Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD45 → A bard's Journey

A bard's Journey

By kanonix

Percentile
CategoryRankScoreCountLD45Ever
Overall2933.306339.148.4
Fun2273.266351.856.4
Innovation2923.126245.347.7
Theme4392.716214.714.4
Graphics3383.026323.931.1
Audio1453.406354.563.2
Humor963.255968.770.7
Mood2073.255945.152.2

Comments

nachtwitch 2019-10-07 00:50 ♥ 1

love the graphics and communication

kanonix 2019-10-07 05:51 ♥ 0

@nachtwitch Aha thank you ! I had fun writing them :) And am not an artist at first, so doing the graphics took most of my time ^^

robowarrior1982 2019-10-07 06:11 ♥ 1

A very good idea, the game is addictive and it have a good ambiant ! i like the "fight phase" (and his sound effect). Congratulation !

kanonix 2019-10-07 06:24 ♥ 0

@robowarrior1982 Aha thank you ! I had a lot of fun making them :)

0xkalle 2019-10-07 06:42 ♥ 1

I love the anti fans :D

kanonix 2019-10-07 08:16 ♥ 0

@0xkalle Thank you ! When I had this idea I was like "Oh my god this is so cool" :D

w0lfenstein 2019-10-07 09:27 ♥ 1

Funny experience and sweet music :D

kanonix 2019-10-07 09:59 ♥ 1

@w0lfenstein It stays in your head for a while after that, right ? ;)

hcursino 2019-10-07 10:48 ♥ 1

Oh no, that song will be stuck in my head for days now hahahaha I love all the hazards you managed to add to increase the challenge, very creative. Good job.

kanonix 2019-10-07 10:49 ♥ 0

@hcursino Thanks a lot for this kind feedback ! I took some time writing down the GDD before actually making the game :)

coachsisyphus 2019-10-07 11:03 ♥ 1

I intend to steal an android device to play this; looks awesome!

kanonix 2019-10-07 11:53 ♥ 0

@coachsisyphus Ahaha go ahead ! I really did my best to make the game experience as smooth as possible. In theory, there isn't much bugs or whatever. + I worked hard on a difficulty progression algorythm to give you a possible long run experience if you're quite good with rythm games :D

j0ye 2019-10-07 12:16 ♥ 1

That was awesome. The gameplay loop is a lot of fun. Particularly on short breaks. Extra points for making it an app. Now I always have the game with me. face.png

blint6 2019-10-07 12:19 ♥ 1

I love music games :) I've been completely fine with the graphics but I just didn't find much how the rythm had to be followed. For me it was more a _tap things on the right spot_ rather than _tap in rythm_ experience. Last criticism would go to where notes should be tapped: it wasn't convenient (for me) to tap on the left, I would have preferred tapping at the bottom of the screen or both left and right (for both my thumbs!)

But overall it does look and feel like a finished game, which is awesome. Good job!

kanonix 2019-10-07 12:37 ♥ 1

@j0ye Aha I love to know that somebody in this world will carry on playing the game, though you have to know that there are some of my ideas that I didn't put in this game yet ! Maybe it will come out one day :)

@blint6 Very nice criticism, thanks a lot for this ! I agree that it's more of a typing game, though the rythm to follow was the different parameters from the notes : Speed, instance speed, "wave" degree, ... Maybe the term rythm was inappropriate. Thanks again for this kind feedback !

hajden 2019-10-07 12:53 ♥ 1

Thanks for the ear worm, I'll keep whistling this through out the day. The mentor is very fun, gave me a few good chuckles.

It seemed too easy at first, but it picks up, though I do find the progression a bit slow.

kanonix 2019-10-07 13:11 ♥ 0

@hajden Yeah I had a hard time balancing it, though I worked on the difficulty progression algorythm for about 5 hours :D If the game pleases to a lot of people (like it seems to be the case) I'll take time to rework it a bit ^^

dragonsbeardgames 2019-10-07 14:53 ♥ 1

Very fun game, amazing music, 10/10

kristinamay 2019-10-07 15:34 ♥ 1

This was so fun! At first I was like, "oh this is so easy, whatever" but you kept introducing mechanics that made it tougher and tougher. I share the criticism about rhythm not really feeling... rhythmic? but I loved the mean fan "bosses" and the bombs were a nice touch. I was surprised to lose though, I didn't realize that I'd lose when I still had like 6 fans left. Also, sometimes the music note would be to the left of the staff when the staff moved right for a boss, and I missed the note through no fault of my own.

