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Timestamp	Since previous	Game		Yashpal's comment
May 1 11:20:45		Hidden Affection	♥ 1	Good idea, I like the concept and execution. it's take me while to figure it out that I need to end the day it will not end automatically. Basically I need to do trail and error to find out what person likes or dislikes. instead of that there is some clue to find out what person like and dislike would be great addition to the game. It took me 10 day's to figure out what person likes.
May 1 12:06:16	45m 31s	Ballistic Skylines	♥ 1	Great Graphics, nice feedback sounds when no ore remains & astroid hit the ground it play different sound. but I don't understand benefit buildings, I think it's only for high score.(or might be i didn't read proper instructions) if big buildings gives some more ore or some other functionality than it's good(This is just suggestion 😄 )
May 1 12:30:43	24m 27s	Eyes on the Prize	♥ 1	Game is fast for me(I never played game bullet-hell games ). But it's very fun. it's good concept and execution. After I got every shortcut to upgrade. than it's fun for me
May 1 13:26:37	55m 54s	Ascension	♥ 2	I like it. 😄 Good flow of the game. (Game is become more difficult as it progress) New ability unlocks. It's Great & funny story.
May 1 13:47:42	21m 05s	Jump, Push, Match	♥ 1	It's really great puzzle game. SFX & Puzzle are great. I really need think before move.
May 2 16:39:03	26h 51m	I'm Not a hero	♥ 1	I like details in animation like when enemy fire bullet at that time character hat is goes up and push back little. As other comment suggest I also found camera bug but that's fine. Background art is also great. overall it's good game. 😄
May 2 17:14:05	35m 02s	Just Relax	♥ 1	It's great game. (rhythm + Platformer). (you remove most important mechanics from platformer and mix with rhythm) 👍 Nice interactive tutorial. visuals are properly defined and understandable. Level Design also great. I really enjoy it. 😄 there is so many things you can add in this game I like hidden path to reach to the end. 1) different type of music (rock, jazz, country ,etc) so rock music is fast and challenging 2) Level is changing with music similar to floating bar is change size with beat. Some objects move according to bass and other move according to tribble 3) As @kyyninen suggest different color will be great addition 4) Different modes/ different achievements like collect all circles. or finish in limited time. don't collide with black, etc.
May 2 17:41:25	27m 20s	PlatSCII	♥ 2	Great work team. 😄 👍 I am really impress by this game. character movement, environment, sound, Particle, all great. Few things I notice is every time i press same key than also I get little bit different movement of character. some time it jump more & other time it jump less.(might be unity problem). @ csanyk suggest very good point to improve this game. You can make this game like Area "A", Area "B" area, etc every area have some different special command. There is lot of potential in this game
May 4 17:48:12	48h 06m	Interdenominational BROwS	♥ 1	Interesting game. 2d+3d+ split screen. Your narration reminded me about "stanley parable". It's very difficult to add split screen in game, I really appreciate it. 👍 I like it.
May 4 18:32:55	44m 43s	Card Commander	♥ 0	It is very intense game. 😨 In the tutorial I thought it is easy game just shoot enemy. but I am wrong. I cannot complete "going in hot" and "Stairway to haven". I like level design. it very good. 👍 In the 3rd level i cannot found the boss at first. than I am just wondering in the level & i fall down and there boss is waiting for me with it's whole army. Keep it up it;'s good mix some time I shoot bullets but it will not hit the enemy because they are not in range. (I think ) you can just disable bullets if it go out of Range) One more suggestion like keep enemy bullet and player bullet in different color. because sometime I thought i am firing but other enemy firing on me. I like the tutorial it is somewhat big but explain everything
May 4 18:55:16	22m 21s	Dance, Farm & Feed The Monster	♥ 2	I like the game. Good art. I like that how key press stay for some time than fade out it's gives user experience Screen Shot 2018-05-05 at 12.15.58 AM.png I thought i need to feed monster with meat. Form the image near to monster. but I cannot find meat in the ground than I see I need to feed it with candy. (I think you can remove meat image and put required candy Image there.) Great game 👍
May 5 08:46:17	13h 51m	7575	♥ 0	Great art, and Fun Game I found game is little challenging. but it's fine for me. In reality cow also moving same way. they never go as we intended. Few suggestion for future improvements 1) you can add power ups like freeze cow for few seconds in that position. and other power up like cow go towards grass. 2) you can tie down few cows with rope so they cannot move. You can make mobile game also. I think it's more suitable.(this is just suggestion from my end)
May 5 10:43:06	1h 56m	CardRacer	♥ 1	Good Concept As you said there many things you can add but for game jam it's quit good. One bug i found that I can click on opponent card deck so at one time opponent card all over but mine is remaining. Few extra feature come to my mind is 1) Card deck is different from the normal playing card. like Card have power ups like booster, Bullet, Jump, etc. 2) You can give choice to player like player can pick up 3 cards. and than he can select which card he wants to use so it's become semi random game. Keep working on this 😄
