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Zephyr19

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202353Delivery👥Color Deliveryjam10583.042.923.762.422.561.712.41

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Comments by Zephyr19

LD53 — Delivery

Paper Guy by cortexdeveloper 2023-05-02T15:19:00Z

Great game! It would nice that there are some variances added to the level. Hope you safe.

Buccaneers' Bounty by Swen 2023-05-04T15:24:14Z

Love it! Well designed mechanics and great art!

Fertility Island by Tomáš Selmeci 2023-05-02T06:38:57Z

This idea is so fun and sound design is great! It sounds so funny to deliver a baby like that. Might be a little bit hard to look beneath the player from that angle of camera.

MailBeats ✉️🎶 by Adam Gaskins 2023-05-02T14:36:07Z

So much fun! Can't wait to play much more difficult levels.

Pro Epistula Mori by squimmy 2023-05-03T15:30:15Z

The art is so good.

MagiCat by Flokami 2023-05-02T15:08:41Z

I love the art so much!

An Ocean Planet by JamieOK 2023-05-04T15:20:26Z

Love the music and graphic!

Dust Courier by SmDaniels 2023-05-04T05:46:44Z

Nice game!I like the art and atmosphere.

Aerial Odyssey by Tvorojok 2023-05-02T15:26:57Z

Most complex and strategic game I've play so far! So amazing!

Special Delivery by Alex Chertilin 2023-05-02T06:07:02Z

Cool game and relaxing music! Not thought a visual novel game could come out of this theme.

Delivering Death by WeeFairyFabi 2023-05-02T15:01:28Z

Nice game and cute character! I feel so scared even with my torch and don't know where I should go to collect souls. It would be nice that I can enhance the brightness of my torch.

Postman by Qin Bugong 2023-05-04T05:44:49Z

Cool mechanic but really difficult. Need more UI/UX to teach me how these mechanics work and a button that can undo my input.Btw, may I ask where are you from?

Postman by Qin Bugong 2023-05-04T06:53:43Z

@qin-bugong 看到这个ID就感觉是国人hhh,你这个机制真很有意思呀,但是谜题真的好难,过了2关难度骤升两眼一黑。要是后续能优化一下UX,比如把工具人放上去的时候能显示路线,邮递员的行动路线也可以显示终点,能为玩家减少很多思考的成本,专注于谜题本身。再比如顺时针逆时针的工具人和能用两次的转向标都能有一下UX的提示就更好了。不一定对,一点点小建议

DeliverPunch by skitefall 2023-05-03T03:55:23Z

Good game! Feel a little bit sad when I found out if I punch the box to a corner then I can't get it out.

Angel Envelope by leking 2023-05-03T15:27:07Z

Love it! Good idea and relaxing music.

RELEASE THE MEAT by NuiN 2023-05-02T14:49:30Z

The most creative game I've played so far! The build system brought so much complexity to the game. I wander if I can save and load my previous cart build.

The last help by Linkway 2023-05-02T15:14:20Z

I like the idea of deliver happiness to other people! But the movement of player feels a little bit stiff.

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-02T05:51:00Z

@highskies Noted! Thanks! : )

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-02T05:56:45Z

@tomas-selmeci Thanks for the feedback! We've learned that the difficulty gap between 3rdLevel and 4thLevel is quite a lot. The movement of character might not feel good since it's our first time making a platformer game.

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-02T14:24:41Z

@nuin Thanks! May I ask which level?

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-02T14:27:49Z

@adam-gaskins Thank you!

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-02T23:57:08Z

@skitefall We'll definitely going to improve the movement later.Thanks for the advice!

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-02T23:59:37Z

@cortexdeveloper Thank you! The movement in game needs to be better. Html5 version has some slightly input delay, we are still trying to figure it out.

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-03T03:33:14Z

@edenic666 Thanks! Neither of us has art background, these graphics are the best we can do. :)

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-04T09:44:48Z

@elementary Sorry for the lack of tutorial of basic mechanics. We nearly have time for that. Instead, we could only write them on the screen. The main objective to finish level is to paint all the platform to the same color (which changes with different levels). It's written on the top mid area of screen. The basic movement/abilities are written on the top right of screen. So in level 1, you are supposed to use Leftshift to dash (which the yellow platform grants you) to the red platform. Sorry for the bad experience playing our game first time. You can try again if you like.

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-04T11:34:54Z

@qin-bugong Thanks!

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-04T11:38:27Z

@elementary Yeah, basic movement is bad. Thanks to that, now I know more about how to make player control good in a platformer game. This level is set up like this on purpose actually. It supposes to teach player about the timer on platform and the reset button which would be used a lot in the future levels. But looks like this idea doesn't work well. Thanks for the feedback though!

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-06T01:34:24Z

@groundwater-studio I'm glad you like our game. Levels could be hard sometime since we don't have enough time to think more carefully. The timer hints on platforms definitely need more clear and cool visual art. : ) Anyway,thanks for the feedback.

Color Delivery by Zephyr19 2023-05-06T01:36:26Z

@xschaumix Thanks! We are certainly going to try harder on the level designs.

Bus Hostage ! by Aymco 2023-05-02T14:54:41Z

Good Game! Just a little bit hard to find the pink hotel.

FORMIDULOSUS partus by highskies 2023-05-02T06:40:42Z

Love the game and the atmosphere!

Message to the End by edenic666 2023-05-03T03:56:29Z

Cool art, love it!

Delivery dungeon by kato game studio 2023-05-04T15:25:59Z

Nice try. It would be good with some guidance.