antarktis 2025-10-06 20:11
nice art！
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD58 → GhostWish
By nno1
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 390 | 3.51 | 34 | |
| Fun | 533 | 3.12 | 33 | |
| Innovation | 484 | 3.11 | 33 | |
| Theme | 574 | 3.34 | 31 | |
| Graphics | 123 | 4.29 | 34 | |
| Audio | 276 | 3.46 | 32 | |
| Humor | 378 | 3.03 | 30 | |
| Mood | 271 | 3.75 | 34 |
nice art！
Love the character art!!!
I enjoyed it, I liked the art. I wish there was a web version.
Cool, and it's localized too.
Loved the art and the vibes, why is it saying trial version in the corner?
镜头控制对我来说有点困难，但是有非常可爱的角色和渲染风格，让人眼前一亮！
Cute graphics and comfortable color theme. The platformer part is a little hard and lack of some exciting mechanism to attract player to continue playing. And at the very beginning, I lost my way and keep hitting air walls, I think this part has big potential to be improved. Snipaste_2025-10-07_13-48-01.png
What a cute game!! Apart from some operational issues ~! This is perfect!
@justuspan: This is really valuable feedback! I'll try adding some visual elements to represent the invisible walls. Since I'm not very experienced with level and mechanics design, I'll definitely study this area more in the future!
@b0guslaw: The "trial version" watermark seems to be automatically added when building the game in Unity 2019. I haven't figured out how to remove it yet...
@Moonblast: 因为是第一次尝试这种3d视角的游戏，所以没有做好，后面会尝试改进的！ @baluj: Since I don't have the WebGL module installed in my Unity, I haven't been able to export a web version for now...
美术&音乐&氛围：小清新+lowpoly，看着很舒服
gp：可拓展性和游戏引导是ok的，但是3D部分还需要改善，包括前面其他人提过的移动（现在的镜头相当于是反转Y轴，我个人不是很习惯只有开载具才会用这种控制，另外灵敏度似乎有点高不知道怎么回事）、3D的fov不足导致看上去略挤容易晕、跳跃逻辑设计可能有点问题（现在容易在边缘难以起跳，我玩跳跳乐真的容易红w）、最好能有个重置（现在摔下去已经放大的块会缩不回去，必须上去缩小、即又摔一次才能继续跳跃等等）。另外正好有个手柄就试了一下，你忘记标手柄的跳跃和交互了/笑
unity试用这个问题有点奇怪不知道你用的哪个版本，按说可以免费领个个人许可就不会有trial？我自己的2022lfs是没出过这种问题，还是经典被团结引擎坑了这种？
排开gp以外的部分我觉得还是蛮吸引人的，祝好名次！
Really cool and atmospheric art! Found it hard to Jump on columns while making them bigger/smaller.
The art direction is solid and super pretty! I like both the characters and environment striking colors but blended nicely. Gameplay wise though I think you need to add more things to keep people engaged when playing. It's kinda sad because everything is solid but players didn't stay because they might haven't realize how the game is played.
But overall it got a great potential, you did amazing job making this alone! So amazing Hope I can play other stuff made by you again in the future! Goodluck
@akuta-zehy :感谢游玩~很详细的反馈，原来这个视距会导致看的很挤很晕啊，虽然对我个人来说没有感觉，但是看反馈感觉很多人都觉得这视距会不舒服，是个值得考虑的地方，或许可以做一个调整pov的设置选项之类的。 /n 跳跃的问题可能是我设置离开地面0.1秒内仍然可以跳跃，应该是设置时间太短了导致离开平台后按下没有反应，应该给玩家更多的容错才比较好。方块的缩放确实没有考虑太多，重置状态是个不错的建议。手柄的跳跃和交互是做了的，编辑器里确实可以，打包的时候我没有试过手柄，所以可能是打包导出的时候出问题了？ /n unity试用水印好像有时候导出会有而有时候没有，不知道是什么原因，我在做游戏的时候好像会报错说是数据库出问题但是重新打开项目却没有报错了，我猜可能是这里的原因？
@nno1 额手柄那个是帮助没标（图示界面手柄没跳跃和ESC），无伤大雅的小问题。
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~~另外Markdown格式下换行是输入一个空行不是/n（？），br标在这里会被转义以防止注入所以也不行~~
被精美的画面吸引今来，就是感觉镜头控制有点奇怪，为什么鼠标向上不是抬头呢，欧莫，真的很美丽
@5757: 感谢游玩~因为我玩过的第三人称游戏是这样的www所以就按照那样子来做了，也没考虑太多，之后可能做一个镜头是否y轴反转的设置
Cute Cute Cute ! Nice art and shaders work. The gameplay is a bit hard with jumping. Great Job.
