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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Cliff Lee CL's comment | |
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| Dec 6 07:13:01 | Cracks | ♥ 1 | Good job in presenting the story! but I am not very clear about the ending. Fixing a person? The spikes and the holes may not relate to a person well in my opinion. The effect of the tape and the crack filler is cool by the way! | |
| Dec 6 07:30:29 | 17m 28s | Jazzy Beats | ♥ 4 | Great in overall! Art, music, and concept are great! I have some suggestions: 1.The game hint at the beginning of the match disappears too fast. I can't go through it after restarting at least 3 times. 2.When the match is going, hide your cursor because it does not affect the gameplay but blocks some of the screen. 3.Winning your fans with punches and kicks is somewhat strange with your concept XD. Maybe use some other music attack to beautify it. |
| Dec 6 07:48:27 | 17m 58s | Waiter, Please! | ♥ 1 | Great game overall! Art, music, and gamplay all come together. Satisfying gameplay and even have an ending. Good job :) |
| Dec 6 08:01:51 | 13m 24s | Xenon Xenophobia | ♥ 1 | Great concept for the theme! Here are some suggestions for you: - The control of the plane feels stiff, and move backward is odd for a plane. - The enemy is not obvious to be observed. Good job! |
| Dec 6 08:35:51 | 34m 00s | Mini Mod | ♥ 0 | Great graphics and modifications design! The font size of modification and in-game menu are too small for me. I use the controller to play the game, but the modification part is not working for controllers. |
| Dec 6 09:00:46 | 24m 55s | LootOnline | ♥ 1 | This is very humorous hahaha. The clicks for a lootbox is too many to get. I played a while and the server even offline. Sadly, nothing is saved. Nice job! |
| Dec 6 09:40:20 | 39m 34s | Fatmans Fortune | ♥ 1 | Great graphics! The characters are neat and cute. The gameplay needs more features to be fun and the sprite's layer needs to be polished. Good job :) |
| Dec 6 09:51:00 | 10m 40s | Forgotten Cubes | ♥ 1 | Simple but fun puzzle game! Graphics and music provide a good mood to play. Nice work! |
| Dec 6 10:01:23 | 10m 23s | Super Coin | ♥ 1 | Nice and straightforward game! The game is extremely hard when there are many enemies around you because their bullets will destroy yours. Maybe needs more "juice" in the combat to make it more enjoyable? |
| Dec 6 10:13:07 | 11m 44s | Money Making Miner | ♥ 1 | Nice work! Great mood! Maybe you should keep the Y-axis velocity when moving the player so that we can dig down more easily. |
| Dec 6 10:59:06 | 45m 59s | Life's A Glitch | ♥ 0 | Great entry and nice art style! I just discovered that I don't move and I won't die XD. It's over 2:00 now. |
| Dec 7 04:22:11 | 17h 23m | Sunburn | ♥ 0 | Simple but great game! The concept is very good according to the theme! Fun to play! |
| Dec 7 05:51:13 | 1h 29m | Sugarplum Summit | ♥ 1 | Great audio and art style! Give a great x-mas feeling! - Falling attacks are hard to dodge. (snowman, ginger man) - Need some sound effects for shooting or hitting. Nice job! |
| Dec 7 06:14:04 | 22m 51s | Overrun | ♥ 1 | Good job in making those levels! I have some suggestions for you: - Spend your time on polish your game instead of making many levels in the game jam. - There are some levels' boundaries don't have colliders (forest maze?) - Control is not easy to play with, and I think the sprint key is not necessary. (because I always press it) |
| Dec 7 06:34:43 | 20m 39s | Re:Tileation | ♥ 2 | Great entry with good level design and audio! The mechanism of backfires makes me don't want to fire at the normal enemies because they are less threatening than my own bullets. I think the mechanism can be better :) |
| Dec 7 07:35:17 | 1h 00m | Murder Milk | ♥ 1 | Great game with good art style! The sound effects are loud and disturbing because they played so frequently. I don't sure where the theme is? More enemies? |
| Dec 7 07:46:31 | 11m 14s | Yottaman | ♥ 1 | Great game with good concept for the theme! However, the game is difficult after "Dangerous” power. Almost every moves damage some properties lol. Great work! |
| Dec 7 07:54:52 | 8m 21s | Trip to the Earth | ♥ 2 | Great concept for the theme and great artwork! It's hard to get the good ending lol, so many things crash toward you. Nice work guys! |
| Dec 7 08:04:18 | 9m 26s | Komainu | ♥ 1 | Hmm... The descriptions have so less information to understand the game. The art style and audio are great! The control stuck sometimes and no any tutorial on the control. I beat all enemies but nothing happened? and I don't know where the concept relates to the theme. |
| Dec 7 09:48:51 | 1h 44m | Snake Force | ♥ 1 | Great overall experience! Too bad there are no sound effects. Graphics, animations, and effects go together and awesome! |
