jalgames 2013-08-24 16:03
Need more content. Although I like this game, I wouldn't rate it up because I could do this in 5 minutes (and you did most propery too)
PS: My Score is 1700.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD27 → 10 Second shooting
By pikkufighter
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 2 | 89 | ||
| Humor | 975 | 1.28 | ||
| Audio | 976 | 1.25 | ||
| Mood | 1078 | 1.43 | ||
| Fun | 1109 | 2.02 | ||
| Theme | 1146 | 1.98 | ||
| Graphics | 1191 | 1.34 | ||
| Overall | 1192 | 1.84 | ||
| Innovation | 1196 | 1.43 |
Need more content. Although I like this game, I wouldn't rate it up because I could do this in 5 minutes (and you did most propery too)
PS: My Score is 1700.
Give me some feedback. It feels like it is disappearing under my mouse. It isn't, but that is what it feels like.
By me, I mean the average player.
Liked the achievement system.
The basic gameplay works, but it's a bit boring without music. Why are the targets hidden behind black bars? Something like trees/bushes would have been a lot nicer.
It still looks like it was made in two minutes.
By so yes, add more things ,like music ,sound effects and some art.
yes that would be an idea. maybe next time i got more time to do it. since i was not home very much this time.
Hey, it's also my second Ludum Dare! :)
It's a nice little game, but it needs improvements. As other users said feedback is important, play a sound and animation once you destroy a target, or when another appears.
Yeah, a little sound fx and extra feedback would add a lot. Not bad anyway.
Cool game ! You should add sound effect and more precision ( shooting on the extremities get you 10-20 points) Good work !
Very basic idea. The game itself is sound, but there's no feedback, through sound or graphics. Graphics needs some more work as well.
Seems a little bland, you could have used something like trees or bushed not black bars. And more interesting backgrounds could have been used.
Yeah, doesn't feel like something that had 48 hours spent on it.
what do you guys mean with feedback? and also i didn't spend 48 hours doing this i only spent about 8h.
Do x in 10 seconds seems like a pretty easy way to implement the theme. It also needs to communicate what is going on a bit better, overall though it's pretty solid.
If you could take a look at my game I'd really appreciate it, thanks!
i knew it was something i forgot thanks for the heads up and i will check out your game now.
To less content. No music. Idea is nice and i can't see the 10 seconds theme.
Nice and simple.
But the higher levels don't ask for anymore skill from the player-
The black bars don't add anything to the game, rather it feels to me like a fault of the game that the targets are generated behind them- because now I can't shoot the centre, but it's not my fault.
What if, the cursor can't pass through the black parts of the level, so you have to quickly calculate the most direct route to navigate around them, like a maze?
Zap: ye that would be an excellent idea.
AtomicVikings: sorry for that i forgot to give in game instructions, the theme part is that you only got 10 seconds on each try.
They mean feedback as in a sound or visual effect when the target has been shot.
okay thanks mate
Good idea. Too bad there is only 2 scores on the target. With a few improvements would be great.
Simple game, but kinda catchy! Enjoyed it! Could use some sounds though!
good job
Gave me a minute or two of good, simple, fun. :) Add sound and maybe some moving obstacles, and an epic story of a brave warrior trying to bow & arrow his way to the evil castle over the lava horde, where Emperor Magma has stolen and hid away all of the icecream sandwiches from the Poultry Kingdom, then it would be a splendid little game. ;)
Fun simple little game. I think having them move on later stages would have been cool. Add some target breaking animation and you have yourself a mobile game
It's actually more challenging than I thought since you supposedly would have great accuracy with the mouse! This could be pretty fun with some effort and polish!
Very simple fun game, very challenging at times as well. I featured it in my Ludum Dare 27 video compilation series, if you'd like to check it out :) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GcXHrH6VSV0
Little short,to easy, and striking the double points pretty much takes more time to achieve than to just shoot two targets...
Zap's idea sounds cool, do a post compo!
The simplest ideas are often the best, and I think this is a really good idea. There is so much you could have done with this to make it better.