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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | peterfonts's comment | |
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| Dec 7 08:26:33 | Devil figurine | ♥ 1 | Clean and smart controls! Visuals are good and the animations of pray and die are nice! Has a good balance between sacrifice your units for weapons and armor bnut at the same time you need more number of units. Maybe can be review, because the last level I didn't need any weapon to destroy the boss. Needs music! Amazing work! Congrats! | |
| Dec 7 08:38:41 | 12m 08s | Rogues Like Beer | ♥ 1 | Amazing art and animations! Hilarious puzzles mixing different mechanics! Table, rock, bombs, columns, etc. mixing with the "beer guys"... ;D smart and good design. Awesome for a Ludum Dare competition! Maybe you can polish the game feel at jump, die, explosions,etc. and add more sounds. Congrats! Amazing work! |
| Dec 7 08:58:02 | 19m 21s | The WeeZard | ♥ 2 | Good game. Visuals are nice! Maybe you didn't need to create a huge level, instead to polish things like balance better the mana (random drops), player damage feedback, player die feedback, add more monster sounds, etc. Congrats! |
| Dec 7 13:06:55 | 4h 08m | Effigy | ♥ 0 | Wow! The multiplayer is another thing! Stole, burn... I enjoyed playing with another player! There are things can be improved, like the gamee feel, polish, feedback about your actions... but the essential and the basic mechanics are there! Congrats! Good job! 👏🏽 👏🏽 |
| Dec 8 09:56:21 | 20h 49m | Human Resource | ♥ 1 | Wow! Great game! Theme, story and enviroment are awesome! The mechanics are good but maybe a bit repetitive, all the time is throwing workers, maybe with a different variation in actions, or new enviroment props that you can interact can improve the gameplay... reminds me The Swapper! Congrats! Well done! |
| Dec 8 10:28:10 | 31m 49s | Cook | ♥ 1 | Wow! Good experience! - Mood and atmosphere is great and weird, at the beginning I expect a Cooking game xD, and this sentiment to see something completely different thing is great. - Changes narrator and gameplay control the character are great and create disorientation. - When appear the words and the sound is great and create "rhythm" inside the gameplay. But maybe that can be improved: - Why not play at fullscreen mode? I think you can improve the mood of the game. - I saw that the player doesn't have any option or choice (at the beginning I wrote "It is a game", and doesn't work... it's linear and I think can be improved adding more player options. Now is too much imposition for the narrator. Example: There is no Game --> https://www.kongregate.com/games/kamizoto_creator/there-is-no-game - When the narrator talks, the sound of the words writing can be improved adding a pitch. - Add more feedback when the character arrives at bed... Amazing job! Congrats!! |
| Dec 9 17:53:42 | 31h 25m | Colossus | ♥ 1 | It's a nice game being your first game! - It's very interesting the mechanic damage the enemy = jump/climb. - It's important to improve the player damage 's feedback... and died feedback too! Also the jump and when you damage in the colossus eye.... players need to see different things and changes in the visuals and sounds when something happens. Is a good prototype! Keep it doing games! 🤜 |
| Dec 9 18:22:41 | 28m 59s | The Vault | ♥ 1 | Original and polished, awesome work! The story is engaging and the sounds are excellent. A lot of details and details... Congrats! |
| Dec 9 18:41:37 | 18m 56s | Catrifices | ♥ 1 | Good game being your first game! Some things that can be improved: - Needs a tutorial, when the players start the game, they don't have any clue about what they need to do. - Add more feedback about: main character damage, game over, take the cats, drop the cats, state of the cats... - The characters movement are slow... this game is not a Silent Hill PT xD, maybe you can increase the speed at main characters and monsters... or add a dash mechanic at main character... I think with this feature is more nice to play. Take the reference games like Bastion. Keep it doing games! 🤛🏽 Congrats! |
| Dec 9 18:57:33 | 15m 56s | superstar | ♥ 1 | Wow! The mechanic taking the crates and move carefully is really nice! Graphics and sounds are good! Amazing game! Congrats!! |
| Dec 10 11:27:28 | 16h 29m | Labrats | ♥ 1 | Wow! Great game! Mechanics like share your powers, fire and colors create a lot of gameplay situations! Also the narrative increases the interest of the game! Congrats! |
| Dec 10 12:26:51 | 59m 23s | Sirius Galactica | ♥ 1 | Good game! Smart mechanics! Control the ship and at the same time manage the oxygen... nice! Maybe you can improve: - Improve the damage and die feedback and when the player has low oxygen... add particles, blink in red or another colors the ship texture and add different sounds. With these players can understand better what happens. - Another thing is improving the feedback about the enemies: when the enemy dies add a particle system explosion or a sprite explosion. - Be careful, because now at the game over screen the players can press actions like Q or C, cancel this inputs in this state to have a better experience. But at the end is an amazing game! Congrats! |
