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Dear Sister

By robinerd

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Mood114.27
Coolness373
Audio323.93
Overall2973.47
Humor4362.50
Theme4853.35
Graphics5523.11
Fun7652.81
Innovation8012.83

Comments

makio 2014-08-25 02:52

Very nice idea, atmosphere & realisation, well done !

mcapraro 2014-08-25 03:04

I live the concept and the mood of this game, well done!

derosa 2014-08-25 11:35

A little long but I like the mood.

josephlittle 2014-08-25 11:40

Lovely.

Although, I did get stuck and had to restart at once point

hamsternator 2014-08-25 11:41

This is beautiful. A short story told through the best means possible. I definitely felt something =)

slooowpoke 2014-08-25 11:43

Great mood and atmosphere! Reminded me of Dear Esther in a way. Very different take on the theme to all the other games (mine included). Overall pretty sweet! Is it related to something that happened to you?

juju77550 2014-08-25 11:43

So sad ...

nuclearnapalm 2014-08-25 11:54

Beautiful!

mcfood 2014-08-25 12:25

That was beautiful. Thanks for the different take on the theme.

techblogogy 2014-08-25 12:32

This is the most emotional game I've seen.

ofursnati 2014-08-25 13:19

Beautiful.

robinerd 2014-08-25 13:25

Thanks all for such nice comments, I'm really happy to bring up your emotions. We're in the 2k century and games are not only "fun". Let's move the game industry to a wider perspective!

Some replies:

@JosephLittle: Thanks for telling me, I would be very interested to hear where you got stuck. Sorry that you had to start over!

@SlooowPoke Yeah I haven't played dear esther, but what I heard about it, it sounds like it's also more like an interactive emotional story.
This is not based on anything I've gone through, fortunately, but I think it is a story many people can relate to in different ways. My little sister is happily alive and I'm thankful for having her! But the "news" you get to see at the end is from a real accident. You can probably read more about it if you pick some keywords from the text, but I won't spoil it in the comments.

crazeeruskee 2014-08-25 17:22

Wow, this is a beautiful game! And that twist at the end was brilliant!

hate-marina 2014-08-25 17:26

Feels

iamacoconut 2014-08-25 17:33

This game is an amazing game. It's probably one of the most emotional games I've ever played!

robinerd 2014-08-25 17:45

@CRAZEERUSKEE thanks for sharing your experience of the ending! When I designed the story it was really hard to know whether people would experience it in the same way as I intended. It seems you did!

@IamAcoconut Thank you for these kind words. I never experimented with emotions in games before, and your feedback really makes me happy :)

robinerd 2014-08-25 17:47

If anyone wants to share, I'd love to know how long time you spent on the game. Did you explore the side areas too or heading the right way to hear the story?

capitals 2014-08-25 18:03

The best game for atmosphere and music so far!

pixelmind 2014-08-25 18:51

Great mood and story.

honcho 2014-08-25 23:48

Great mood, very sad. Felt very lost and confused! Played through all of it. Beautiful with lovely narrative.

tannernetwork 2014-08-26 12:35

Great entry!

appocket 2014-08-26 13:19

Nice atmosphere, the controls are a bit to sensitive but still ok. PS: May a [ESC] trigger or so to loose focus would be nice, had to reload page to get out of the unity frame :D

lokarunith 2014-08-26 14:19

that's a sad story... We live everyday thinking that tragadies only happen to other people and when we less expect it, life slaps us in the face and turns our world upside down. A lesson niceley told

lkr 2014-08-26 20:08

Loved the atmosphere and writing, and how the music changed along the way. It made me want to explore the whole area for "secret" story text :)

robinerd 2014-08-26 21:38

@Lokarunith Great to hear that you appreciated the message I wanted to spread! We should always find the good sides of life and enjoy them :)

@lkr Thank you! Glad to hear that someone took the time to also read the "secret" texts. I intentionally put the story-telling in the main path and then giving small advice and sayings in the side areas to make them worthwhile in case you go there. Thanks!

mintarcade 2014-08-27 13:23

Nice ambience and sound. I like the mood. Very subtle edge between two worlds.

diamonde 2014-08-28 16:59

The mood is great and I love the music you make, especially when it interacts with the game! It is quite touching to walk up the labyrinth and I had an overall very nice experience. There is one thing I could complain about, and it is the sound that activates when one move too far from the planned path. It had me sit with one hand on the volume control during the game.
I also like the theme interpretation which I think is quite unique.

chadiik 2014-08-28 22:26

It's one of those few games where I'm not annoyed when I take a wrong turn!
Good game :)

bytegrove 2014-08-31 22:42

Phew, it left me with that heavy feeling in my gut.
Nice work on the mood and the music mechanic. The only thing that irked me was the colour of the text, it felt out of place(imo). Everything else is spot on and I think you handled a sensitive theme very well.

raphy 2014-09-02 22:30

Nice mood and feels. I got stuck though, feels kindda labyrinthic at some point (maybe I suck :D)

I wonder if this is based on an autobiographical story, it felt somewhat personal!

snoother 2014-09-03 15:12

God, I remember hearing about this in the news a few ago, if it's the same incident. Very good use of music, the way instruments gradually fade in, buttressing the poignant majesty.

I find it hard to attach myself to these kind of metaphysical premises, being that I'm not in any spiritual or religious. So the notion of people 'crossing over' or having any sort of post-human existence doesn't affect me at all. But despite this, I felt sad after playing this, and taken metaphorically it certainly has an impact.

sandcrawler 2014-09-03 21:10

Had a lot of mood/emotion to it. The game took you through the emotions that would have been felt by the brother.

I just have to admit that I had no idea what a lorry was, and admitted it on video. I now thanks to the power of Google know what a lorry is.

I recorded my playthrough of it and it will go up on Monday September 8th. http://www.youtube.com/user/Ythmevge

animegeek32 2014-09-07 15:47

Very simple and emotional!

alexdjones 2014-09-08 19:10

An interesting take on the theme. The implementation of the music was especially great. I'm really glad to see more LD games take this sort of unusual direction, breaking away from the traditional model of what counts as a "game". Kudos!