leom 2015-08-24 23:41
Much cleaner than the previous one with the images and color thème, and with much less english mistakes too ! ;)
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD33 → The Monster Way
By nomys_tempar
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Theme | 84 | 4.08 | ||
| Humor | 128 | 3.67 | ||
| Overall | 284 | 3.51 | ||
| Fun | 336 | 3.32 | ||
| Mood | 381 | 3.32 | ||
| Graphics | 457 | 3.54 | ||
| Innovation | 699 | 2.78 | ||
| Coolness | 1268 | 48 |
Much cleaner than the previous one with the images and color thème, and with much less english mistakes too ! ;)
I haven't seen many html5 entries, and thus dunno what exactly is possible with the tech, but the entry looked like few web pages... Nice graphics though.
Very well done. I liked the writing and the branching, and the drawings were really nice. Good job!
Good writing and lovely picture. Kept me hooked till the end!
good start screen fun to play i can't say there is anything wrong with this game its great
Hooked me till the very end - and there are still some achievements to unlock!
I played twice ! Very well done!
Really nice art. It's not super fancy but I really like the perspective and the style in general.
The writing was excellent and it was overall a fun read. I wonder how many endings and branches there are.
I like the graphics, they make the experience much better! One of the best text games made for this Ludum Dare.
Good writing, superb illustrations. This is the first Ludum Dare text game I've ever finished (and replayed two times).
Best part: catching up on my accounting :-D Fun!
Wow that was a big writing! nice job, I loved to "sit and wait" haha. loved draws and black-white style. I'll come back to continue playing ;)
Great story/art. (could I have killed that halfling?)
Yes it's possible :)
Super story and great visual presentation. Congrats for your entry!
The writing was intriguing and the drawings were great. I really got caught up in the characters. Well done.
Beautiful illustrations! I like the way you tied in a faux-achievement system to act as the conclusions to your stories too, makes each one feel less like a deadend and more like another small victory.
Nicely written and I like the achievements - will go back and see if things can turn out differently :)
Enjoyed my two playthrough (managed to kill the halfling in the second one). Good job ! Multiple endings would have been really nice :)
Well done! Nice drawings, many choices and much text. :)
At first, it is a bit hard to see what is important in the game, since there are many distractive elements around the game itself (the buttons, title, ChoiceScript link). Perhaps you could seperate the game more from these other elements?
Good story, and fantastic drawing! :)
ahah this waws really funny! had to play it until the end. I like killing minions
An interesting little game. Really interesting mechanics. Unfortunately the gameplay was a bit slow for me and the writing just slightly boring but good overall.
Reminds me of Monster Loves You. It's nice. My only complaint is we have to scroll a lot. We would be nice to find away to fit everything in one screen
Yeah, I agree, but choicescript is not built for pictures. Using smaller images is the best way to correct the scrolling issue. I will do that in the future.