tompudding 2015-08-24 22:54
Loved it. The music was suitably freaky and I enjoyed eating all those bothersome people. Very droll.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD33 → Mega-Normous-All-Devouring-Beast-o-Saurus-Super-Evil-Angry-Hairy-Scary-Thing (Rampage Lord of the Darketty Dark)
By garygreen
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 2 | 75 | ||
| Humor | 124 | 3.55 | ||
| Theme | 178 | 3.85 | ||
| Mood | 327 | 3.19 | ||
| Audio | 444 | 2.77 | ||
| Innovation | 565 | 2.84 | ||
| Overall | 660 | 2.92 | ||
| Fun | 690 | 2.69 | ||
| Graphics | 884 | 1.97 |
Loved it. The music was suitably freaky and I enjoyed eating all those bothersome people. Very droll.
Good humor!
Love the dark humor-- it feels nicely balanced between total destruction and silly coffee breaks. I played it a few times to see the different endings. The music is perfect. Nice work!
Interesting story. I kinda liked it. I included it in part 2 of my Ludum Dare 33 Compilation video series, if you would like to take a look :) https://youtu.be/ml0OKpi-I0Y
"Leave a tip" god the writing is this is awesome ahah.
Cool thing you done there :D
Great writing, very fun mix of normal actions and nonchalant killing :)
Good and interesting story, which is supported by frightening music
Music is good, and you are indeed a monster devouring things. Seems a bit like it was made in powerpoint though.
A little bit different "game".
I burned myself to death, too bad :P
Loved the story and the atmosphere it created with music, well done
I love the music and the mood of this. The writing was also very good.
Nice gory story bro :)
Nice game and nice music
It was really funny, and well written :) I love how the music follows the mood !
STOMPY! SOMPY! MORE STOMPY! :D
Interesting story. I wasn't sure how I felt about the music.
Thanks everyone for the positive feedback. :-) I was in two minds about including the music, and I understand that some people might not enjoy it, but in the end I thought it was worth trying it out to see how it worked with the text.
Loved the sense of humor and the merger of office work and wanton (rather than wonton) destruction. The writing reminded me a bit of Douglas Adams with its detached acceptance of the absurd. That said, there could have been more branching paths through the narrative and a more diverse set of outcomes. I felt like I was being herded through the story at several points, such as being forced to go to the library because the cinema is closed.
That was fun and hilarious! I liked the certificate.
Hilarious! Original story followed by a freaky music that fits very well. I also learned about Squiffy, which seems to be a nice tool for this kind of text adventures.
That music almost killed me. Hahahahahahah.
I loved the dark humour plus how the background music adds to the mood.
Thanks again everyone for giving my game a go and taking the time to feedback on it. :-) I have to admit at points in the narrative I wasn't sure where to go and ended up doubling back. In future games hopefully this shouldn't be a problem, as I'll have more time to work out varied paths.