Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD45 → The Reader's Encounter
By xlomid
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 395 | 3.60 | 27 | |
| Fun | 604 | 3.20 | 27 | |
| Innovation | 165 | 3.78 | 27 | |
| Theme | 687 | 3.16 | 27 | |
| Mood | 113 | 3.98 | 27 |
Great idea for a game, got stuck on a few of them (mainly the first one since honing isn't a commond word for non-native speakers). Overall it works really great and the story is nicely written. I'd love to see the visuals fit the story tho, would be great!
Very good idea. If you would publish short stories like that you could actually grow a big fanbase with that! Love the Idea of Reading and reforming words from one to another sentence.
Really enjoyed it. It's a simple concept but it works well. With some illustrations and more choices it could be really cool! I did the game twice to see the two endings.
I don't know why, but I kept trying to place letters "between" letters instead of replacing them.
Really like it!
Nice idea. The music does a great job setting the mood.
I liked your writing and your game a lot! Thank you for making this game! Here! Have a joke!
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Really great athmosphere, and a very simple but effective way of engaging the player in the story! Some puzzles were quite tricky (for a non-native speaker), but the hints were useful. (I had to cheat on number 6 though, since I didn't know the word.) Overall, beautiful little story game!
This is very well put together, great ambiance. The pacing is uneven though, ideally the puzzles would start easy and get hard but I found it was all over the place. With careful balance this could be outstanding. Well done!
This was great! I didn't realize the end was a choice until after I made mine, but that felt right. :D
great ambient music it really does set the mood
What a great story you have written! And the gameplay itself is very addictive too. I was a little bit confused about how the letter movement mechanic works at first (i thought you just move the letters, not swap them), but besides that, it was a smooth and immersive experience, despite the minimalistic approach.
An inspired concept and executed so very, very well! Really liked the tone and the ambiance the words and the music set up. The idea to manipulate words was pretty engaging though it took me a moment to figure out you had to swap the letters rather than drag one between the others. Played it twice to get both endings!
Good intro a series of stories to come :D With 0some graphics accompanying this dark moody plot, it can definitely be a compelling miniseries. Congrats on the submission!
This is one of those games that can make me feel like a dumbass and a genius in turn. I also couldn't help but notice there are two possible answers for the final puzzle. ;)
Really great take on the theme. It's a very original idea and very well executed. As english isn't my native language I admit that I had to see the walkthrough to complete the game, but the narrative is so good that makes up. Good job!
This is awesome! What a great idea. It's a satisfying feeling to figure out the word and very rewarding to get more of the story - I really enjoyed that the new paragraph not only advances the overall story, but also that it comes between the two sentences and gives more context to the sentence you just finished. The writing was engaging, with just the right amount of intriguing details, and the overall feeling was very atmospheric. I also love that it's a game about playing with language and the story is about a reader.