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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | obittner's comment | |
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| May 2 20:14:36 | Love at First Slice | ♥ 2 | Hey, well done. I found the delivery mechanic a bit repetitive after day four (I guess thats how you feel as a delivery boy) but kept playing to see the end. Well executed! | |
| May 2 20:31:34 | 16m 58s | Potion Delivery | ♥ 1 | Hey, promising prototype. I really liked it. It was a bit frustrating to wait for the needed resources to spawn, especially the roots and leafs, which spawn random and do not have dedicated spots, like the fruits and flowers. And when delivering a potion the NPCs spoke a different language (I think Spanish, not sure though). |
| May 2 20:52:36 | 21m 02s | Animal Ferry | ♥ 2 | Very cool implementation of the old puzzle. I also really liked the sound effects and music. |
| May 2 21:01:44 | 9m 08s | Pack It In! | ♥ 1 | Just awesome. I think every thing fit together nicely. But what a steep difficulty curve. |
| May 2 21:22:11 | 20m 27s | Delivery, Xtreme | ♥ 1 | Top! Really entertaining anf polished game. Although I'm not good at it :) I think I would like a more prominent effect before timers exipre, I sometimes missed deliveries which I didn't even notice until it was to late and I lost a life. |
| May 3 16:28:06 | 19h 05m | Sky Drop | ♥ 2 | Nice and entertaining game. I think music and visuals really fit in with the whole theme. I had a few problems with clicking out of the window and sometimes the balloon went out of frame so I could not longer see it. |
| May 3 16:42:03 | 13m 57s | Space Postal Service | ♥ 0 | I really like the idea. Although I'm super bad at it. I got stuck laying on the side alot and needed to restart. I think the music is fitting and put me into a nice, calm mood. |
| May 3 16:53:54 | 11m 51s | Soul Delivery System | ♥ 2 | Super fun game and nice twist to a "vampire survivor"-like game. I played until I unlocked upgrade and had quite some fun. For some reason many "enemies" (?) gathered around the edges of the map which made just running around the edges an (maybe to) efficient strategie. I would also have liked an upgrade to the collection range or soul speed. As the player gets faster and faster it feels like you are leaving all the souls behind. |
| May 3 17:12:21 | 18m 27s | Dungeons & Deliveries | ♥ 0 | Really cool concept for a game. Feels like something between a dungeon crawler & autobattler. If the levels were a bit more challenging and less repetive I could see myself sinking some hours into this. |
| May 3 17:43:49 | 31m 28s | 📯 POSTAL HERO 🏹 | ♥ 3 | What an amazing litte game you made here :) I really enjoyed playing it and scored a silver medal in the end. It got fined twice for dashing to close to a one-way zone without actually going trough it, but I guess thats still quite lenient compared to my reckless driving style :D |
| May 4 18:28:32 | 24h 44m | Santa's Workshop | ♥ 2 | Awesome Game and quite polished for a Game Jam. The only problem I had was that I often spawned (and got stuck) inside my machines/belts when proceeding to the next level. |
| May 4 18:46:58 | 18m 26s | Jurassic Part-Timer | ♥ 1 | Very nice game. The whole package fits really well together. And the music is just amazing. That you can steer left and right with the mouse but not up and down threw me off a bit. I always tried to steer up with the mouse first just to realize it doesn't work and then pressed the button. |
| May 4 19:01:04 | 14m 06s | Post it! | ♥ 5 | Quite a nice mini game. It's not much but everything is pretty polished. I think there is some potential for more advanced mechanics. For example you could be required to sort out letters without stamps or mail going to different countries. |
| May 4 19:20:01 | 18m 57s | 30-second Deliveries | ♥ 1 | Funny Game. I found the cannon controls a bit wonky and sometimes I not able at all to aim at the target, because it was outside my range of yaw. Still had alot of fun with it :) |
| May 4 19:40:21 | 20m 20s | Bubble Wrap Factory | ♥ 1 | Nice and very statifying. Levels had a good amount of difficulty: some you get first try and for some you need a few attempts. For the highscore I'd recommend to reset it back to the start of the level when you get send into the breakroom, so you don't get a better score when you're required to try again. |
