Corresponding by p0l4r 2021-04-30T19:27:51Z
I really love the idea, but the execution is lacking. As someone who often goes for the narrative fiction angle, I know how much time and effort the content creation part takes, and unfortunately, the fact that you didn't have that time really shows. A lot of sentences ended without punctuation or continued rather nonsensically into the next three "sentences," and some bits of writing just made very little sense.
I also think having to type every word, even when there were no choices, was a bit of a pain. I'd rather have been able to read the text and select a choice when it arose. I know you were going for a bit of a typing game, but since there was nothing else to the typing mechanic besides just continuing the story, I don't think it added anything for me.
Audio-wise, the typing noise was fine (which is good considering you hear it constantly), but the chime in the background got annoying very quickly.
That all said, I do think this is a really cool idea, and if you do come back to polish the gameplay and flesh out the narrative, I'd be excited to give it another go.