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Dememtory

By tommislav

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall583.9522
Fun2193.5021
Innovation973.8522
Theme2783.7321
Humor3292.6821
Mood74.3022

Comments

vilcans 2018-04-23 09:53

Great mood! Very sad. It made me feel old and lonely.

I scored 4/4! :-)

It's fun with a console based game too, and it's not just normal stdin/stdout stuff either.

The feedback (or lack of it) to keypresses is a bit unexpected sometimes. At first I thought I should press enter after pressing a key, and sometimes it seemed like keypresses were lost if I pressed too quickly during the memory game, but that was probably because I pressed while the text was still appearing.

nicmagnier 2018-04-23 11:05

I was skeptic about playing memory in a console but I was hooked by the writing. Well done.

hypp 2018-04-23 16:07

As expected this was very sad indeed, but the mood was great. I really felt dark and sad. Played through all four endings. Well done!

knason 2018-04-23 19:38

Oh such sad game, you really got the mood right. I loved text based adventure games back in the days, so I got really exited when I saw what you was up to. I'm impressed of how it ended up! :-) Great job with the story!

nilstastic 2018-04-23 19:42

The dialouge is excellent, I played the game with some sort of narrator in my head which made it even sadder. Good work!

(my gf just told me that dusty was dead.. I missed that, and now I'm sad.)

toulou 2018-04-23 19:48

A great take on the theme. I really liked it, I love this kind of storytelling, and it's really well written, and incredibly sad. Like, the feeling is real. Sadly I didn't finished it, it bugged. I typed one number during the card game a bit before the game asked me, and now it's stucked. Aside from that, it's a solid entry, and definitely a great game.

nanda 2018-04-24 13:57

Turned out amazing

2018-04-25 11:19

Very well made game! I included it in my Ludum Dare 41 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look. :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pPm7OCu9cQ8

stending 2018-04-26 10:44

The writting! Really powerful, intriguing and nice to read!

Simple take on the theme, but it works perfectly fine!

Congratulations :)

jshaffer94247 2018-04-27 04:08

I'm laughing so hard I'm crying. I think I need to feed my cat. Or maybe I need to rate your game. No, I'm pretty sure it's the cat. This was an awesome game. I think I crashed the car but I can't remember.

arturasd 2018-04-29 20:10

Now this is how you make an amazing console game. I did not play through all the endings, but even after the first try it got me so hooked. I feel like you should write stories for some bigger games!

tommislav 2018-04-29 20:17

@arturasd Whoa! Thanks man, that was perhaps the nicest feedback I've gotten in a really really long time =D

cristiano-m-garcia 2018-04-30 00:13

Very sad game.

I find it very complicated games that only have text, but the story managed to hold me a lot.

I left my rating of your game, if you can leave your feedback in our game, Witch's Escape.

I hope you continue with the project.

https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/41/witchs-escape

norrimo 2018-05-01 15:34

Memory and Dementia. Well, a sad ironie of life. :o Interesting combination and the writing is good. I got the game over 'good ending'. I will try it again because I have this feeling that something is wrong there. :D

houruck 2018-05-04 22:06

I had to check it out after I saw your screen-shake post, you maniac. :)

random-thoughts 2018-05-05 11:02

@Houruck Me too! Although was a bit disappointed that it wasn't in the game the writing more than made up for it :)

tommislav 2018-05-06 20:54

@Houruck @Random Thoughts, sorry for letting your down. That screen shake effect was really cool, and I spent too much time during the compo to make it work. But in the end I couldn't find any valid use for it. But I guess the biggest issue was the lack of time. I'm really hoping I can put it to use in another project soon =) And thanks for playing!!

differentname 2018-05-09 22:44

Very sad and touching story. Kind of an unreliable narrator makes me wonder what really happened in my ending. Very good mix of games.

rjhelms 2018-05-10 02:45

Ah, this takes me back to writing console text games way back in the day.

This was phenomenal for building a mood, and like @differentname mentioned, the unreliable narrator was very powerful. Great job.

random-storykeeper 2018-05-15 19:47

This was pretty intriguing, and the text adventure portion of the game was a great format for combining these two genres. I was trying so hard to memorize the card orders for the memory part that I didn't pay enough attention to the story :rofl: but I got the sad ending where I died in the forest with my cat, so I guess if there's one way to go, it would be just that. Overall, I enjoyed it but perhaps I will pay more attention to the actual story next time lol.