| Dec 10 12:46:41 | 19m 50s | Mr.Geek | ♥ 2 | Good game mixing quiz game and choices to save people! Maybe there are some things that can be improved: - In the score results section, could be nice to have an option to move the screen up and down, sometimes I don't have time to read all the results! - There is no end depending on the player score! I think is a good motivation to replay again and see different endings! - Adding an extra skill or bonus (for example, you can earn this skill if you answer correctly 3 answers in less than 10 seconds), this extra skill is like x-rays power that the player can see a part of people that you will save who is good or not... Anyway, is a great game! Congrats! |
| Dec 10 13:46:35 | 59m 54s | Reactor Overdrive | ♥ 1 | Good game! Controls are clear and intuitive, players can shoot and manage the settings at the same time! Smart! Graphics are good and "organic"! Maybe it needs add more feedback about damage and die. Also, adding at the beginning a little tutorial about the controls of the game can be good. Great game! Congrats! |
| Dec 10 14:56:02 | 1h 09m | Eternal Home Floristry | ♥ 0 | ¿Qué deciros? Enhorabuena por otro juegazo realizado en tiempo récord, las diferentes consecuencias con cada decision (flor xD) que tomas, la historia, la música, y muchísimos detalles.... increíble. Creo que habría que pulir un poco la colocación de las hojas decorativas y su uso (no es del todo intuitivo), por todo lo demás, espectacular! 👏🏼 |
| Dec 10 15:20:07 | 24m 05s | Your God Demands... | ♥ 2 | Genial juego! Gráficos, sonidos... el gamefeel está MUY pulido! Además es un juego difícil que reta al jugador constantemente. Lo único que hecho un poco en falta es que sea un poco más variado (los diferentes sacrificios que se proponen es una muy buena variante, te tienes que mover muy rápido para despejar el centro y centrarte en el bicho que tienes que sacrificar), pero tal vez algún cambio de estado del juego, como por ejemplo, que haya un tiempo Berserker-Bonus que si lanzas muchos sacrificios en poco tiempo obtienes una mejor bonificación (llama grande xD). Pero bueno, es comprensible con el poco tiempo que se tiene en una Ludum. Es un juego que se controla fluidísimo y está superpulido! Enhorabuena! 👏🏼 |
| Dec 10 15:44:19 | 24m 12s | Moloch's Priest | ♥ 1 | Great game! The mood and the atmosphere are awesome! The story, the voices and the sounds are good and increase the mood. The choices are interesting. Maybe can improve the gameplay adding different variety of actions (change a bit the gameplay, not only take the message in the altar --> talk with the priests --> take the bottle --> use it in the altar --> restart). Overall, it's an incredible game with an awesome mood. Congrats! |
| Dec 11 14:40:21 | 22h 56m | GET OUT of bed..... | ♥ 1 | Nice game! Music is awesome and the clicker mechanic is great! But maybe you can improve some things: - Split the UI, identify better the alarm than the other buyable objects. Also, the info about your effort is complex to identify inside the computer, put the effort score in other area, like top right area. - Improve the buyable objects area, the book is located down. - Add underline at buyable objects to identify that players can identify when the cursor is hover. Also, add a different underline in the alarm. - Add sounds when the players press the alarm or buy an object. - Add feedback when the dead is close and when is game over. Like acceleratee the music or blink in red the screen. - Put the music in loop mode. Overall is nice game with a smart idea. Congrats and keep it doing games! 🤜🏼 |
| Dec 11 18:00:33 | 3h 20m | Floofs | ♥ 1 | Nice game being your first game! Some things can improve: - Needs more feedback: game over situation, victory situation, good actions, bad actions... there are things that I don't really understand. - Improve the controls, maybe instead to shot with space bar is better using left mouse button. Overall is a good game. Keep it doing games! 🤛🏽 |
| Dec 11 18:40:22 | 39m 49s | Disorder | ♥ 1 | Good game with awesome graphics! But there are things that maybe you'll can improve: - The graphics are awesome, but not intuitive and clear. There are sometimes that the UI needs to be more understandable than beautiful, some UI elements are small and don't have a good feedback when the players collect items. - The goal... is complex to know the objectives and the goal, is not clear at the beginning and is too long the gameplay to understand it. In a LD competition is better to do a short game with a clear goals and if you'all have more time iterate with more contantent or levels. Before publish the game, test with people and you will see if they undestand it or not. Especially in a runner game. - Some game examples: · Totem Runner · Runner3 Overall is a good game! Keep it doing games! 🤛🏽 |