May 5 11:04:43	21m 37s	MowZTower	♥ 1	I like the concept Tetris survival. But I can't say that I fully understand the game. I try to survive as long as I can. But it's fun My score is 612. You can add like. Player can control monster instead of control blocks. 😄
May 5 11:27:47	23m 04s	The Tower of Glass	♥ 1	It's really great game All the SFX, particle effects, screen shake effects are great Turn based shooter It's become my favourite game Please make it full game and release it. it's great fun game. 😄
May 5 12:35:58	1h 08m	Mayor Metal Man	♥ 1	It's great. When I played it and first time I changed to FPS mode I am like 😎 It's cool. All the power ups really meaningful. Art is great. Voxel based characters and building really good. It's management sim. with some surprise
May 5 14:19:17	1h 43m	Xeonlock	♥ 0	It's good. You guys put so much effort in animations and sound. It's very detailed I really appreciate it. 👍 One quick suggestion for Game Jam make webGl or html build so more people can play your game and review it. it's really easy in unity. & add some screenshot of game in page. Here are few quick level design techniques you can improve in game. 1) Add ghost jump https://www.gamasutra.com/blogs/MarkVenturelli/20140810/223001/Game_Feel_Tips_I_The_Ghost_Jump.php 2) change the spikes where your player can die look different Screen Shot 2018-05-05 at 7.21.22 PM copy.png 3) In rhythm gameplay I just button smash. so there need to be some penalty for wrong button press. Game is great in current state 😃 Few screen shots of game: Screen Shot 2018-05-05 at 7.19.44 PM.png Screen Shot 2018-05-05 at 7.20.57 PM.png
May 5 17:24:52	3h 05m	Extreme Tower Fishing 2018	♥ 1	Great game Programming, Art, sound all things are great 😎 It's fun game.
May 6 04:52:21	11h 27m	Football Horror	♥ 0	Great game 😎 Yes, our ideas are little similar. It's really fun enjoyment to hit head shot. good funny animations. take ball and hot the zombie fills good. I would like to see power ups in this game like Fire shot(so everyone near to that shot are die) Control are great.
May 6 06:13:52	1h 21m	Late for Love	♥ 1	Great art it's really good fun game. It controls well, Nice story and mood setup. I think you planning for mobile release.
May 6 06:33:38	19m 46s	Story Collabs	♥ 1	Collaborate to create story. it will generate Funny story.(it can generate so many ideas for incompatible game genres) This is good thought process to improve creativity.
May 7 16:30:10	33h 56m	Witch's Escape	♥ 1	Cool Graphics. As everyone already suggested spam all direction button will break the gameplay.
May 7 16:53:42	23m 32s	Apostle: Vanguard	♥ 1	Amazing graphics It's Great game. I also have same problem as @bryceltaylor But it's one of the best polished game. Great gameplay also well mixed game genres
May 8 17:44:51	24h 51m	ShmuRTS	♥ 1	I saved galaxy it's nice combination of RTS and bullet hell(shoot em up) Good particle effects. As you mention in descriptions you don't get time to balance it. I think after balance this game become even better. And in between some planet we get boss fight.
May 8 18:26:10	41m 19s	Inky Dragon Inc	♥ 1	I really Liked your game. It's fun And it's well balanced and well written. I wonder why this game get no review. (I think you need to put images of game in the game page) Game looks complex at first it's not after 3-4 min in the game. Game systems and feedbacks are also working well (ex. if we given wrong command than also it displays it's wrong command) I earned 3200$ by selling ink, and have 4 employee Dragons working in Ink Factory 😎
May 13 06:05:39	107h 39m	Town Warfare (RTS Shooting!)	♥ 0	I liked it. 👍 It's nice concept & Level is greatly design You can add different mechanics as @ursagames said like 1) Policemen shoots automatics to nearby zombies. so it's more like RTS placing unit is important. 2) Add checkpoints like you can clear some path by placing unit in RTS mode and than go to some part of map in FPS mode. (if FPS player die you need to send other Player to save him) 3) (This is just idea come to my mind) Similar to overwatch style match where 2 teams. first we need to setup defence in RTS style mode and then select one player to go other player base and capture the flag. etc. (there will be so many combination can happen like you do not need to setup defence you just need to select all players and send them to attack in RTS mode)(while you need more accuracy and fast movement you can select one character and control in FPS mode)
May 14 17:54:53	35h 49m	Last Stand	♥ 1	I like it It's bullet hell management/RTS game. I didn't think game is frustrating. it's really 😎 Control are responsive. Good visual representation of bullet (I can clearly see red bullet speed is more than yellow) Nice RTS concept to build tower by using ore and metal so player needs to constantly searching for enemy and kill them and collects ore to upgrade. Advice: Take few screen shots/GIF of the game and post it in feed it's really help to get reviews. it's really fun game.