V. Girl

saoi-games 2018-12-04 08:05 ♥ 1

Thank you for sharing your game with me. I played it on my stream tonight at https://www.twitch.tv/saoigames

I have rated your game, but all of my feedback was captured in the stream.

You can hear my comments in the archive at https://www.twitch.tv/videos/344422214

pierkwadrat 2018-12-04 11:23 ♥ 1

I'm really impressed you did this all alone. Dialogues are interesting and graphics looks nice. Well done.

vojtiman 2018-12-04 11:37 ♥ 1

Good job, really loved some of the answers and puns.

PS: Just lose it! :D

sadsmile 2018-12-04 21:02 ♥ 1

how did you manage to make an text adventure visually apealing?

rexpeppers 2018-12-04 21:09 ♥ 1

Wow text adventures aren't supposed to be that fun lol

toge 2018-12-04 21:13 ♥ 1

Nice to see a story driven game, had a couple chuckle with some dialog. Good times! :)

rac-games 2018-12-04 21:13 ♥ 1

Good writing and stunning graphics and lovely audio. I even laughed out loud on some of the comments. Good work! Please rate: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/43/screw-them

dossm 2018-12-04 21:48 ♥ 1

Overall a great game! Fantastic visuals!

kathlar 2018-12-04 22:02 ♥ 1

Interesting game, would love to see it continued :D

jantaaa 2018-12-04 22:46 ♥ 1

Hey there, I played your game and really enjoyed it! It was funny, easy to play, and very immersive despite the fact, you used just this little resources, but in a great way! Beautiful entry, thank you for making this game :)

jonas-tyroller 2018-12-04 23:01 ♥ 1

Really enjoyable experience. Maybe it would have been cool if your decisions would have a sliiightly bigger impact on what happens. It feels a bit linear when basically all of your options say the same thing, but it was very entertaining and good looking nonetheless.

kirke 2018-12-04 23:23 ♥ 1

I'm impressed that you managed to do really great game using your conversation mechanism and your creativity! Even without images I still saw everything (because of your backgrounds / fonts / etc). Moreover these characters comments like "you have beautiful font" or about nice sound of writing letters are pretty amazing! I like your game, you did great job, really! :D

mrjoshuamclean 2018-12-05 00:28 ♥ 1

I think the highlight color should have bright and the default dim for selection text, and the choices could have been more varied/interesting, but you certainly nailed the vibe of the characters, and I loved how the effect followed the mouse.

Maybe consider a different color for the red part to pop out of the background more.

The sound was also subtle but effective.

Here's my play: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/344727890

codesity 2018-12-05 14:52 ♥ 1

Really good game. Some answers were unbelieveble good ^^. Good Work!

keshav-sharma 2018-12-05 17:36 ♥ 1

Wow, cool game. I don't remember when is tha last time i played text based game that was so visually likable.

subtlydramatic 2018-12-05 17:53 ♥ 1

Thanks for offering to stream! Here is a link to my game for you to play! About to play, rate and comment yours! https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/43/the-tearable-three

sickdot 2018-12-05 19:28 ♥ 1

If anyone is wondering why every comment has a single heart, it's because i Love comments.in general ;D

budaniel 2018-12-05 20:10 ♥ 1

That was funny lol, good story, and even better when read with fun voices XD

vimlark 2018-12-05 22:18 ♥ 1

Well made. Not my favorite type of game but I enjoyed this. Great job.

yaroslav-kravtsov 2018-12-06 10:27 ♥ 1

The best text game I ever see on Ludum Dares. I like visual, music, plot and humor.

anna-karpova 2018-12-07 06:57 ♥ 1

nice game) good work👍

ursagames 2018-12-07 11:51 ♥ 1

Your game was played on my stream ( https://www.twitch.tv/ursagames/videos ) on the third day of Ludum Dare streams. Thank you for sharing your game with us! You can find the timestamp of when your game was played here: https://goo.gl/N2rkr8

sickdot 2018-12-07 18:21 ♥ 1

@ursagames Thanks! Was not on the stream when you where playing... Also your reaction was pretty rare, not too many streamers found this funny :)

justcamh 2018-12-19 08:43 ♥ 1

I'm not so sure about some of the options. I would have liked some variety, as all of them seemed a bit ... crude. The backgrounds were nice, and I liked the use of different fonts. The fonts did a good job matching personalities, and was a great way of distinguishing between characters. Nice design that unlike many other text adventures you opted to avoid repeating character names at the start of each message; your use of fonts is a very smart way to avoid this! I would have liked some opportunity to speed up text, as sometimes it was slow. All of the ... and stuff really slowed down the experience, and if I was to replay this, I could imagine that being frustrating. Otherwise, an interesting idea, but the options could have used more variety. Keep developing! 👍

blankcanvas 2018-12-20 21:26 ♥ 1

I saw this game earlier on stream, and it seemed awesome. The visual side of the game looks beautifully tied together, even when it's a text-adventure, the colors and effects create the mood perfectly :D The story itself was fun and inspiring, I'm always happy to see text-based games here when I personally too want to learn storytelling. Overall a great entry, good job!