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Closure

By junber

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall583.9524
Fun4772.9223
Innovation3133.2924
Theme224.2724
Graphics1593.8225
Audio184.2125
Humor3182.7224
Mood54.5225

Comments

gustavo 2022-04-04 01:19

I loved the game. It's so well polished and immersive. Congrats!

very-bad-bunny-studio 2022-04-04 01:50

I can't comment much, not to spoil the surprise of those who will play, so I'll leave my congratulations, and say that this is my last game tonight, I hope I'll be fine tomorrow.

Ah yes, there's a part where you walk and the dialogues appear, unfortunately sometimes we walk around by accident and skip some dialogues.

rickylee 2022-04-05 00:53

Wow what a treat! you're take on the theme is the best I've seen so far. Great work!

@very-bad-bunny-studio I noticed that exact thing too - but I'm sure it wasn't skipping, the fast forwarding of dialogue perfectly looks exactly like you just skipped it :')

ani 2022-04-05 01:44

It's a heavy take on the theme, but I enjoyed playing through it. Nice job!

apples-mmmmmmmm 2022-04-19 00:55

Definitely moody. The simple graphics and heavy text really help to activate the imagination of the player.

herryfabien 2022-04-19 00:59

Oh man ! Oh man ! I loved this despite ,or because , the feels. I loved the inescapibility of the story , the snippets of memory ! And the graphics simple but just enough to support the immersion. Congrats you made me truly sad when a triangle with a weird symbol in the middle had to die ! :S (Still don't know what is suppose to be xD)

aeveis 2022-04-19 02:49

Great framing and story. Perhaps an experience someone can have isn't trivial. Liked the audio a lot. nice job!

joe40001 2022-04-19 03:14

Well made. Bleak without being shallow. Unfortunately relatable.

roccay 2022-04-19 03:19

Love the atmosphere...you are really good at picking the audio for the scenes.

nyxkn 2022-04-19 12:12

Omg dude, this was a masterpiece! The first scene in the car was absolutely brilliant. I'm awe-struck by the ingenuity! A solid 5/5 entry. As a few nitpicks, I wished the text would move along faster. I found myself always key pressing to get the dialog to complete, but it would have been nicer to just sit and read at times. I've made this mistake before with scrolling text, and my conclusion is that you should find a speed that does not annoy your reader. A bit too fast is always better than a bit too slow. The gameplay was brilliant. The graphics are so simple yet they convey meaning perfectly. The subtle use of color highlight to know what to do was also perfect. The dialogs had great content, but I thought were a bit too long-winded at times and you might want to work on being just a little more concise in the writing. Music and sound was perfectly fitting and added a lot to the atmosphere.

My man, thanks a lot for the experience! (and please do more voting so your game gets ranked :D It would be a shame not to!)

jonah-srg 2022-04-19 13:15

Very well done, I love bitsy and I'm happy to see a great display of it here in LD50. The employ of the theme is both somber and whimsical, delaying and holding on to so many different feelings no matter how grave or trivial. I really love the earliest sequence with the candle, there's something so human about fire being intrinsically related to one's first memory, it's a story you hear over and over but it plays really beautifully here. I'll admit some of the abstract visual elements were a little lost on me, I am not sure why the player avatar is triangular in later stages. But the rooms were all vibrant and the color choices work really well. Really well done.

gdesecrate 2022-04-19 14:46

Thanks for the game!

lecloow7 2022-04-19 15:57

nice

jozgames 2022-04-19 15:59

It's a nice looking game but with a very have mensagem with in. It was realy imercive and trilling.

svemir 2022-04-19 16:52

Oh wow, very chilling game - but really well done. I feel the simple graphics worked well and allowed your imagination to wander, picturing and really get inside the mind of the main character. Audio fit perfectly with the mood, really good job

zimny11 2022-04-19 17:29

Awesome story and cool pixel art! Great job with the game.

corrupt-spaghetti 2022-04-20 16:21

Nice artstlye! It's nice how objects you can interact with change color. The hospital scene was especially resonant.

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