特别美丽的画风,特别可爱的小人!很喜欢!!1...但就是有点难操作,感觉镜头转得太快了TT
omg这个画风太萌了！！！！只不过打开后键鼠的视角上下翻转让我适应了好一会，镜头灵敏度有点高！但是画面太美太萌了！
好可爱的人物，好梦幻的场景！但是视角移动的方式好不习惯，拿完书之后晃了两下然后就此迷路了，不过最后还是找到路了。总之是非常美丽可爱的小游戏
美术超级可爱 好像在b站上刷到过老师做的游戏 很喜欢风格！（可惜电脑系统问题没有办法体验TT
YOOOOO adore the artstyle :) super cute visuals and cool platforming mechanic.
What a lovely little game! I absolutely love the visual style; nice work! I think there's a lot here that could be turned into something even better
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@thyoi AHHHHHH STOPPP!!! 😭 😭😭THIS IS THE CUTEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN! MY HEART IS MELTING! You didn't just draw this little one, you literally brought it to life! I'M OBSESSED!!!
@dengyixa @ciphereo @yurenhuo 感谢游玩！！关于操作方面因为是第一次做这种所以会有点问题！如果有更多建议也可以提出来！！非常感谢大家能花时间来体验我的游戏TT @mokukeki 没关系！！感谢喜欢！！ @furypn @patatje @monado Thank you so much for your kind words to all of you—I'm truly thrilled you're all loving the art style, and your encouragement means the world!
Amazing art!!!.
This reminds me of toho project fumo :smiley: Great work with the art! A little bit of work with the game feel would be great, but for your first jam submission not bad at all!
The art is sooo cute, 10/10 for the vibe! 好喜欢这种有点点复古梦核的氛围
Cute character and beautiful art style
The art is very unbelivable.Oh,and I see your vedio in bilibili.“https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1wCx7zME8w/?spm_id_from=333.337.search-card.all.click&vd_source=7a0934ac10b285d558a863fe3b8c9fbb”。This is the link. 这美术太棒了。真的超喜欢。我也有游戏在bilibili上，去看看吧，顺便给个好评。“https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1TBx9z7EGA/?spm_id_from=333.337.search-card.all.click&vd_source=7a0934ac10b285d558a863fe3b8c9fbb”
Nice art. Unfortunatly, I don't understand how to complete first level. Bored dialogs.
The drawings are so cute!
玩法上算是比较平常的3d平台跳跃，但鼠标默认反转y轴有点加大难度了（）另外跳跃手感上也比较僵硬。主角画风和抽帧3d动画也确实蛮可爱的，很喜欢。音乐音效有点塑料（）另外在平台跳跃那个场景里是不是忘记给音乐设置循环播放了，我这边好像只播了一次就停了。
The game captivates with its atmosphere, very cool work, well done!
Cute art style, wish the game was longer. Also the inverted mouse was driving me crazy since I'm not used to it but that's a very minor thing.
A very cute character, pleasant background music, and color palette. I also liked the surroundings. Unfortunately, I never figured out how to get past the ghost with the book; I couldn't jump from the first column to the second no matter what I tried.
I very much enjoyed how the game looks and feels! Very unique. I had some struggles with controls due to the inverted Y axis on mouse, but got used to it over time. Thank you for the game!
I love the artstyle sooooo much! Character design is so unique.
art style very cute and good looking, but i hate the camera and i couldn't fullscreen :(
Awesome art!