| May 4 19:52:55 | 12m 34s | Generated Adventure | ♥ 1 | Very nice implementation. Amazing how you made the different ML work together and managed to create a congruent game. I felt like an inventory would have been great as many of the object are quite obvious before you need them, and then you can not interact with them but instead need to backtrack later. |
| May 4 20:09:07 | 16m 12s | Forklift Certification Program | ♥ 3 | Pretty polished game. The forklift feels very nice to manouver. I took me sometime to get out of the tutorial as I didn't realize you can click the button. I tried pushing it in with the forklift or with loaded packages until I realized I can click on it. |
| May 4 20:17:30 | 8m 23s | Slime Express | ♥ 1 | Very nice game. I found it a bit easy but I guess this could work very well for a younger audience. I had sometimes problems opening the ability menu where I would just randomly grab one of the abilities in the upper row instead of opening the menu. I also found the intro text quite slow. Maybe make it possible to skip to the next text line instead of skipping the whole dialog. But I understand that this is not priority in the Jam. |
| May 4 20:28:26 | 10m 56s | Famous Delivery Man | ♥ 1 | Very simple but entertaining sidescroller. It took me some time until I noticed that the packages weigh you down, but it's a great mechanic. Some passages felt impossible to master without running into a rock, just because if you jump over one you will fall into the next (or the one after that with double jump). And I feel like I have seen the delivery man somewhere else before :D |
| May 4 20:38:55 | 10m 29s | Tracks 'n Bandits: Haulin' Cargo | ♥ 3 | Fun and very stylish. Took me some time to realize that I only need to protect the engine, but I think that is a good decision. I still feel like there are some unlucky situations where it is simply impossible to dodge everything, which is a tiny bit frustrating. Still very good overall. |
| May 4 21:27:13 | 48m 18s | Caveman Express Delivery Inc. | ♥ 1 | Really great and coherent implementation. I took a while to find out about the boxing glove and got a bit frustrated because of that. But once you figure out the controlls its really great. |
| May 5 13:40:12 | 16h 12m | Don't get fired! | ♥ 2 | Awesome. Funny interactions, lovely effects. I felt like once the boss starts raging after the prank call it's not longer possible to get anything done. Had a lot of fun playing a few rounds :) |
| May 5 13:52:13 | 12m 01s | Pizza Cat | ♥ 1 | Nice Idea and I think also quite a good implementation. The cats are a nice twist to the pizza delivery mechanic, but I found it a bit too easy to kite them, so I rarely needed to throw them a slice. |
| May 5 14:00:02 | 7m 49s | Rapid Delivery | ♥ 1 | Hmm I might miss something here, but I'm only able to drive backwards. W or Arrow Up don't seem to work. I tried to play it anyway, but only was able to deliver one package before driving into a wall and with no way to change the driving direction I was stuck there. |
| May 5 14:09:45 | 9m 43s | Delivereach | ♥ 1 | Nice game and I really liked the minimalistic visuals. I had some fun watching the numbers go up, but at some point it felt like I just could click around frantically, and it didn't really matter where. I think a great way to fix this would be to let drivers repeat the same route automatically (from the beginning or as an upgrade) This would turn it more into an idle game where you could spend your time figuring out the most effective routes or lean back and watch you delivering-empire rise. |
| May 5 14:27:30 | 17m 45s | Astacus Mechanicus | ♥ 1 | Cool concept and good implementation. I think the dreams are the highlight and I'm just to dumb for the puzzles :) |
| May 5 14:53:42 | 26m 12s | Dwarven Delivery Service | ♥ 1 | Fun little game and very polished. Took some time to realize you can still move the minecart while the package is in the air, but from then on it was a very smooth experience. I'm quite sure this game passed better quality control then my box :) |
| May 5 15:32:20 | 38m 38s | Give It A Shove! | ♥ 1 | Nice game. The art is very consistent, and the driving feels very nice. But I think the guy in the back needs a little training to throw the boxes more consistent or at least to announce how hard he will "shove", so you hit the delivery zones more consistent. |
| May 5 15:43:24 | 11m 04s | Hound Dog Delivery | ♥ 1 | Very fun and cute game you made here. Since the last level took a few tries, I didn't get the felling it is to short for a jam game. |