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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Reyn's comment |
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| Aug 24 19:19:00 | Kill All Fairies | Hi. I was trying to play this with a macbook pro track pad, it was impossible to kill all of them in 2 minutes :) Have a look at this video: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TlBR1z-ue-I] not that my game is a good example, but it feels like your game needs some differences somewhere. Nice menu, wish I actually spent time making one. Thanks. | |
| Aug 24 19:43:00 | 24m 00s | Host | I like the idea. Even though I understood the rules I kept making mistakes. Level 2 was easier than level 1. Thanks. |
| Aug 24 20:00:00 | 17m 00s | Shadow Nightmare | Nice. I concur what dalbinblue says about level design. Could be a great action puzzler. Thanks! |
| Aug 24 20:37:00 | 37m 00s | Monster Loop | I'v tried it on a galaxy note 4, for some reason it feels like my swiping doesn't do anything, did you make assumptions on screen resolution? The graphics and animation is great! |
| Aug 24 21:00:00 | 23m 00s | Monster Run | Is this a new genre ? The infinite faller ? :) I believe your tutorial and infinite options are the same. Score didn't seem to work. I would have added to the score each time a platform was stepped on or crossed. The wall side felt good. |
| Aug 25 08:04:00 | 11h 04m | MONSTERS CARD GAME | Some great art. Its not immediately apparent which card won, event though it should be obvious I think it should be shown. I think if you match the other player's defense it should count as 'no one wins'. Not sure what happens when you win, do we get that card added to our deck ? I think this video is relevant to card games: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TRHdIScOMWQ] |
| Aug 25 08:24:00 | 20m 00s | Run for you life! Monster! | Nice going. Like others say it gets impossible after 1000m. <br/> <br/>It seems difficult to ramp up ... difficulty with the few mechanics going on. Some stuff one could add: Shields you can use. Obstacles. Homing spears that might loop around and come back. Have some of the villagers run towards you, which you need to dodge or somehow attack. After adding some extra mechanics, watch this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LScL4CWe5E <br/>Yes there is never enough time :) |
| Aug 25 08:56:00 | 32m 00s | Don't Let Them Die | Excellent :) Makes me think of limbo. Maybe he is just dead ? :P |
| Aug 25 09:11:00 | 15m 00s | T.H.E.Y | Loved the art style. There seems to be an issue sometimes where bullets won't collide. Was the boss on the last level a dead cow ? :) Text flash past too quick, are you using the number of frames to time them ? Have a look at Time.deltaTime. |
| Aug 25 09:25:00 | 14m 00s | Loch Ness Monster : THE GAME | Excellent. One of them most polished games I'v played so far. Loved the art and the paralax scrolling. The story and art changes made me play the simple mechanic to the end. I agree with simon, twitter is for hipsters :P |
| Aug 25 09:45:00 | 20m 00s | Litch Defence | I don't typically play tower defency / resource type games, so I might not be your target audience. I liked the music, the art makes sense. Its a bit difficult to see the swordmen on the background. I'm having trouble building more swordmen, I built a new barracks because I thought that might be the issue, but did not resolve the problem. I think you probably have all the needed elements. Pacing is unfortunately very slow. Have a look at this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LScL4CWe5E |
| Aug 25 09:57:00 | 12m 00s | Madboss | Aaah, the boss monster, didnt even think of that one :) The art and animation is excellent. Just a shame there is no objectives there (I'm sure my boss would disagree). Maybe use the company $ revenue as score :P |
| Aug 25 10:06:00 | 9m 00s | The Devil's Daughter | Excellent |
| Aug 25 10:23:00 | 17m 00s | You are the Monster | I loved all the animation, it really makes the world feel alive. The voice acting was very fitting :) I had difficulty understanding the numbers at first. Nutrition should stay > 0 while aggression should be < 4 while improving strength. This video may or not be relevant to you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QCSXEKHL6fc |
| Aug 25 11:26:00 | 1h 03m | MOTHERTONGUE | Great game. The only thing that I would suggest is making the "containers" lighter so that we can see them more clearly, I kept trying to understand why my tongue gets stuck top right on level 5. Mmmm guacamole human babies ... Glad all the monster babies got to have a happy life :P |
| Aug 25 11:36:00 | 10m 00s | Denoky | Excellent, your block characters will be redefining my art direction for ludum dares to come ;-) I believe the reason it is more difficult than it should be is because there is not a warning to tell us that the enemies will start shooting, eg a blinking head, which may or may not be necessary ... |
