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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Jonathan Lorenz's comment | |
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| May 2 12:38:25 | Wheely Wheely Good Deliveries | ♥ 2 | A bit of qwop feelings, but on a bike! I liked the weird controls, the animations and the cleaness of the project. I wish there were a little arrow pointing to the next direction because I spent a lot of time wandering in the city, trying to find my next target. I would love to see something like this, but more speed focused! Like an infinite runner where you have to go as fast as possible while taking and giving deliveries on the run! Anyway, good work! | |
| May 2 12:48:46 | 10m 21s | Deliver From the Dead | ♥ 2 | I enjoy the time spent, but I can't do anything without being brutally murdered. I will try this one again later because right now I have no clue about what I am supposed to do once I have grabbed the cure. Nice mood! |
| May 3 09:01:36 | 20h 12m | Parcel Blaster 2099 | ♥ 1 | The soudtrack is awesome! I liked the overall energy of the game. The game could be expanded with special events like moving mailbox, special mailboxes or packages worth more points, bonuses like slow-mo or packages with a seeker head. What if this was a roguelite, with a full game loop, bosses, different pathes between levels etc ... Great submission! |
| May 3 09:09:28 | 7m 52s | K-SANDWICH | ♥ 2 | The perfect game jam submission! Some simple mechanics declined in differents challenges. I'm not saying this often but for once I would have whished for more levels!The game could be expanded with even more mechanics or ennemies like hold X to prepare a super punch to kill super ennemies that are resistant to simple punches. Great submission! |
| May 3 09:19:33 | 10m 05s | Special Delivery | ♥ 1 | Very clever! I'm not a big fan of puzzle games but I felt this one is just the right balance for me, not too easy or too difficult, and with a bit of a dexterity challenge.The graphics and audio are simple but nice. I loved the little flying letter which gives player a reason to retry.Very good submission! |
| May 3 09:34:34 | 15m 01s | IceCream Van | ♥ 2 | Wow, I'm being bullied because I missed some kid's order. So I'm trying to get away and .. ho no! I ran over a child! My god it's a massacre on the beach! Nice pico8 entry! A simple but enjoyabl game. Would be fun to have even more complex ice cream to craft within a time limit! Good job overall! |
| May 3 12:43:59 | 3h 09m | The last way | ♥ 1 | Loved the mood and the world building. I was supposed to choose what to do with the souls but the only option I had was to throw it away. And then the option disapeared and I couldn't do anything exept fight the never ending flow of undead attacking my ship. Really awesome potential for the atmosphere, not so much with the gameplay (unless I missed something or there is a bug). Great and unique entry overall! |
| May 3 12:48:47 | 4m 48s | The Pigeon Post Principle | ♥ 4 | Cute and smart little game. I saw you already have a lot of interesting comments, so I'll keep it short : great entry that can be improved a little bit by having the "click to continue" replaced by "press any key to continue" ... so we don't have to switch between keyboard and mouse. Good job! |
| May 3 13:48:23 | 59m 36s | Debbie's Diner Derby | ♥ 1 | Simple but effective concept! I love the simplicity of the gameplay and the graphics and audio are very unique. Good job! |
| May 12 13:38:22 | 215h 49m | Cracken Cargo | ♥ 2 | Hahaha! I Loved the giant octopus! Great graphics, great music, simple gameplay. Overall a cool experience, good job! |
| May 12 13:43:17 | 4m 55s | TukTuk Delivery | ♥ 0 | Got stuck on a fence :( had to restart. The physics of the tuktuk are funny and hard to master. I would have liked a little background music. Good job! |
| May 12 13:52:57 | 9m 40s | Man with a Van | ♥ 3 | Very satisfying incremental game. At first I was a bit bored, but it quickly escalated to fast paced gameplay and having to take interesting decisions. Well done! |
| May 12 13:56:25 | 3m 28s | Meat Missile Madness | ♥ 1 | Hahaha, that's one of the most original submission I saw. You did respected the theme, but in your own way! The controls were a bit difficult, but I guess it's on purpose. Good job! |
| May 12 14:07:42 | 11m 17s | Birdmail | ♥ 1 | Very simple but effective tower defense where you must shoot pigeons! I always fail at around 1350 packages. Is it possible to complete the first level? Seems to me that at the end there are always 2 or 3 birds still alive. Good work! |
| May 12 14:14:12 | 6m 30s | Lost & Found | ♥ 1 | Great little run and deliver game, with some roguelite elements. Didn't really get what the bonfire was about, and didn't had the time to experiment because I was chased by a thousand angry ghosts. The highlight of the game is the graphics. Good job! |
| May 12 14:33:29 | 19m 17s | Entomoria | ♥ 0 | Interesting idea and execution. I have to say I'm not a big fan of the unconsistant art style. Some AI stuff + simple 3d models + hand drawn 2d sprites + default Unity font. This it the part I would try to spend more time on for the next time. Good work overall! |
| May 12 14:43:56 | 10m 27s | Parcel Madness: The Last Delivery | ♥ 1 | Nice plateformer, hard challenges but good controls, so it's ok. Got stuck behind what seems like an breakable wall because my parcel disapeared through the ground. Like the oldschool mood of it! Good work! |
| May 12 14:50:21 | 6m 25s | Hexy | ♥ 1 | Had to try again a few times before getting it. Nice little game, not sure about the relation to the theme but hey, I enjoyed my time playing the game. If I would change something, it would be to have less grey graphics and some scenery elments in the background. Good work overall! |
| May 12 14:53:25 | 3m 04s | Ultimate Pigeon Post | ♥ 1 | Nice beat em up plateformer! I've never played as a fighting pigeon before :) Great graphics and good entry overall. Well done! |
| May 13 11:02:45 | 20h 09m | CURSED DE-LIVERY 💀 | ♥ 1 | I had this weird bug were the look of the character was always going down, like if its head was too heavy. Made it very hard to play. Looking at the other comments its seems like I'm the only one getting this :( SO yeah, a bit hard to judge with this annoying bug, but I enjoyed the mood and the humour of the game. |
| May 13 11:08:12 | 5m 27s | Mystic Logistic | ♥ 1 | A clever little puzzle plateformer. In enjoyed the simple but effective mood brought by the graphics and audio. Good job! |
| May 19 12:43:57 | 145h 35m | Fragile: Handle With Care | ♥ 1 | Nice little entry, I wish the movement speed of the player was a bit more quick. Also, the game could be improved with multiple delivery objectives (copper : 2 deliveries, siler : 4 deliveries, gold 6 deliveries) so we wouls have more incentives to replay. Good job! |
| May 19 13:13:05 | 29m 08s | Planetary Pizza | ♥ 1 | Wow! Way too quick movement reaction! My ship was flying through space and spinning at light speed. Didn't managed to do anything, but I enjoyed the home made graphics. Imho the experience could be improving by just tuning down the rotation and movement speed. |