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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | ChloraVirgo's comment | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| May 1 10:47:18 | Holy Shit! A Spider !!! | ♥ 1 | Don't know, why you outed yourself of the Audio category, but it's amazing and hilarious. I like this game! | |
| May 1 10:59:48 | 12m 30s | Floraison | ♥ 4 | A very pretty and meditative game, totally see it appear in Steam or on mobile devices in future. |
| May 1 11:21:53 | 22m 05s | The World Outside | ♥ 2 | When one looks at such a nice screenshot he|she automatically has high expectations. Unfortunately the reality didn't meet mine. I hope the author will find this critic helpful for future projects or for improvement in this one. 1) The movement is not synchronized. When I push the button the heroine starts moving before her legs start moving. The same goes for the jump. 2) The gameplay and keys are not intuitive. After picking the key I walked to the gate and tried to search for the right key on the keyboard to push for the gate to open. Only once I found the right gate I realised it opens automatically. 3) The ninjas are impossible to fight, too quick. 4) It would be nice if there was at least some sound: for that you can record the sounds of nature and that would be effortless yet suitable. 5) No menu or "game over" screen makes the game frustrating, these components make the game cohesive, and it's worth to spend some time on them. Overall, I think this project can be finished in the future and would make a nice game. |
| May 1 11:49:39 | 27m 46s | A World in a Jar | ♥ 2 | I will definitely play it more. Best of luck to the author! |
| May 1 12:12:11 | 22m 32s | Den | ♥ 3 | Well, that was unexpected, but very fun! :) |
| May 1 12:51:20 | 39m 09s | The Epic Quest For The Mighty Croissant | ♥ 1 | I like this game! The only thing, that bothered me a bit was that it's hard to smash the enemies :) |
| May 1 17:02:14 | 4h 10m | Planet Desumaton | ♥ 1 | Love the mechanics, the graphics and the hardcore :) |
| May 1 18:13:55 | 1h 11m | Flatland | ♥ 1 | It's a very nice strategy game and I think it can be made into a bigger project! It would be very good and addictive on mobile devices. |
| May 1 19:53:01 | 1h 39m | Cosmonaut Pavel Tokarev | ♥ 0 | I enjoyed this game a lot! |
| May 1 20:03:34 | 10m 33s | Fast & Faeries | ♥ 1 | A really fun game! |
| May 1 20:12:47 | 9m 13s | Sticky Keys | ♥ 1 | Nailed the game, because I have keys missing on my msi laptop :P Jokes aside, this game is very good, I enjoyed it. Maybe adding a bit fatal errors for missing the correct keys or not being able to put the detached key in time would be even better, but for 72 hours this game looks good and cohesive. |
| May 2 10:33:02 | 14h 20m | From robots with love | ♥ 1 | I could not check this game and rate in most categories, because controller is needed. Versatility is very important for games. |
| May 2 10:51:04 | 18m 02s | Colorfly | ♥ 1 | Hello! I played the game, and I think it's a nice start! It can be used as a base for a future project and I hope it becomes a full game. It has many pros: the gameplay, audio, overall nice atmosphere. As for cons: a felt like the butterfly moved too slow and it was hard to control when playing the screen-scrolling parts of the game. And also a little extra features for the gameplay would be great. |
| May 3 09:37:46 | 22h 46m | Headspace | ♥ 2 | Well, that was a strange experience π But overall I think you did a nice job. I think, this game needs more storyline, because it's not obvious, that you touch upon such topics as depression and anxiety etc in this game. I like the black and white graphics, but the static objects were blurry and that wasn't pleasing to look at. I think you should try to make a polished project on this basis, overall nice job! |
| May 3 10:03:43 | 25m 57s | Too Big For This WorLD38 | ♥ 1 | Hey, I played the game and here are my thoughts. It well done visually, adding the cutscenes is a very good idea, but I think this influenced the quality of the game. First of all the size is too big (ok, maybe that was intentional) and even with instructions I was frustrated about what I should do. The sprites respond too slow to clicking the mouse, and I couldn't get into the mind of the smallest lizard because of that (or, that's not supposed to happen?) Maybe you should have payed more attention to the gameplay than graphics: for now there's no competition in the game and no visible aim to play it. Maybe you could explain a bit more, if I was wrong somewhere in my critics. Hope you work on this project more in the future π |
| May 3 10:32:17 | 28m 34s | [BOXAVERSE] | ♥ 3 | THIS IS MY FAVORITE GAME OF THIS JAM! Such a nice job! *When I saved the boy, and he started jumping, his mom said "Oh God Why" π* |
| May 3 11:07:49 | 35m 32s | Song of Fungus | ♥ 2 | A nice puzzle game! I think if you polish it a bit more it could be a good project for mobile devices, for example. I would recommend changing the fonts for the computer version of the game, because it's too large and wide and so hard to read on a big screen. |
| May 3 11:25:55 | 18m 06s | The Life Amoebic | ♥ 0 | This game is very atmospheric and I like the mechanics. I would be cool to add some levels and more features though. But for the 48 hours It's a nice polished project. |
| May 3 11:40:09 | 14m 14s | Why Go Outside? | ♥ 2 | I managed to become a survivor by just making games and watching movies in comfy clothes and sleeping. Well, not far from reality! βΊοΈ Good job! |
| May 3 11:54:56 | 14m 47s | It's A Small World | ♥ 3 | That is some David Lynch thing going on in the game π |
| May 3 12:05:33 | 10m 37s | Batter Bros. | ♥ 3 | Very good game with quiet a fresh concept and nice graphics and audio! Keep up the good work! |
| May 3 16:26:01 | 4h 20m | Puppy's World | ♥ 2 | Awwww, so cute! You should totally make a longer one! With different doggo adventures! |
| May 3 16:49:56 | 23m 55s | Human Tragedy | ♥ 1 | I like character design and especially monster design. And the plot twist in the end! :) I stumbled upon on little problem though - at Stones location, a monster can block the way if you killed him there, so you have to wait for him to wake up and move. I thought that it would be more logical to kill monsters, not to knock them down. And it's unfair: bats are killed, monsters are just out. Bats lives matter too π¦ π |