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Apr 21 10:37:57 Krabbenritter ♥ 2 The style is good, but the controls are limited to WASD which is for QWERTY keyboard, but I have an AZERTY keyboard, so it's no easy to play. The animations are not clear enough, sometimes I take damage but I don't see the attack, and it seems that I take the damage the first frame of the animation, so I don't know when to block
Apr 21 10:42:47 4m 50s Test-a-ball ♥ 0 Can't start the game sadly
Apr 21 10:48:27 5m 40s Flame Keeper ♥ 1 I must say the scene is really dark, I didn't understand what to do after moving the fire a little bit..
Apr 21 11:02:03 13m 36s Dunkegg ♥ 2 Best entry so far, great idea and execution, love that cutscene, but was not easy to play on keyboard (maybe cause I have AZERTY keyboard ?) Fortunately you setup the controller input so I could play. I managed to win, but sometimes (especially at the middle pathway), we can't see what happens because the camera is in the wall.
Apr 21 11:44:41 42m 38s Slime Mama ♥ 1 Cool game I don't know why you put the jump on space and not on the up arrow key ? Felt hard on this
Apr 21 12:11:33 26m 52s Guardian of the Seas ♥ 0 I am confused, I tried 3 times but didn't manage to interact with anyone
Apr 21 12:23:15 11m 42s Goblympic Games ♥ 0 The controls are only WASD, so I couldn't enjoy that much the game because not everyone has a QWERTY keyboard and you didn't setup the arrow keys as alternative inputs
Apr 21 12:41:31 18m 16s Umm, Your Majesty... ♥ 0 All keyboards are not QWERTY You have to setup controls like arrow keys for example This could have been a great experience
Apr 21 12:53:59 12m 28s Arctik Panik ♥ 0 That was a nice idea, with some good interfaces, but the gameplay felt short and not really rewarding Also I played with the xbox controller and I couldn't get used to the view y axis inverted, maybe let the option to the player ?
Apr 21 13:02:14 8m 15s Sachka, Heal-sitter ♥ 6 Guys, you should add a cover image of you game ! :)
Apr 21 13:12:55 10m 41s Power Source ♥ 1 Aaah the game looked cool and fun, but the controls are for QWERTY, I managed to move with the arrow keys and beat some enemies, but I couldn't purchase any upgrade 😭 Also I spotted some english mistakes, be careful 😄
Apr 21 13:23:56 11m 01s Clive's Flight ♥ 2 It looked like you had a great idea, dounds and graphics are good, but there was hundreds of errors in the console, and the only thing I could do was fly around 🙂 Keep up !
Apr 21 20:08:27 6h 44m Sisters' Lighthouse ♥ 1 The art is amazing, the story is great, the sounds are mostly good, but please try to read all the dialogues again and correct the mistakes (I spotted some typos like "al" instead of "all")
Apr 22 09:06:28 12h 58m Feast of blood ♥ 1 I'm not the first to tell you that, but the brightness level is way too low. Not everyone has quality screens with high contrast, beware ! The controls are not easy, but with some improvements it could actually be fun !
Apr 22 09:18:55 12m 27s Teddy? ♥ 2 Good game ! But I think there is room for improvements on the audio. First things would be to increase the volume of ambient sound a bit and add a music
Apr 22 09:27:32 8m 37s Moodville: Peak 2020 ♥ 1 The 3d world was cool, but I didn't like not being able to move the camera up and down. I picked up the soap bottle but couldn't do anything with it, or maybe the feedback was missing idk. So I couldn't continue playing the game..
Apr 22 09:43:07 15m 35s Keep the remote control safe [unfinished] ♥ 1 Bonjour, I would prefer that the player stay at the center of the camera, because I ran into enemies and walls too often. Also there are some bugs. One time I picked up a note and the camera started moving towards the bottom left corner of the map. All I could do was restart the game. Bien joué quand même
Apr 22 09:56:26 13m 19s FireScout ♥ 1 On the webgl version, the game is laggy, the controls are not responsive enough, And with the high speed of your character, it was hard to play the game I think you could ease the first points by reducing the speed. Also you only setup WASD controls, which are for QWERTY keyboards. Not everyone has QWERTY in the world, you have to setup the arrow keys as alternative inputs.
Apr 22 10:11:44 15m 18s EDO ♥ 1 The game looked fun, but I couldn't play it We have to grab a wrench, but when i hit space, the tentacle goes towards the middle of the road, and I tried for 5 minutes but I just can't get it. Edit okay you have to use your mouse, but it was not written
Apr 22 10:26:23 14m 39s Keep it alive ♥ 1 Good game, easy, but works well ! I had high expectations with that cover image though, I imagined a game with a story with that cute graphics
Apr 22 11:11:08 44m 45s Holy Plague ♥ 2 Great game ! The mechanic is interesting, there are many levels, and many options !
Apr 22 12:22:35 1h 11m Terrarium Zen ♥ 2 Great visuals, good music, that was a good experience ! Now I can point out some flaws, when we move the camera around, there is a lot of screen tearing (google it if you don't what it is). This can be removed by enabling the vertical sync. The option menu doesn't work when you pause the game. There is no feedback on the player action, I clicked 10 times on water only to see the day after that I put to much water. An audio feedback of water, plus some visual would have been welcome. Anyway, that's a good job and it lives up to its name !
