nick-barrash 2020-10-04 23:16 ♥ 2
RIP humanity, oops.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD47 → State your name
By owlycode
| Percentile | ||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | LD47 | Ever | |
| Overall | 115 | 3.79 | 31 | |||
| Fun | 91 | 3.83 | 29 | |||
| Innovation | 113 | 3.77 | 30 | |||
| Theme | 30 | 4.30 | 30 | |||
| Graphics | 494 | 2.88 | 27 | |||
| Audio | 168 | 3.46 | 28 | |||
| Mood | 18 | 4.19 | 29 | |||
RIP humanity, oops.
Very cool and good use of the theme
Fun to follow the story. Theme on point. Good sounds/color for each voice.
Cool! For repeating so much, it didn't really feel too repetitive. It was fun to see what was next.
Awesome, I was fully gripped by the story. Insanely good game, and brilliant writing. The text/terminal style suited it really well and the backing sounds really set the mood. Nice job!
Amazing job! Didn't feel repetitive at all, liked the story a lot! Writing is just brilliant! Even the sound design is on point. You made a really fun text game!
Wow, great writing! A few typos here and there, but quite well handled.
Fantastic, excellent execution. The sound does a great job of selling the subtle emotionality. Wonderful story, lets the player fill in many of the gaps themselves, while still selling a complete plot. Great job!
Thank you everyone for the feedback so far! It means a lot to me!
@endurion can you post here the typos you encountered if you remember them? I'm non native english speaker and this will help me to improve my english.
I'm not native english as well :)
It's really not many: Prisonner (only one n) 7.8 billions of intelligent beings (move s from intelligents to being) And then we splitted (should be split I think)
The - between silicum and based seems to be outside the used font, it's tiny.
That's all I could find ;)
Great atmosphere ! The sound and visual design match perfectly, and the length was on point, great entry !
This was brilliant! The best and most unique attempt at the idea
Excellent and gripping story!! Intuitive gameplay and I like it :)
This is lovely. Kept me guessing throughout.
Great narrative, nice entry!
[Played your game on stream last night.](https://www.twitch.tv/videos/765905747?t=00h20m54s) Super cool little narrative here! I've found a lot of jam entries so far where people have gotten very creative with the writing, and this one was no exception. Nice job!
I loved how you did that with a powerful game engine. Very emersive, thank you.
Thanks for submitting your game for me to play on my livestream!
If you’d like to rewatch the playthrough, you can find it here:
https://www.twitch.tv/videos/767474154?t=2h05m05s
Good luck on your ratings, see you next LD! :D
💜 Elysia Griffin AKA Button Feedback Lady
https://www.twitch.tv/elysiagriffin
A very nice take on the theme. Good way to tell a story without really telling much.
I just finished it! Unexpected idea, with great narrative and intriguing story. ^_^
Really fun story, surprisingly immersive. :) Really unique use of the theme too.
Great writing and an excellent idea for the theme of the jam!