| Dec 12 11:07:42 | 16h 27m | Roustabout | ♥ 2 | Awesome game! Mixing tetris mechanics with push and move objects... great! The mood is amazing and all the game has coherence! Also, you all add subobjectives! \o/ Maybe you all can improve somethings: - Is difficult to see when an object collapse with other object... maybe mark these objects with a different shader or color (example red) is better to identify this situation. - Maybe you can add inside the gameplay an interface identify the scores and the stars at the same time, something like this: UIExample.jpg - When the players complete the game, they are at the credits scene... but is impossible exit in this section! xD Overall, Congrats people! Amazing job! |
| Dec 12 13:19:27 | 2h 11m | Documentia | ♥ 2 | Wow! What a game! I want to know the name... you know... but I didn't find any clue to complete the game "correctly". The mood is incredible and the interaction outside the game is fantastic. Maybe one thing that you can improve is the interaction with the characters, sometimes is confusing if you click in a character or not, maybe adding an outline when the cursor is hover is enough, but is silly thing, the whole game is brilliant (design, graphics, sound, etc.). Amazing job guys! Congrats! |
| Dec 12 18:27:45 | 5h 08m | Exploding Sport | ♥ 1 | Great game! The mechanic is original and simple to control at the same time! Very challenging playing with other player! It's so funny! Maybe at draw situation you can do a "sudden death" xD. Also, the sounds explosions I think need more volume. Overall is an amazing game! Congrats! |
| Dec 12 18:54:45 | 27m 00s | Sacrificio Inc. | ♥ 1 | Wow! What a game! Fantastic graphics, sounds... all! The mood is incredible! Maybe you all can polish the mouse inputs and the interaction with the stairs, now the players don't have the "feeling" that you are dragging squares. Also, the UI distribution can improve, is not too much important the level that you are, but the time YES! Anyway is an amazing polish game! Congrats!! 👏🏽 |
| Dec 15 22:47:40 | 75h 52m | Apatanat: the benefit of all. | ♥ 1 | Nice game! Good graphics! Maybe you all can improve: - Be careful with the characters layers, it's easy to fix. - Maybe when the main character needs to interact with an object needs more feedback: underline the object, make bigger, etc. - No music? Why? - Looks too static the game, maybe adding an extra layer with a texture movement (like rain, wind or another effects, improve better the game). - Next time, don't create a HUGE area to interact, focus only in 2 or 3 screens and improve the animation, graphics and effects. Overall, it's a good game. Keep it doing games! Congrats! 🤜🏼 |
| Dec 15 23:02:14 | 14m 34s | Don't Sloth | ♥ 0 | Nice game being your first game! Some things can improve: - Hide the mouse cursor. - Add a random pitch at footsteps sound. - It's impossible exit the game! - Needs more variation at the trees and the terrain. - Why not add a map? Now is a little confusing and disorientating walk. Overall is a nice game. Keep it doing games! 🤜🏼 |
| Dec 23 08:38:27 | 177h 36m | Medieval beasts | ♥ 0 | Interesting game using medieval illustrations for that! Amazing! The sacrifice skill is good, but maybe needs more feedback when the player uses it. Another thing that maybe can be improved the gameplay is adding a minimap to see an overview about the situation, like the game Swords and Soldiers. Another thing can be improved is adding attack animation at your units. Overall is an excellent game! Congrats! |
| Dec 23 08:47:37 | 9m 10s | Lastcrifices | ♥ 0 | Good game! 100% on theme! Maybe can improve some effects like using parallax in the space backgrounds, but overall is a great game! Congrats! |
| Dec 23 09:11:59 | 24m 22s | Fading Memories | ♥ 1 | Great game than mix perfectly gameplay and story... simple mechanics but using with smart way! That piano... bad man... Awesome! Congrats! |
| Dec 26 09:04:13 | 71h 52m | Colors of Your World | ♥ 1 | Wow! Amazing game with incredible graphics, sound and gameplay! The Level Design is AWESOME! 👏🏽 Maybe the only thing is the story and the theme... sacrifice the color... also, it's linear, the player doesn't have options and is not reflected in the gameplay. Overall, is an amazing game! Congrats!! \o/ |
| Dec 26 15:33:54 | 6h 29m | Quantic Paouf IV | ♥ 0 | Good game! Amazing graphics using shaders like blur, chromatic and glow! It is sometimes difficult to detect what is interactive and what not inside the gameplay (take references like the game Element4). Maybe the theme "sacrifice" is complex to understand here... but the gameplay is nice and enjoyable. Congrats! |
| Dec 26 15:40:52 | 6m 58s | Kaiten | ♥ 1 | Good game with amazing graphics!! 👏🏽 The mood is brilliant using the audio and realistic aesthetics. Maybe the gameplay needs another variables to do the game more fun, because now the only factor is moving and avoid the mines, maybe you can add some features like radars, lasers, temperature or pressure detection, etc. Overall, is an awesome game! Congrats! |
| Dec 26 15:46:53 | 6m 01s | Limbs Quest VII | ♥ 2 | Good game! Maybe needs more feedback in all the actions (jump, attack, damage, death, etc.)... for this, maybe can help read and research some articles and videos about game feel and juicy. Overall y a great game! Congrats and keep it doing games! 🤛🏼 |
