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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2023 | 53 | Delivery | Babylon Prime Delivery | jam | 638 | 3.53 | 3.46 | 3.30 | 3.42 | 2.73 | 3.36 | 2.70 | 3.31 |
This is a fun game! The art, animations, and music were really well done for a jam!!
My main wish is that some of the UI elements were not in the World Space but were instead on the screen - that way I could see what items were needed, how much time I had, and what was inside the rock. That way, I could feel like I'm planning a bit more. But the physics goofiness of it and gameplay was really fun - great job!
I like the idea of a 3D vampire survivors. The graphics were all over the place and I wish there was some audio. Maybe it just wasn't working for me, but it was totally silent.
A minor thing, I wish the interact button was E or F or something other than Enter, since it forced me to move my hands off my mouse or movement to use it - which really shouldn't be necessary when it's only a single button. But great job!
It reminded me of the old game Lego Island where you deliver pizzas. I had some weird graphics quirks with the 3D models (windows cutting through the building). I also seemed to hit some things that sent me flying, which was funny.
The main thing I think it could use is some sort of menu/intro so I know what I'm doing. It was a little confusing where the pizzas were supposed to go and what the numbers in the top left really meant. But from one solo-dev to another it's very impressive and amazing to do a 3D game in such a time crunch. Great job!
The graphics and art were all top notch. Really excellent consistency and a clear visual style. The gameplay could use a bit more variance - it was kind of easy to stand in one spot and spam the attack key. I also think having some contrast on the player could help with visibility. But these are nit-picky, this was a fantastic game!
Very cute game! I like the voice lines in the background - has more story than most Game Jam games. I do think the enemy projectiles were a little too fast, since it was basically impossible to dodge once they got a line of sight on the player. It'd also help to have a few lives, that way I could see the whole level without needing to be perfect. But those a minor things - it was a really wonderful game!
Really simple and clean game. Like the art style and good color balancing. Really well done! As someone from the USA, there were a few times where the spelling/localization did confuse me a bit, but mostly because it's just different names for the same place. Nothing that could be done about that for a game jam and did not impact my fun or scores one bit.
Clever use of the theme and a cool game! I did have an issue where I clicked through the UI a few times on accident and something was built, but the mechanics were cool and I love taking on a 4X style for a game jam!
The artwork and humor were great. There were parts that felt a little unfair as a player - which is definitely part of the point of the humor - but getting 3 people all asking for a Red Box made it hard to feel like I could do much to improve at the game other than being lucky. I do wish the talking bubbles were at least semi-transparent. It got hard to read them when they overlapped and boxes would sometimes get stuck behind the bubbles. But it was a really crisp game and the UI and art were fantastic! Great job!
This is really fantastic! The graphics and gameplay are crisp. Nice and simple with a lot of thought put into the presentation/marketing. Really wonderful job. I am curious whether all the art assets were made during the jam. I ask only because they seemed to have slightly different styles between the world/characters and the monsters. It also had a pretty similar style to some assets I've seen on the Unity store (although this was UE). It's not really impacting my score one way or another, but I do feel like it'd be good to say if you did use any pre-made assets or not. If you did, it's no big deal. If you didn't, it's honestly incredible that you made those that fast and your scores should be boosted because of it! Really amazing job by the whole team.
@tyrannas Excellent! I've not really done much WebGL exporting with Unity before this, so glad it eventually ended up working.
Thank you @brandon-campbell, @ollie-d , @evogengames, and @reulan for checking it out!
The gameplay and audio were great! There were some times it would drop me somewhere and there was no real way to get out due to RNG on where things were placed. But an excellent game for your first jam!!!
I also could not pick things up with E unfortunately.