conormn 2015-08-24 05:04
Very neat concept. Would love to have all the panels visible at once instead of scrolling. Lovely monster design also.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD33 → Monster. Interactive comics
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 55 | ||
| Innovation | 155 | 3.54 | ||
| Humor | 203 | 3.31 | ||
| Theme | 546 | 3.28 | ||
| Graphics | 587 | 2.86 | ||
| Mood | 645 | 2.70 | ||
| Fun | 671 | 2.72 | ||
| Overall | 706 | 2.86 |
Very neat concept. Would love to have all the panels visible at once instead of scrolling. Lovely monster design also.
Haha. Loved than. What a clever idea. Punched back in time. Well Done!
The style art is cool, and i love the idea ! but its a game ? :)
well done bro :)
Hah, nice one! A bit short, but it was fun :)
it's cute, but a little underwhelming. Maybe I missed something, but the game feels a little light on interactivity. There's nothing inherently wrong with having a game which favors story over gameplay, but I found the story kind of disappointing. There only seemed to be five panels, and they didn't really do much to establish likable characters, significant conflict, or a satisfying end.
Haha, I had fun going through this. Reminds me of some cyanide & happiness strips, only this one's interactive.
My criticism would be that this is not really a game, imho. There are no options.
I personally don't care, though, as long as I have fun.
Lovely! The punching the guy to make him go "back in time" was an awesome idea.
Thanks, guys! :)
@conormn, I removed scrolling, page is full-sized now. :)
@NickMakesGames, actually, there are nine panels, not five. ;)
Haha, very funny story! Cool thing with the interaction between the panels! The drawing style fits very nicely!
Haha, loved the bit where you broke the panels. I played it a couple of times but didn't notice any different storylines, which would've made it even more awesome. Great job on the animation!
Very clever mechanic of having to click certain points in the picture to progress the panels. I also liked how things / people could move from one panel to another. Cool stuff! :)
very nice concept! a very simple mechanic that work very well :)
Very great humor! Had a good laugh! Thank you for this great little game!
That was hilarious. I actually thought the comic was over after five panels when I read your comment, pavel_insight. Lovely whatever this is. The ending was great, earned you another humor point :)
Multiple endings based on decisions would be a cool addition to make it more gamey, though.
Haha funny comic :] Cool humor, but i had to launch the game 3 times before i understood i was not clicking at the right place to display the next frame :) it lacks a bit of interaction, but that's a good idea.
Cute story! Nice little concept for a game jam. Would have been cool to have a little more branching depending on what you clicked, but still very cool for a compo entry!
I like the concept of animated comics :) i liked the effects in your comic.
it was nicely done!
maybe you could do some more i wished to see more :)
Nice concept! Fun entry, I wish there was more! I could read this for hours. I wish there was either more interaction (i.e. dragging items around) or less (i.e. give a more clear indication of where you have to click to progress the slides). You really caught my attention when the character broke out of the slide, this idea truly has potential! Solid entry!