| Dec 8 08:49:05 | 23h 00m | Type Them Down | ♥ 0 | Great concept to combine a game with typing practice! I enjoy this game but some typing mistakes will kill myself is odd for the game. Maybe you can make the input disable for some seconds as a punishment instead of losing health. |
| Dec 8 09:08:20 | 19m 15s | LD40 Compo: The Greed Run | ♥ 1 | Great concept for the theme, I like it! The level design is good, but I will discover I get stuck in some places because I was too greedy lol. Nice work for less than 24 hrs! |
| Dec 8 09:15:32 | 7m 12s | Stuff and things | ♥ 0 | The concept is good but it needs more packaging. Maybe with a proper story will make it more fun! I run into a situation that there are some boxes fly out of the camera so that I can't end the game. |
| Dec 8 09:27:47 | 12m 15s | Gold Mania | ♥ 1 | Good concept and polished game! Here are some suggestions for you: - It seems no need for sprint key because you will almost always sprint to dodge the bullets. - The background has no horizontal hint, which makes the vertical movement not obvious. - The game definitely needs sound effects :) Good job! |
| Dec 8 09:43:31 | 15m 44s | Manifold Complex | ♥ 3 | Polished fun game! The level design is good but I can't find the goal XD. I recommend that you lock the cursor at the center of the screen because it gave me a big headache when I play with a dual monitor. |
| Dec 8 10:15:31 | 32m 00s | Candisorter | ♥ 1 | Polished great game! The concept is good for the theme! Good job! |
| Dec 8 12:45:47 | 2h 30m | Bunnyfication | ♥ 2 | Very great graphics and mood! I enjoy the atmosphere and all cute rabbits. But I think that more rabbits will actually make the game easier. |
| Dec 8 13:00:57 | 15m 10s | Booyah Bass | ♥ 4 | Great game overall! I like that I can drag many cats behind me hahaha. Drifting cats is fun! Solid entry, Nice job! |
| Dec 8 14:23:06 | 1h 22m | The Luckiest Businessman | ♥ 0 | Great game in all aspects! The game was fun at first then becoming frustrating to get to the ending. But I think that's the theme at? Or the goal is too far (100,000) The car doesn't help the speed between rooms... That's so sad :( Graphics and audio are very good! Good Job! |
| Dec 9 02:44:27 | 12h 21m | Horny Bunny | ♥ 5 | Awesome entry with all aspects! Good graphics, mood and level design! That's so funny when the bunnies start humping miss bunny XD hahahaha. Great work guys! |
| Dec 9 02:50:59 | 6m 32s | Too Many Cooks | ♥ 1 | Killing so many cooks today! It's fun to play but the sound is annoying lol. Great work! |
| Dec 9 03:00:00 | 9m 01s | Parent Simulator | ♥ 1 | So fun to play hahahah!!! Definitely a catastrophe when more and more babies to feed. Very well done! Awesome! |
| Dec 9 03:46:35 | 46m 35s | Runaway Magic | ♥ 1 | Good job with the scripting! I would say that the gameplay mechanism needs to be polished more. It seems that the main part is the dialog adventure game but adds additional parts to fit the theme. |
| Dec 9 04:19:32 | 32m 57s | Tic-Tac-Matrix | ♥ 1 | Definitely the most innovative entry! Amazing content made in 48 hrs! Very well done but a little hard for me hahaha:) |
| Dec 9 08:57:09 | 4h 37m | Trashsucker | ♥ 1 | Great concept but needs to be polished more. I enjoy the trash sucking ability, but it can be more than that. The combat with the hand is not good for your game, especially when there is no animations or effect to indicate where you hit. I suggest you to use trash cannon or something else to replace it, that may make the game more enjoyable. Another thing is your level's goal is not clear. I have to remember where the trash is by myself, which is hard and I may lose a single piece of trash then I get stuck. Maybe you can use a meter to show how much trash is there to be collected, or a arrow to show the direction to remaining trash. Good work! |
| Dec 9 11:19:58 | 2h 22m | Keep them under control!!! | ♥ 1 | Good concept for the theme! The game needs to be polished more to be really fun. The tutorial at first is overwhelming, too many for one time. The tempo of spawning is too long to enjoy the theme. Good job! |
| Dec 9 11:44:38 | 24m 40s | Greedy Merchants | ♥ 1 | Great and polished entry! Can't wait to see this game with local multiplayer mode (but the pace needs to be faster) :) |
| Dec 9 12:11:04 | 26m 26s | The Will of the Wisps | ♥ 3 | Absolutely solid entry! Graphics, audio, concept are very good and polished. Good job! |
| Dec 9 13:00:11 | 49m 07s | Santa's Factory | ♥ 2 | Great mood and graphics! (v1.0) - Need to improve the control feeling to make it easier to navigate around. - Make the presents easier to grab. Good job! |
| Dec 10 08:00:51 | 19h 00m | Poser | ♥ 1 | Great entry with a good concept for the theme! Good job! |
| Dec 11 03:00:09 | 18h 59m | Splotch 2 | ♥ 2 | Great and polished entry! Simple but great graphics with good level designs. It is challenging and fun! Good job! |
| Dec 11 06:25:37 | 3h 25m | CoinCase (Ludum Dare 40) | ♥ 1 | Need to be polished to be more fun! Still nice job for the first time try. Keep practicing :) |