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Outside the Town of Malbork

By kemp

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall1923.6429
Fun4632.9629
Innovation3013.3129
Theme4573.2729
Graphics1563.8329
Audio613.8829
Humor723.7528
Mood274.1329

Comments

snesgaard 2022-04-04 09:37

Great presentation, must admit visual novels are not quite my cup of tea, but that's more of a me problem. Good job!

danashrulez 2022-04-04 10:23

This game captures a very unique mood very well! I loved the art-style and the soothing soundtrack! The artstyle gave me salad fingers vibes, very eerily captivating!

david-york 2022-04-04 17:56

I laughed so hard at the S8E8 part. Very unexpected. Yeah this was a fun ride and the visual and auditory aesthetic you put together is pretty fun. Nice job.

adamjn 2022-04-04 19:19

I liked the sound track and visuals, These type of games I don't usually enjoy but I had a few laughs at yours, including how the granny looked

maymay 2022-04-04 19:28

I loved this game! The art is wonderful and the writing is very funny. I loved the nested storytelling and I lost it during the seinfeld chapter

andy-beers 2022-04-04 19:31

wow i'm not sure what I just played but I loved it. so weird and interesting, I'm also in the camp of not usually liking visual novels but this was cool and I have no idea why. Great job

rasblo 2022-04-04 19:31

Haha! You got me laughing by myself with that Seinfeld bit.. I was into it, great job :)

0x-void-x0 2022-04-04 20:00

this game feels like traveling through multiple realities everytime the story changes, I really like the whole vibe it has, the music is also really beautiful

jasontherand 2022-04-05 18:40

Wow. That was a trip. The grandma was so wonderfully creepy! I only managed to find 12/13 stories. Is there more if you keep delaying the inevitable? Or is there a way to see the fishmonger's daughter? I have so many questions and want to know more, so great job! It was funny and moody and very unique. Great job!

Ps. you tried our game (death and taxes) earlier while it was broken and is fixed now. We would love if you gave it another shot!

kristinamay 2022-04-05 21:07

I got a bit confused playing this, but what I could figure out I liked. I like the atmosphere and the writing is great. Music is also very chill. Now, time for me to go through it again and think much harder... :laughing:

stasm 2022-04-05 21:34

Amazing experience. The story sent chills down my spine a few times. Really unexpected at times, I loved it. The depth of the content contrasts with the simplicity of the form in the best possible way. I reached the end screen when it said that I had discovered 14 out of 13 stories; not sure if that was intended or a bug?

kemp 2022-04-06 08:26

@stasm Oh no! I thought I'd fixed that... to confirm there are only 13 stories to reach - the 14/13 will occur if you reach the stories via different routes (so I'll pretend it's a feature)

sequoiadolce 2022-04-06 17:44

This was WILD!!! Holy moly that was such a trip! Love the storytelling and it really tickled me how almost stark the beginning of each new story would appear! You did such a great job at creating a mood and the artwork really amplified the eeriness of everything. Once things started flashing in the one story I really got chills in a very effective way! Great job!

theslate 2022-04-06 21:37

Now I want celery potato soup. Thanks!

forgin-bits 2022-04-06 22:07

The artstyle is quite interesting and a bit dark, it has a kind of eerie feel. Overall everything fits pretty well together to deliver a compelling story and a nice experience. Good submission, great job

pitxardo 2022-04-08 17:00

The art and the mood is pretty good.

arachnid56 2022-04-11 19:25

I'm super impressed by the amount of story content you managed to do. The graphics, sound and flow all work really well. Had me proper hooked reading. Great job!

klarina 2022-04-12 11:44

I appreciate the ambition to create a story game, the slightly spooky atmosphere underlines the mood of the game. Really great job! I enjoyed it.