2015-12-15 16:12
Okay, the idea wasn't that bad, I mean we have seen it before many times, but it's still okay, but the execution...well...not interesting ...
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD34 → The other side of the portal
By mahjong50
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 73 | ||
| Humor | 569 | 2.17 | ||
| Audio | 666 | 1.97 | ||
| Mood | 749 | 2.53 | ||
| Theme | 844 | 3.11 | ||
| Innovation | 850 | 2.41 | ||
| Graphics | 851 | 2.19 | ||
| Fun | 956 | 1.80 | ||
| Overall | 956 | 2.25 |
Okay, the idea wasn't that bad, I mean we have seen it before many times, but it's still okay, but the execution...well...not interesting ...
"Date un-executable "
I waited a minute or so and couldnt run it - this was on firefox.
I waited a minute or so and couldnt run it - this was on firefox.
(Later)
Downloaded it, was able to "play" although there isn't a game. An art game must still be a game - what you have here is a story (a very short one).
I waited a minute or so and couldnt run it - this was on firefox.
(Later)
Downloaded it, was able to "play" although there isn't a game. An art game must still be a game - what you have here is a story (a very short one). You should either expand this into a game or expand it as a story.
The download links no longer seem to work.
Would've worked better if the "go further down" button was the actual down key ;)
While I feel the game is not very game-y I still congratulate you on getting a finished product out. First LD down, more to go!
That was pretty spooky!! Loved the mood, wished there was a bit more depth or some sort of ending.
I think I didn't really get it.
Didn't really understand it, but I agree first LD getting a finished game out is quite an achievement! Good job and hope to see another one from you at LD35!
This is more an experience than a game, but I liked it. Keep it up!
Congrats on the 1st entry. This was my 1st time too! :) But I'm not so sure I understood the game...? I kept holding right and clicking spacebar, and eventually I just stayed in a repeating red room.
I understand the concept here but it doesn't hold up that well. Whilst you obviously spent some time making the graphics a game life this, with so few interactive mechanics, lives or dies on its presentation and unfortunately it isn't enough to pull you into the game by itself.
I think had the graphics been more polished and the game expanded you could have had more of an impact.
There are no mechanics here, but that's fine; I can tell you're an artist at heart. Good attempt for a first entry-- you knew your limits and went weird, which I admire.
Well, not that much of a game. And If there was some deep stuff I didn't get them. But art was cute. And well done. Keep up for the next LD's!
This is a very special game. Keep up the good work!
Thanks you for playing and rating mine.
Not exactly a game I think... maybe an interactive narrative?
Nice job on the art though!
Some sort of choice, even simple, would have turn this little story in a playable game. But, well, at least it works without freezing. And it fits the choosen theme. ;)
Very cool. The story kept me going and wanting to know more.