zarkith 2014-04-29 05:10
Where's the link to play it? :/
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD29 → Black Bile, Inhuman Circuits
By robotparking
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 2 | 97 | ||
| Humor | 198 | 3.05 | ||
| Mood | 517 | 2.81 | ||
| Innovation | 553 | 2.62 | ||
| Audio | 554 | 2.50 | ||
| Fun | 634 | 2.39 | ||
| Overall | 666 | 2.58 | ||
| Theme | 672 | 2.34 | ||
| Graphics | 754 | 1.81 |
Where's the link to play it? :/
Aha! Missed the http at the start. Should work now.
This was... interesting. You got a few chuckles out of me, but for the most part your writing was pretty disgusting, which is more of a complement than an insult, based on the subject matter. The music in the middle seemed really out of place, but it was nice to hear something more than silence for a bit. Pretty short for a text game, would have liked to see more branching paths.
I was slightly confused by the juxtaposition of outdoor landscapes and internal organs/fluids but it was nevertheless fun to play through the scenarios. Just enough wit to make it entertaining but not so much that it became overbearing.
I also didn't know there would be loud music but when it came on I had to chuckle a little :)
Congrats!
This was certainly interesting.
Enjoyed the IF references and fourth-wall breaking. Pretty damn funny at times. Oh, and really well-written; some of the imagery is just horrifically sublime. An inventive use of theme too.
And, of course, it definitely has the best title of the comp.
made me laugh, liked the concept. Good job :)
Well gosh everybody {♥_♥;}
nice writing
What a weird experience. I'm not sure that I knew what I was doing, but I got all the humours and used the pentagram. Fake Gamer!
Pretty funny story.
You are crazy! Ah, ah!
The background color shifting with your respective choice of humor was a really good integration of mechanics into gameplay, and the imagery was delightfully disgusting. The inexplicable rock music that started blaring whenever you unleashed the yellow bile made me laugh too.
I guess if I have a complaint it's that the more referential humor contrasts with the rest of the game. Haha, you find a pentagram because adventure game logic. Haha, it's a neckbeard who says "misandry" a couple times. They felt like cheap gags at the expense of the overall vibe of the game. Not problematic enough to be a serious detractor from (imo) the creepiest game of the jam.
"Ok cool"
I do not really know what to make of it. But it was definitely interesting :)
Cool twist of the theme! Pretty much everything has been said.
This was.. interesting. It certainly surprised me when the sound kicked in. It's got a bit of humor with the gruesome text. I liked it. :)
Once again you come through!
Colours, fonts and narrative in a cataclysmic experience.
Never stop writing!
Also, you play with words and create the eeriest of eerie moods.
Nice writing and liked the use of music.
Absolutely hilarious and fantastic placing of music. Well written and enjoyable to play.
Ever considered writing a full novel?