All that to say, this is really great! Does it have an end that I wasn't good enough to get to? :D

webus 2019-10-07 15:55 ♥ 1

WOW) Great)

kanonix 2019-10-07 16:12 ♥ 0

@kristinamay Hey thanks a lot for your kind feedback ! The reason why you lost is because as you progress through the level, the fans become more and more demanding. By this manner, failing a note causes you to loose more and more fans at once. So at a certain point you can loose 6 fans by missing only one note : That may explain why you lost ^^ Moreover, you can't win the game, it's an endless runner. However I must admit that there is some mechanics that I didn't have time to implement, but it will come in a future version probably :) Finally, I know the issue about the line moving and causing the player to loose points no matter what. This is a design question that I didn't have time to fix, but I'll probably look into it since everyone is enjoying the game, I might polish it and release it, I'll see :)

@webus Fast and simple ! Thanks a lot mate !

kirbloid 2019-10-07 16:25 ♥ 1

Worthwhile to get it running on the android and a great idea for future jams. Being about a bard the music was going to need to be stellar and you nailed it. A lot to check out in one game.

kanonix 2019-10-07 17:03 ♥ 0

@kirbloid Oooooh that's such a nice comment :O Thank you very much kind sir ! (Or ma'am, dunno :D )

skalex 2019-10-07 20:32 ♥ 1

Nice game! Now i can play it whenever I want. I like the song btw but maybe improve the graphics.

kanonix 2019-10-07 20:48 ♥ 0

@skalex Aha yeah I may do that. I'm not an artist in the first place and it was clearly the hardest part for me. So much time for such little things :( But thanks a lot for feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed the game !

skalex 2019-10-07 20:54 ♥ 1

@kanonix don't worry i'm not an artist either!

ktao 2019-10-07 21:14 ♥ 0

Pretty fun! I really like the main tune. While it's pretty unforgiving if you mess up a note I still like the gameplay. Good job!

kruemelkeksfan 2019-10-07 21:37 ♥ 0

Does not work on Lineage OS :/ ("There was a problem while parsing the package" after tapping the APK to install)

kanonix 2019-10-07 21:42 ♥ 0

@ktao it's unforgiving if you're playing for quite some time ^^ the difficulty is progressive, you loose more points if you fail late in the stage. I'm glad you loved the game beside that point :D

@kruemelkeksfan Oh I couldn't check that, I only have an Android so I could not run tests on other devices, really sorry :(

kruemelkeksfan 2019-10-07 22:18 ♥ 0

@kanonix Apologies accepted, sry that I can't test :(

simxple 2019-10-07 23:19 ♥ 1

Great take on the theme, the melody will be in my head for ever lol xD

eifersuuucht 2019-10-08 08:48 ♥ 1

Cool idea, and fascinating music. Good game for Google play)

bootak 2019-10-08 08:57 ♥ 1

I love it! Som simple and nice! Made me laugh when haters turned into a fans!

kanonix 2019-10-08 09:26 ♥ 0

@simxple Aha thanks for the kind comment ! The melody is done so it stays in your head :D Glad that it works, I didn't want to be the only one !

@eifersuuucht Thank you ! With all the comments, maybe I'll finish it, I still didn't decide yet :)

@bootak Aha thanks ! I kind of laughed too when I made the animations :D Quite hard for me since am not an artist, but very entertaining !

purpledartfrog 2019-10-08 10:13 ♥ 1

Actually considering if I should do an Android game for LD46.... let's see how it goes... Is it difficult to get to the 20 rating mark?

