Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD43 → V. Girl
By sickdot
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 768 | 3.11 | 51 | |
| Fun | 797 | 2.87 | 50 | |
| Innovation | 839 | 2.74 | 49 | |
| Theme | 672 | 3.22 | 50 | |
| Graphics | 659 | 3.23 | 51 | |
| Audio | 368 | 3.30 | 50 | |
| Humor | 308 | 3.28 | 50 | |
| Mood | 557 | 3.26 | 51 |
Thank you for sharing your game with me. I played it on my stream tonight at https://www.twitch.tv/saoigames
I have rated your game, but all of my feedback was captured in the stream.
You can hear my comments in the archive at https://www.twitch.tv/videos/344422214
I'm really impressed you did this all alone. Dialogues are interesting and graphics looks nice. Well done.
Good job, really loved some of the answers and puns.
PS: Just lose it! :D
how did you manage to make an text adventure visually apealing?
Wow text adventures aren't supposed to be that fun lol
Nice to see a story driven game, had a couple chuckle with some dialog. Good times! :)
Good writing and stunning graphics and lovely audio. I even laughed out loud on some of the comments. Good work! Please rate: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/43/screw-them
Overall a great game! Fantastic visuals!
Interesting game, would love to see it continued :D
Hey there, I played your game and really enjoyed it! It was funny, easy to play, and very immersive despite the fact, you used just this little resources, but in a great way! Beautiful entry, thank you for making this game :)
Really enjoyable experience. Maybe it would have been cool if your decisions would have a sliiightly bigger impact on what happens. It feels a bit linear when basically all of your options say the same thing, but it was very entertaining and good looking nonetheless.
I'm impressed that you managed to do really great game using your conversation mechanism and your creativity! Even without images I still saw everything (because of your backgrounds / fonts / etc). Moreover these characters comments like "you have beautiful font" or about nice sound of writing letters are pretty amazing! I like your game, you did great job, really! :D
I think the highlight color should have bright and the default dim for selection text, and the choices could have been more varied/interesting, but you certainly nailed the vibe of the characters, and I loved how the effect followed the mouse.
Maybe consider a different color for the red part to pop out of the background more.
The sound was also subtle but effective.
Here's my play: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/344727890
Really good game. Some answers were unbelieveble good ^^. Good Work!
Wow, cool game. I don't remember when is tha last time i played text based game that was so visually likable.
Thanks for offering to stream! Here is a link to my game for you to play! About to play, rate and comment yours! https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/43/the-tearable-three
If anyone is wondering why every comment has a single heart, it's because i Love comments.in general ;D
That was funny lol, good story, and even better when read with fun voices XD
Well made. Not my favorite type of game but I enjoyed this. Great job.
The best text game I ever see on Ludum Dares. I like visual, music, plot and humor.
nice game) good work👍
Your game was played on my stream ( https://www.twitch.tv/ursagames/videos ) on the third day of Ludum Dare streams. Thank you for sharing your game with us! You can find the timestamp of when your game was played here: https://goo.gl/N2rkr8
@ursagames Thanks! Was not on the stream when you where playing... Also your reaction was pretty rare, not too many streamers found this funny :)
I'm not so sure about some of the options. I would have liked some variety, as all of them seemed a bit ... crude. The backgrounds were nice, and I liked the use of different fonts. The fonts did a good job matching personalities, and was a great way of distinguishing between characters. Nice design that unlike many other text adventures you opted to avoid repeating character names at the start of each message; your use of fonts is a very smart way to avoid this! I would have liked some opportunity to speed up text, as sometimes it was slow. All of the ... and stuff really slowed down the experience, and if I was to replay this, I could imagine that being frustrating. Otherwise, an interesting idea, but the options could have used more variety. Keep developing! :thumbsup:
I saw this game earlier on stream, and it seemed awesome. The visual side of the game looks beautifully tied together, even when it's a text-adventure, the colors and effects create the mood perfectly :D The story itself was fun and inspiring, I'm always happy to see text-based games here when I personally too want to learn storytelling. Overall a great entry, good job!