rocketship 2015-08-25 11:48
Some good writing there, didn't feel like a chore to read this. Well done!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD33 → There are no Monsters outside
By riadelva
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 2 | 75 | ||
| Theme | 398 | 3.61 | ||
| Humor | 618 | 2.64 | ||
| Mood | 634 | 2.97 | ||
| Overall | 694 | 3.03 | ||
| Fun | 726 | 2.79 | ||
| Innovation | 753 | 2.72 |
Some good writing there, didn't feel like a chore to read this. Well done!
Pretty nice. I enjoyed the story.
I always love me a nice Twine game :), and yours is a really good first! Make more games!
There are some ways where the story goes on forever.
Really cool first twine game. Nice work
Good story :)
@conrad123 That's intentional :)
You did a great job with this one, especially seeing as it's your first game! I just had to play through it multiple times to see the different paths. The happy ending left me sort of puzzled, but in a good way!
Cool story! Reminds me at "Horns" of Joe Hill
Something very different from all other entries. Interestingly, it fits the them perfectly.
Really nice short story. I enjoyed reading it and was a little disappointed when it ended actually. Nice work.
An unusual entry here!
Really nice! :)
This was enjoyable. Would have been cool to see some pictures!
This could do with proofreading, but I love the thing about maybe your period is a week early again, right off the bat. ^_^ Instantly sets the character as female, and I am all for pushing guys' comfort levels on stuff like that. The note to self injections are also a nice realistic touch. Enjoyable overall.
At first I thought it was a clone of that period trine, but then horns! hahaha! Good stuff
so nice ^^
Interesting approach of the theme. I always enjoyed novel games. Nice little story you got there and good work.
What a bizarre yet entertaining entry! Very fun, nice take on the theme. Good job!