mixes well with the gameplay! Also, good sound. <br/> <br/>Would be great to have a goal or something stated up front, though. |
| Aug 26 06:54:00 | 5m 00s | Fish Monger | Pretty cool! Great work on the sighting and the enemies can actually miss! I enjoyed that. <br/> <br/>Would benefit greatly from some sfx and soundtrack. |
| Aug 26 06:57:00 | 3m 00s | Hammer Destroyer | I was a stripey-socked demon of doom! |
| Aug 26 06:58:00 | 1m 00s | Fangs | Pretty cool! |
| Aug 26 06:58:00 | 0s | Chivalry is Dead | Yup, it's dead alright. |
| Aug 26 06:59:00 | 1m 00s | The Dictator Simulator | One man, one vote. |
| Aug 26 07:10:00 | 11m 00s | Hero Mate | That was surprisingly cute! <br/> <br/>Very well executed and polished. Loved it! <br/> <br/>Oh, if only the hero knew of the purple slime's love for him... |
| Aug 26 21:14:00 | 14h 04m | AM I? | Great sound! Gameplay is basic but works smoothly, no bugs. An ending condition would be good. |
| Aug 26 21:16:00 | 2m 00s | A cup of tea with my Aunti MICROPHONE REQUIRED | Wow. I was very impressed, this is the kind of experimental thing that I love to see in LD! Keep on going! |
| Aug 26 21:17:00 | 1m 00s | Boblar's Ascension | Well done! |
| Aug 26 21:23:00 | 6m 00s | Look Into The Mirror | 1st level: Ah, this is okay. <br/> <br/>2nd level: I WILL CUT OUT YOUR HEART WITH A DULL SPOON! <br/> <br/>:D <br/> <br/>Seriously though, well made, good choice on the art style. Jumping works alright. The difficulty goes up a little bit too fast, some more getting used to the controls would be nice. All in all: good job! |
| Aug 26 22:44:00 | 1h 21m | Mobs, Inc. | Intro screen of awesomeness. Guitar of awesomeness. I just... listened to it for a while. :D <br/> <br/>This is just so incredibly, incredibly polished. Wow. The soundfx matches the gameplay. The graphics are extremely well-timed. Character design is simply gorgeous. <br/> <br/>I hate archers. With a passion. <br/> <br/>Incredibly well done. |
| Aug 27 20:28:00 | 21h 44m | Intergalactic Love Machine | Loved it. Completely lost it when the fish entered the screen. Can you get past 17? |
| Aug 29 17:00:00 | 44h 32m | Dragon's Life | Wow, I loved this one! <br/> <br/>The good: <br/>-The sound! You're crazily talented! <br/>-The depth! There's a lot of gameplay in there. <br/> <br/>The bad: <br/>-It's very hard to get all the intricacies of the gameplay. In a Ludum Dare, some more explanation would really help people appreciate your game better. <br/> <br/>The ugly: <br/>-The knight that decided to kill me. Damn you, knight! |
| Aug 29 17:02:00 | 2m 00s | MONSTERS CARD GAME | It wasn't really apparent what my attack and defense values were. A little more explanation would have helped me a lot! <br/> <br/>Other then that, love the idea of someone making a card game here, haven't seen that before, kudos! <br/> <br/>Also good sound! |
| Aug 29 17:10:00 | 8m 00s | Too Late, Too Bitter | I really liked this game! The story you tell is compelling ,saying much more with the words it doesn't say, then with the words it does. <br/> <br/>I would've loved a little bit of ambient background music, and maybe a crashing sfx when I smashed something :D. <br/> <br/>Great work, keep on going! |
| Aug 29 22:03:00 | 4h 53m | Unsolicited | Oh wow. That's just very well done in the time available for it. Sounds, graphics and gameplay feel as one complete whole. <br/> <br/>I was most impressed by the texts in between the sessions, and the possible answers. Saying so much with so little words is pretty awesome. :) The twist is gut-wrenching genius. The dissonance between what input data and written data tells a very chilling story. |
| Aug 29 22:14:00 | 11m 00s | The Admin Of The Dungeon -In a MMORPG- | Pretty cool take on things! I liked it a lot! |
| Aug 30 11:49:00 | 13h 35m | Earthpocalypse | Pretty cool! |
| Aug 30 11:50:00 | 1m 00s | Hero Hunt | That's.... genius. This is what I love to see in LD! |
| Aug 30 11:53:00 | 3m 00s | Where My Eggs At!? | Loved that the spider is wearing a scarf. Lovely graphics, it controls smoothly! Would have greatly benefited from some sound. |
| Aug 30 11:56:00 | 3m 00s | They Look Like Ants | Pretty cool idea, great work with the sound and sfx! <br/> <br/>Would have loved to have some kind of goal/score mechanism. Perhaps a judgement on how kind/cruel I was to the ants? |
| Aug 30 21:27:00 | 9h 31m | Grow | Gorgeous graphics. Some small sfx and atmospheric soundtrack would have added a lot. |
| Aug 30 21:30:00 | 3m 00s | Am I a monster? | Fits the theme very well. That's a lot of content. Well done! |
| Aug 30 21:36:00 | 6m 00s | GH4ST | Very slick graphics. The compo version really benefited from some music, as seen in the post-compo version. |