Great entry - congrats on the achievement πŸ‘πŸ»

πŸ’œ 🎯 🐸

igoreshka 2019-10-08 10:37 ♥ 1

@purpledartfrog, challenge accepted πŸ˜„

igoreshka 2019-10-08 10:39 ♥ 0

Good gameplay and programmer-art πŸ˜‰

purpledartfrog 2019-10-08 10:43 ♥ 1

Actually do have a game om Google Play.. so know the process 🀣 @igoreshka

πŸ’œ 🎯 🐸

kanonix 2019-10-08 10:58 ♥ 0

@purpledartfrog well I worked very hard for this jam, as you might have understood I was alone for this project ! After all, every game requires more or less work, but if you want to know how I achieved this, then let me tell you that I used Unity for the Engine, it provides nice tools to help export to apk file :)

But other than that, getting the 20 ratings required me to try a lot of Games. It's my first Time at Ludum Dare so I wanted to get things done right ! :)

@igoreshka thank you for the kind comment ^^

benjames171 2019-10-08 11:10 ♥ 1

Liking the simple, brightly coloured graphics sounds great as well but quite hard, I found. Good job, all round.

igoreshka 2019-10-08 11:14 ♥ 0

@kanonix, try [Godot engine](https://godotengine.org/) too) Solo-develop is easier with it I think.

kanonix 2019-10-08 11:17 ♥ 0

@benjames171 thank you :) You're the first one to Say it's hard, others tend to say it's easy at the beginning before getting harder, which was my intention ^^

@igoreshka I'll definitely try Godot ! But I work on Unity since 5 years now so am pretty fine with it :) And pretty effective apparently :D

vaibho 2019-10-08 17:09 ♥ 1

The audio was awesome and the game was simple but enjoying. The game made me feel that I have a good knowledge of music which I don't. The graphics were nice and simple. The audio was relaxing and I liked and enjoyed it. Nice work.

kanonix 2019-10-08 17:40 ♥ 0

@vaibho thanks a lot for this kind comment :)

vaibho 2019-10-08 17:47 ♥ 0

@kanonix Btw, its my first game jam too and I am also a solo developer making games with Unity. Are you enjoying the jam? because I got to learn many things in this jam and am enjoying it.

kanonix 2019-10-08 17:54 ♥ 0

@vaibho oh this is not my first jam, only my first Ludum Dare :) But yeah of course I enjoyed it, I love the mood of participants around hère, it Can Do us only good !

vaibho 2019-10-08 18:02 ♥ 0

@kanonix Yes, it is really awesome to play others games and share feedbacks and improve.

esben-jensen 2019-10-08 21:46 ♥ 1

What a catchy tune. :) The sound effects are also really nice. It took me a while to figure out what to do, but when I did I thought it was fun. Great graphics too. I think I'll keep it on my phone for a while. At first I thought it was an odd choice to release as an apk, but it is a very suitable mobile game.

brallex 2019-10-09 04:26 ♥ 0

Haha cute little game:)

kanonix 2019-10-09 06:39 ♥ 1

@esben-jensen Aha thanks a lot for this kind comment ! To be honest it's my first Ludum Dare and when I saw that a lot of games were in WebGl, I was like "Oh my God I hope people would still want to try my game" and yeah, they did ! But yeah, it was definitely an Android game. I made a PC Build too but it was clearly not as fun so I decided not to show it :)

@brallex Thank you ^^ It may be a little game but I worked really hard and didn't sleep a lot :p

furano 2019-10-09 10:02 ♥ 0

Impressive for a first entry!

I like your music ^^

I just have a question : is the black bars where you're supposed to tap intended or is the graphic bugging on my device (since it look totally different than the art style of everything else)? Screenshot_20191009_120018.jpg

kanonix 2019-10-09 11:40 ♥ 0

@furano it's where you're supposed to tap ^^ I must admit that I didn't really know how to represent them. I wanted to make them look like musics strings ^^ I'll probably update it :)

whomakeworse 2019-10-09 12:41 ♥ 1

Good little game

whatnamegames 2019-10-09 16:13 ♥ 1

Has an impressive amount of replayability in short bursts, and nice audio, the art is cute too.

kanonix 2019-10-09 16:17 ♥ 1

@whatnamegames Thanks ! I worked a lot on replayability :) I appreciate that comment ^^

solah 2019-10-12 07:34 ♥ 1

Very good game! The music is good, graphics are great, the soud design is really fun. Great entry!

egos 2019-10-12 14:18 ♥ 1

really well made i love art style, music and UI design , good job !