adamalexander 2015-12-15 06:08
Interesting art style! I got stuck in the opening scene with the dirty river though. I couldn't find anything to click on.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD34 → Dystopian Orphan
By caryoscelus
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 1 | 100 | ||
| Mood | 189 | 3.66 | ||
| Graphics | 427 | 3.62 | ||
| Overall | 608 | 3.22 | ||
| Humor | 677 | 2.34 | ||
| Fun | 824 | 2.75 | ||
| Theme | 1001 | 2.75 |
Interesting art style! I got stuck in the opening scene with the dirty river though. I couldn't find anything to click on.
Use arrows to walk there.
Vera Nice concept and art
Nice work, i really like the graphic style, it create a strong mood. With more work, you can do a really interesting game ! :)
I loved the art and the music. Really created a depressing mood which fits with the story.
And enjoy I did! The art was very nice, and I liked the sound.
It is great to see other games made in renpy! I like the idea of using it for an adventure game. I think that using arrows to move around in a point and click game can be confusing, I had to look it in your instructions cause I felt stuck otherwise. The story is quite confusing, but you said you had time problems so that's understandable.
The art design seems ok, but I hope u can add some few animation and guidelines so player wont get confused.
I killed the society twice. I didn't even look at the child on the third playthrough. On the fourth playthrough I decided to raise the kid. I named her "Snowman". She was a happy girl until I lost the game when she was 7. I wish I killed the society s'more.
You can throw baby into the river! Best game ever!
Awesome game! I loved all of the choices and the art was amazing.
Great looking game.
Was relaxing at first but soon became an addictive challenge :P great work!
Pro:
+ Interesting art style
+ Story concept is great
+ Good mood with audio
Con:
- Control was a bit weird (specially with arrow and mouse usage)
- Choices doesn't affect story line (but you already said there was lack of time)
Obs:
o I only got 3 bad endings (life support, ignore child and throw in the river)
Great work!
The art is style is very curious :D. I didn't know about renpy, looks fine for this kind of games. I think it needs some kind of in game instructions because I read in the comments some pepole got stuck in the river scene.
As you said, the game had great potential but scope was apparently too large.
I really liked your art style, I think it may have been better to have the girl drawn in the same style as the rest.
Audio use was very good!