Apr 22 13:04:43 42m 08s Plum ♥ 3 That was a good game, good graphics, good mechanics but the mechanics were poorly introduced, I quitted the game because I was blocked, just to realise thanks to the first comment that you could fill water multiple times So I went back and finished the game
Apr 22 13:37:11 32m 28s Life Plug ♥ 1 Didn't manage to reach the first heart, may I don't understand, but I moved to the first target, got some blood, and it was not enough to reach anything else. The graphics are cool though Edit: sorry for the empty comments, the website bug
Apr 22 17:25:04 3h 47m The Well of the Past ♥ 1 Ca fait plaisir de voir des bons jeux français ! Great story but a bit disappointed by the ends, when you have a setup like this, I would expect at least one end to give an element of answer to all the questions.
Apr 22 17:37:26 12m 22s Untitled Caterpillar Game ♥ 1 Good game, good levels, you're perfectly in the theme, nice job. The fact that you can jump higher by pressing space bar longer is not that common, it took me 2 minutes to figure it out. May be you should introduce us this mechanic
Apr 22 22:48:02 5h 10m Get Away From My Human ♥ 1 Not everyone has QWERTY keyboard, you should setup arrow keys as alternative inputs. Also I would prefer that the gun firing automatically by holding the mouse button down.
Apr 23 09:13:52 10h 25m Lantern Lagoon ♥ 2 Good game, though it has way too much bloom, and I got stuck at the top, there is something I don't get in the level
Apr 23 09:34:51 20m 59s Drivin' Alive ♥ 1 First interaction is watering the plant, and the game tells us to right click, but it was a left click, that frustrated me because I tried for 2 minutes. The game has really good graphics but I was disappointed by the car controls. You can't effectively adapt your speed, when you want to brake, the car goes backward, and every single time I tried to turn it ended up with the car spinning. I couldn't drive the car more than 20 seconds straight. I'm sure with some improvements it could be a really good game, so keep working on it !
Apr 23 09:53:18 18m 27s Tale of a Little Guardian ♥ 4 Beautiful game ! There are some issues, like after defeating the snail once, I couldn't exit the level because the "gate" disappeared. The air control is hard, but the major thing you should improve IMO is the feedback you give to the player. When I hit an enemy, I like when there are visual effects, animations, sounds, and when we kill a "big" enemy and it is just deleted it feels kinda weird.
Apr 23 10:14:58 21m 40s À la Fenêtre ♥ 1 Wow, super travail, le jeu est magnifique, très original, le fait d'avoir les contrôles dès le menu c'est super bien pensé ! L'équilibre des dessins, qui sont sous forme de sketch, ça donne assez d'information sur l'espace, l'environnement, et ça laisse une grande place à l'imagination pour les détails, et le fait qu'il n'y a pas de bordures et que les transitions de scène se fasse dans le même espace par une fondu ça me donne parfaitement ce feeling de souvenir, de rêve ! Edit: ce jeu me fait penser à la carte du maraudeur dans Harry Potter
Apr 23 12:31:23 2h 16m DON`T DIE STAY ALIVE! ♥ 0 That's more fun than I would have thought, good game ! The major improvement I can suggest is to work on the audio, the music add some contrast with the game, but does not fit well enough with your theme of a penguin hunting fishes And I would have liked some audio effects when you grab a fish or when you get hit
Apr 23 12:46:40 15m 17s Woodpunk ♥ 1 Everyone says it's a good game, but I don't understand, I get a quest but I have no idea what to do and the game isn't helping me. I killed monsters 'till I had no ammo, and that was it. May be an information is missing in the game ? Edit: ofc do not hesitate to at me and I can give it another chance Edit: Much better once you know you can craft ammos 😆 but yeah the goals are not clear enough and my road was blocked many times Still incredible for a game jam though !
Apr 23 16:31:36 3h 44m The Glimmering Woods ♥ 4 Really nice arts, good music (can't note audio though), good dialogues and intrigue ! Small details, but when you talk to a NPC, they should face the player, and the player should not be in a walking animation anymore, it would make more sense
Apr 23 19:23:38 2h 52m Keep the Beet Alive ♥ 1 Wow I didn't expect that ! That's a great game, with a great song ! May be you could try to add some visual feedback like in other rythm games. For instance a green color if you are good and red if you are doing bad, and text like (Perfect - good - bad) every time you hit space
Apr 23 19:42:39 19m 01s SheepShot ♥ 0 That was really fun ! I won ! 😄 I think the audio could be improved though Maybe you could accelerate the animation when the sheep jump over the fence to increase the difficulty !
Apr 29 17:40:24 141h 57m Stoker ♥ 2 Good game, but it was hard to understand, there is no explanation in game, no tutorial
Apr 29 18:01:10 20m 46s Temple of Enlightenment ♥ 1 I couldn't beat the spiders stairs, I am not the only one That's a good start but you will need to persevere to turn it to a really good game, you should playtest more and fix the problems (level, balancing, I went out of bounds, clarity etc.) Good luck
May 2 13:50:23 67h 49m Bob The Bog Roll Defender ♥ 1 Great game, good music and voice, but some sounds fx (when you hit a zombie) only play in the right side of the headphone Good gameplay, but I was expecting the rocket launcher to explode zombies around