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Timestamp	Since previous	Game		MARP's comment
Oct 21 00:39:19		Madness bar	♥ 1	I like the comedy of the game and the dialogs. However, I think it is a little bit confusing to me. I got blacked out once I got the three items, if I fail to deliver one item is game over. I guess I must be missing something. Additionally I agree with the comments about the room aesthetics and the controls.
Oct 21 00:56:44	17m 25s	Goblin' Coins	♥ 1	I played the first game submitted. The game is good and simple but the controls are frustrating to me, even to a point that I did not play the whole thing.
Oct 21 01:13:38	16m 54s	Paperboy: Time to Collect	♥ 1	It is a good game given it was only done in 48 hours and the technicalities of the game. However, I have a feeling that the gameplay is a little bit constraint. I wonder how the game would be with the ability to move forward and backward as well as more speed and obstacles.
Oct 21 03:02:22	1h 48m	BloodPact	♥ 1	good game overall. It was a little bit confusing that I could not throw projectiles from the beginning. It would have been even better if there was a jumping strike available. Good job.
Oct 22 02:39:20	23h 36m	Hex to the Max	♥ 4	Very good game. I liked it. I do not know how can you improve it, perhaps better graphics?. Good job
Oct 22 04:04:08	1h 24m	The Internet Collector	♥ 3	Good Game. It took a long time to figure out just how to start. I had to read again in the description the click & drag part and insist. For some reason some expectations and known paradigms were kicking in as I was navigating the game; I thought "maybe I can write something... is a powershell, right?". Later when I saw the cinematics I realized the amount of content this game has for a short period of time. Screenshot_2025-10-22_00-02-18.png Screenshot_2025-10-22_00-56-52.png Good job. my only suggestion is perhaps making it more familiar? I know it sounds hard but it was really hard to figure things out at the beginning
Oct 22 19:50:54	15h 46m	Prairie Dog Music Collector	♥ 2	"Yipee!" nice small game. very simple interpretation of the theme. One of the things I can mention is that you can barely tell the birds will hurt you and they are hard to dodge.
Oct 22 20:10:41	19m 47s	Card Economist	♥ 1	Awesome job. Best interpretation of the theme so far. I have not had many experiences with games & economy, this one was very good. I do not have much to say other than perhaps improving the assets of the room. Very good job.
Oct 22 23:02:39	2h 51m	The Ether Collector	♥ 1	I tried running the game with wine (since I use linux) and I could not because it uses Visual C++. Next time it would be nice if you use another compiler such as clang
Oct 22 23:44:46	42m 07s	Ludumon	♥ 1	It took a long time for a simple game. The only thing is that it can be frustrating. Screenshot_2025-10-22_20-41-03.png
Oct 23 02:03:15	2h 18m	Gen0	♥ 0	The game is good. I like the theme interpretation of the game, but I also like the theming of the game itself. It is unique in that regard. One thing I can mention about the game is that is hard, very hard. Perhaps a difficulty setting should be available.
Oct 23 02:27:16	24m 01s	Neopunk	♥ 1	Nice game. I like the atmosphere and the creepy photo that follows you XD. I also like that it was done with raylib. Regarding the controls they are ok but I am not sure if had enough feedback to tell if I was doing ok or not (most likely not). Additionally, I could configure anything about the game, specially the display config. I hope I was seeing everything, It looked like it but due to the lack of feedback I am not 100% sure.
Oct 23 02:48:53	21m 37s	The Witch Chef	♥ 1	Nice little game. I like the graphics and sound. Since is a simple game there is not anything more I can say. Screenshot_2025-10-22_23-46-44.png
Oct 23 03:23:29	34m 36s	Business as Unusual	♥ 1	Solid game. Very polished. I hoped I have done it right, it looks like I won but by the wording think about it twice. Screenshot_2025-10-23_00-09-04.png not much I can say. perhaps making the items follow you faster when holding them? inventory system? Good job overall.
Oct 23 03:32:15	8m 46s	1000 Swords	♥ 1	The minigames are ok, but I think it needs more polish, specially the graphics.
Oct 23 03:57:39	25m 24s	Fume: The PC Gaming Simulator	♥ 0	Clever parody game and awesome theme interpretation. It took a moment for me to realize how it worked because not every click worked for me. Good job nonetheless.
Oct 23 04:19:43	22m 04s	Collecting the One Pistachio	♥ 0	Solid game. Good combat mechanics and good dialogs. There were just small things to fix regarding graphics but it is very good overall.
Oct 23 16:49:41	12h 29m	Planet Extraction	♥ 1	Awesome game. Excellent execution. great theme interpretation, one of the best. This is what "doing you best with the time you have" looks like. There not anything bad I can mention about the game only improvements. Excellent job. Screenshot_2025-10-23_13-40-07.png
Oct 23 23:55:03	7h 05m	Predincament	♥ 0	Nice little game. For some reason I think I can not collect all the bugs.
Oct 24 00:17:29	22m 26s	Monsters in Jars	♥ 0	Solid game and good theme interpretation. It would have been even better with music but this was a lot of work done in just 48 hours.
Oct 24 01:42:02	1h 24m	Coal Lector	♥ 0	Nice game. I played until a point I found an infinite piece of coal. The game is good but I would have wanted clearer objectives. I did not know if I had to achieve a quota. The graphics are simple but good however some block were hiding other pieces of coal dropped. Screenshot_2025-10-23_22-36-28.png By the way, the talking coals XD were funny. The was a point however that I just stopped reading
Oct 24 03:46:09	2h 04m	GHARK - Soul Collector	♥ 0	It is surprising all this work in only 48 hours. Being honest, I must start assuming there are things that are 3th party assets as the music with violins. Good game nonetheless. Screenshot_2025-10-24_00-43-02.png
Oct 24 04:02:55	16m 46s	WonderBot: A Lofty Return	♥ 1	Nice game. I had some stutters here and there but it was very good for a web project. The graphics were very good.
Oct 24 04:23:54	20m 59s	Private Inequity	♥ 1	Why I have the feeling I can not make these transactions in real life? Good game. It disguises as an economy game but it is a puzzle. I like the minimalism of the game. I wish there was a way to speed up the game as I am forced to wait
Oct 24 05:33:24	1h 09m	Turbo-powered Cow Milker 0.1 Ld58 release	♥ 0	Unfortunately I feel that none of the controls do anything meaningful.
Oct 24 17:03:44	11h 30m	Lone Gatherer孤集者	♥ 0	Excellent presentation and good atmospheric music. The game itself is very simple and that is ok but the last level was confusing. I just picked one item at the end and the game simply ended in the title. the background images do not match the rest of the art.
Oct 25 01:59:03	8h 55m	Idle Badger	♥ 1	It is a shame I could not stumble upon this game earlier. This has so many levels. I initial thought, honestly, 'this game won the jam?' and later as I was playing saw all these layers on top of each other. It can even get creepy. Excellent job. I hope to learn a couple of things from you.