| Aug 25 16:40:00 | 5h 04m | Sheep Hunter | Loved how you did the fire. The sheep movement is believable. The art look good. I tried several times to kill the last sheep but I just couldn't. There is an issue with clicking on a sheep sometimes and it seems not to be the trees that are in the way. If I had to change the control scheme I would make you eat a sheep on collision, that might take away some of the feeling of "the hunt", perhaps have a dedicated pounce button. Might just be because I'm playing on a track pad. Are the sheep different ? I swear the last one is slower to move out and quicker to go back. The game of patience :) |
| Aug 25 17:04:00 | 24m 00s | The Empty | We had the same type of idea. I liked your art! (Windows 10) |
| Aug 25 17:43:00 | 39m 00s | Werewolf Quest | Very very well done. I can see this on a 90s nintendo console. The only thing I didnt like was that I moved when I punched, then again it makes it more difficult... which is probably good. I got to the 2nd or so mage, where the moonlight got a lot less. I agree put the controls on this page. Thanks! |
| Aug 25 18:56:00 | 1h 13m | Duskwalker | Loved the art. It immediately made me think of strife (1996). |
| Aug 27 05:37:00 | 34h 41m | Monster is Life | Welcome :) Looking at your code the next thing you want to learn is data structures. If you like interactive fiction have a look at http://twinery.org/ |
| Aug 27 06:13:00 | 36m 00s | DestroyItAll | Well done, you have movements, collision, animation and what look like particle effects. The city destroying made me think of this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQJA5YjvHDU |
| Aug 28 05:42:00 | 23h 29m | YoU arE THe kiLLeR | Well done on the mood. Its almost the same type of game as sheep hunter. Have a look at how they did their fire: http://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-33/?action=preview&uid=12401. You'll get to kill some innocent people in my game too :) Here is a relevant video on scary stuff: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vSKtTBjSBg0 |
| Aug 28 18:13:00 | 12h 31m | Moon Muenster | I really tried figuring out how to shoot the cannons. <br/>Clicking on the cannon/crate doesn't give any feedback as to if the cannon has been selected. I'm not sure how to select a cheese weapon, is it by selecting the boxes at the top ? After selecting one of the boxes at the top I press space and then nothing happens. Have a look at this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QCSXEKHL6fc This is by far the weirdest game I'v played. Well done :P |
| Aug 28 18:43:00 | 30m 00s | You are the monster | I liked how you made some spheres look creepy. |
| Aug 28 18:56:00 | 13m 00s | Aaaaargh! Monster! | I found the other 'player'. Do I win ? :) Its a definite start to something. Hope you had fun! |
| Aug 28 19:40:00 | 44m 00s | Mash It Down | I like your trees. The camera movement in the intro is a nice touch. The audio fits the graphic style. Like the other reviewer said I'm not always sure which button will turn which way. |
| Aug 28 19:47:00 | 7m 00s | SchoolMonster | Sorry I couldn't figure out how to select my weapon. Is it the calk on the table ? |
| Aug 28 20:10:00 | 23m 00s | A day in the Life of a Ghost | Finally, a game I can finish :) Loved the somber fitting music |
| Aug 29 18:37:00 | 22h 27m | Insurgency Strike | Remarkably similar to Desert/Jungle strike. Had to watch a youtube video to see how its shooting worked. You'v had some great comments, I'll leave it at that. |
| Aug 29 19:11:00 | 34m 00s | Moon werewolf | Could be fun. I don't see a reason to hold in the mouse button. Have a look at Screen.lockCursor |
| Aug 29 19:37:00 | 26m 00s | 76 | Excellent. Would like to know if its actually solvable. |
| Aug 29 19:51:00 | 14m 00s | Abominable | Seems like the data folder is still missing in the windows version |
| Aug 30 09:42:00 | 13h 51m | Hymn of the Sages | Nice. Only issue I had was that it was too dark to find the second door at first. |
| Aug 30 16:39:00 | 6h 57m | Hue and Cry | Very well done. Besides mine this is the only game that I found that you are a monster because of something you'v done. |
| Aug 30 17:30:00 | 51m 00s | Changer | Well done. Played it to the end. |
| Aug 30 19:53:00 | 2h 23m | Over your dead body | I liked it, played to the end. Made me think of "Monaco". I agree the controls should not be relative to your direction. |
| Aug 30 21:16:00 | 1h 23m | The Slimy Jumper | Feels a bit too fast here. Might be that you are moving your objects X pixels per frame instead of per second ? I like the idea, I'm sure there are ways to make this more puzzely. |
| Sep 2 05:04:00 | 55h 48m | Open the door and smile | Nicely done. I tried to built a little emotional roller coaster myself. Liked the passing out effect. |